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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 1:48:59 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai n kanwal ji, Aap ko mery ye kaawish pasand aai us k liye bohut mashkoor hoon aap logon ki...bas aap ko ghazal pasand aa gai aur mery mehnat wusool hogai..thanx a lot
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 20:16:02 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Uss ki aankhon nay kahi kesy kahani mujh say Raat bhar ruthy rahy neeend ki Rani mujh say
Mausam-e- hijr main mumkin hai mery yaad aaye Aaj tum lay lo koi taaaza nishani mujh say
Kiya bhala sochna, aur kia koi shajra parhna Uss k baray main suno baat zubani mujh say
Samnay us kay mein khamoosh khady rehty hoon Cheen li waqt nay kiun shola bayani mujh say Mashriqi ladky hoon,kirdaar nahin baichoon gi Chahty kiya hai bhalaa mery jawaani mujh say Hijr main uss ki jalun......... raakh ki surat bhikro'n Kis liye rutha hai saawan ka yeh paani mujh say
Wo dhanak rang ,wo khushboo tu kahan chodh aai Poochty hai yehi har shaaam suhaani mujh say
Mein tou haaatho'n pay hina rang liye bethy thi Hijr nay cheen lii poshaak bhi dhaani mujh say
Hijrato'n nay mery pehchaaaan mitaa dii neha Abb nahin hogi koiii naql -e- makani mujh say
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Post by neha on May 10, 2007 0:05:21 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai, Rafi bhai n Shahkaar sahab, Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya janab
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:57:17 GMT 5
GHAZAL Mast aankhon k seher say tou nikal kar dekho Khwaab baaton k asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Hoga maloom tumhain Rab ki kareemi ka asar Zarb-e- ehsaas kay dar say tou nikal kar dekho
Tum badal saktay ho in tund hawaou'n k mizaaj Gardish-e- shams-o- qamar say tou nikal kar dekho
Fikr-o- Idraaak ki dunya main nahin koi kami Khud farebi kay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Sabr tou aik riwayat hai.............hamaray jad ki Fitrat -e- zair -o- zabar say tou nikal kar dekho
Bol baaala hi rahay sach ka.....hamesha jag main Jhooot kay meethay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Pyaaar tou aik ibaaadat hai ...aur wasf -e- RABBI Bughz -o- nafrat ki dagar say tou nikal kar dekho
Ik naiii subha tery r aaaah main ho gii Neha Zulmat -e- shab kay safar say tou nikal kar dekho
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:49:54 GMT 5
Salam Razi Bhai, Aap ki ye nazam mujhay bohut pasand aai ..mery taraf say itny khubsurat nazam likhnay par daad qubool kijye.Thanx God k humara ye forum doobara say start hua mubarak ho aap ko bohut bohut...
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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 19:09:59 GMT 5
Nice nazam waqar sahab...daad qubool kijye
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Post by neha on Aug 11, 2007 22:24:22 GMT 5
Bohut zabardast kanwal ji:)....bohut hi khubsurat nazam hai ....itny acchi kaawish par mery taraf say dhairon daad hazir hai
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 22:54:04 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! Wah bohut hi khubsurat nazam hai hooriya ji, "Mujhay apna farz nibhana hai" Itny pyaari nazam likhnay par mery taraf se dhairoon daad haazir hai:)..aaainda bhi aap ki post ka intizaar rahay ga.. thanx 4 sharing .
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 23:17:39 GMT 5
Na muntazir hai aankh hi, na dil hi beqaraar hai Ke ab humeiN na aas hai, na koi intzaar hai
Mitaa hi daali zaat hum nay aap ke hi waaste keh rooH ko kya tumi ne meri aaj taar taar hai
Thay jis qadar bhi ashk wo baha diye tere liye lo mutmaain raho k dil humhara ghum gusaar hay
in ulfatoN ki raah meiN Sabhi ko milte khaar haiN khabar nahin kisi ko kion kathin yeh rehguzaar hai
Najaane kyuN tadap uthy haiN aaj bhi tire liye k dard jo dia tha tu ne ab to dil k paar hai
Sukhan meiN mere gham ko wo samo gaya kuch is tarah bas ab har aik shair main yeh dard aashkaar hai
Yeh teri yaad hai makeen e dil mire o hum nasheeN Ke jaise aik teer sa hai jo dil ke aar paar hai
Tatolne se raakh ko mile to ab mile ga kya ke kuch wafa ki gard hai ya dil ka kuch ghubaar hai
Main mar mitti to sirf main marooN gi us ke waaste khabar nahin kyuN use yuN hum pe aitbaar hai
KaNwal hai us ka saath kya, kaNwal hai uski baat kya Na jiska koi ehad hai na Qaul ya qaraar hai Kanwal ji , khubsurat ghazal ho aur us par presentation bhi khubsurat ho tou parhnay main double maza aa jata hai...mery taraf say dhairoon daad haazir hai itny acchi ghazal likhnay par:)
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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:50:01 GMT 5
Zabardast kanwal.....bilkul theek kaha aap nay ..itny acchi nazam k liye daad hazir hai janab
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Post by neha on May 13, 2007 2:21:55 GMT 5
Tarahi muqablay ki ye ghazal mujhay bohut pasand aai thi ..thanx k aap nay doobara isay yahan post kar diya ...itny khubsurat ghazal k liye aik baar phir mery taraf say daad hazir hai kanwal ji ..
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Post by neha on May 13, 2007 2:11:49 GMT 5
Nice nazam janab.. mery taraf say daad haazir hai itny khubsurat nazam par.
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Post by neha on May 10, 2007 14:54:41 GMT 5
Waqt ke saath chalo, rah bhatak kar dekho Behte paani ki taraH khud ko bahaana seekho Bohut khoob kanwal ji....itny pyari ghazal likhnay par daad haazir hai..
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:43:38 GMT 5
Wah Sunita ji, tere dard ka hai mujhe pataa,tere ashkon kii hai mujhe khabar kya kare `Nikhat` us dard ka,jo toofaan dil mai utha gaya
Bohut khubsurat ghazal hai mery taraf se daad qubool kijye.
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