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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 20:16:02 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Uss ki aankhon nay kahi kesy kahani mujh say Raat bhar ruthy rahy neeend ki Rani mujh say
Mausam-e- hijr main mumkin hai mery yaad aaye Aaj tum lay lo koi taaaza nishani mujh say
Kiya bhala sochna, aur kia koi shajra parhna Uss k baray main suno baat zubani mujh say
Samnay us kay mein khamoosh khady rehty hoon Cheen li waqt nay kiun shola bayani mujh say Mashriqi ladky hoon,kirdaar nahin baichoon gi Chahty kiya hai bhalaa mery jawaani mujh say Hijr main uss ki jalun......... raakh ki surat bhikro'n Kis liye rutha hai saawan ka yeh paani mujh say
Wo dhanak rang ,wo khushboo tu kahan chodh aai Poochty hai yehi har shaaam suhaani mujh say
Mein tou haaatho'n pay hina rang liye bethy thi Hijr nay cheen lii poshaak bhi dhaani mujh say
Hijrato'n nay mery pehchaaaan mitaa dii neha Abb nahin hogi koiii naql -e- makani mujh say
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 8, 2007 22:52:28 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Uss ki aankhon nay kahi kesy kahani mujh say Raat bhar ruthy rahy neeend ki Rani mujh say
Mausam-e- hijr main mumkin hai mery yaad aaye Aaj tum lay lo koi taaaza nishani mujh say
Kiya bhala sochna, aur kia koi shajra parhna Uss k baray main suno baat zubani mujh say
Samnay us kay mein khamoosh khady rehty hoon Cheen li waqt nay kiun shola bayani mujh say Mashriqi ladky hoon,kirdaar nahin baichoon gi Chahty kiya hai bhalaa mery jawaani mujh say Hijr main uss ki jalun......... raakh ki surat bhikro'n Kis liye rutha hai saawan ka yeh paani mujh say
Wo dhanak rang ,wo khushboo tu kahan chodh aai Poochty hai yehi har shaaam suhaani mujh say
Mein tou haaatho'n pay hina rang liye bethy thi Hijr nay cheen lii poshaak bhi dhaani mujh say
Hijrato'n nay mery pehchaaaan mitaa dii neha Abb nahin hogi koiii naql -e- makani mujh say murassa ghazal kahi aap ny neha ji tamaam ashaar khoobsoorat hain zameen achi hy aap ny isay nibhaya bhi khoob hy thanx razi
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Post by kanwal on May 9, 2007 0:58:45 GMT 5
bohat khoob neha jee ,....
daad ke dheroN guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 1:48:59 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai n kanwal ji, Aap ko mery ye kaawish pasand aai us k liye bohut mashkoor hoon aap logon ki...bas aap ko ghazal pasand aa gai aur mery mehnat wusool hogai..thanx a lot
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 1:50:48 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Neha ji dad hazir hay
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 1:53:10 GMT 5
Thanx Rafi bhai, Mein abhi aap ko msg karnay hi waali thi k mery ghazal par aap nay comments kiun nahin kiye but thanx 4 appreciating me.
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Post by azeezbelgaumi on May 9, 2007 2:35:35 GMT 5
khubsurat gazal...... m'aani afrini liye huye hai..... mubarak ho azeezbelgaumi
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 13:56:02 GMT 5
Salam Azeez Sahab n Sunita ji, Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya...mery ghazal main nikhaar aap sab ki rehnumai aur pasandeedgi ki wajah hi say aaya hai.. so thanx a lot 4 ur appreciation.
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Post by uzair143 on May 9, 2007 14:43:02 GMT 5
neha baji
kia khoob likha app ne daad qabool kare
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 13:25:36 GMT 5
Thanx a lot uzair
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Post by dilshadnazmi on Jun 12, 2007 1:19:55 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Uss ki aankhon nay kahi kesy kahani mujh say Raat bhar ruthy rahy neeend ki Rani mujh say
Mausam-e- hijr main mumkin hai mery yaad aaye Aaj tum lay lo koi taaaza nishani mujh say
Kiya bhala sochna, aur kia koi shajra parhna Uss k baray main suno baat zubani mujh say
Samnay us kay mein khamoosh khady rehty hoon Cheen li waqt nay kiun shola bayani mujh say Mashriqi ladky hoon,kirdaar nahin baichoon gi Chahty kiya hai bhalaa mery jawaani mujh say Hijr main uss ki jalun......... raakh ki surat bhikro'n Kis liye rutha hai saawan ka yeh paani mujh say
Wo dhanak rang ,wo khushboo tu kahan chodh aai Poochty hai yehi har shaaam suhaani mujh say
Mein tou haaatho'n pay hina rang liye bethy thi Hijr nay cheen lii poshaak bhi dhaani mujh say
Hijrato'n nay mery pehchaaaan mitaa dii neha Abb nahin hogi koiii naql -e- makani mujh say neha ji aap ki khoobsurat aur maa_ni aafree'n gazal pe meri dhero'n daad aur pur khloos duaa_ein hazir hain , qabool kijiye
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 11:53:34 GMT 5
Aik bahut mutassir kun ghazal, KhaaS taur per yeh ashaar:-
Samnay us kay mein khamoosh khady rehty hoon Cheen li waqt nay kiun shola bayani mujh say
Mashriqi ladky hoon,kirdaar nahin baichoon gi Chahty kiya hai bhalaa mery jawaani mujh say
Meri Khatoon-e-Khana ka kehna hai keh, bahut haqeeqat par mabni ashaar hai.
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Post by neha on May 24, 2008 15:42:06 GMT 5
Ok thanx Atif sahab, tareef ka bht bht shukriya aur specially thanx to Bhabi:)
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Post by suhelulfat on May 24, 2008 17:06:00 GMT 5
Har she'r qaabil-e-daad hai....sab ash'aar achchhe aur khoobsuurat haiN
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