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Post by hooriya on May 15, 2007 20:41:36 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai !
kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai !
kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai !
iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai !
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Post by kanwal on May 16, 2007 1:46:12 GMT 5
Umdaa hooriya ,.... Bohat hi khubsoorat si poem parhne ko di aapne ,.... Bohat bohat Daad ke guL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,.......
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 16, 2007 1:48:28 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! ØÙˆØ±ÛŒÛ Ø¬ÛŒ خوبصورت نظم Ú©ÛÛŒ آپ Ù†Û’ داد Øاضر ÛÛ’
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Post by sunita on May 16, 2007 3:42:41 GMT 5
Hooriya ji bahut achhi nazm kahi hai aap ne.
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Post by hooriya on May 17, 2007 2:08:33 GMT 5
Umdaa hooriya ,.... Bohat hi khubsoorat si poem parhne ko di aapne ,.... Bohat bohat Daad ke guL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,....... kanwal sisi... iss khoobsurat pholoon bhari daad k liye buhat shukriya
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Post by hooriya on May 17, 2007 2:10:19 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! ØÙˆØ±ÛŒÛ Ø¬ÛŒ خوبصورت نظم Ú©ÛÛŒ آپ Ù†Û’ داد Øاضر ÛÛ’Rafi bhai...nazm ko sarahne ka buhat shukriya..
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 22:54:04 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! Wah bohut hi khubsurat nazam hai hooriya ji, "Mujhay apna farz nibhana hai" Itny pyaari nazam likhnay par mery taraf se dhairoon daad haazir hai:)..aaainda bhi aap ki post ka intizaar rahay ga.. thanx 4 sharing .
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 26, 2007 0:16:03 GMT 5
hooriya ji aap ki nazm main ny pehlay roz parh li thee magar socha is nazm par kuch dinn baad reply karoon ga achi tehreer ka taqaaza bhi hota hy k us say lutf kasheed kia jaay so main ny aysa hi kia aik khoobsoorat nazm k jis ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaay kum ho gi
wah kia ghazab ki lines hain hoorya ji apni khoobsoorat poetry is bazm main parhnay ko dayti raha karain bohat lutf aaya is nazm ka thanx razi
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Post by maya on May 30, 2007 16:46:55 GMT 5
Hooriya Bohat khoob likha ap nay.khaial be umda hay aur ezhaar be aala daad qabool kejeay waslam fatimah
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Post by farooqi on Jun 3, 2007 23:12:54 GMT 5
bohut khubsurat hooriya g , zindagi ka safar umer ko ap nen bohut achay andaz men lafzun men peroya haa !
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:06:24 GMT 5
Hooriya ji bahut achhi nazm kahi hai aap ne. shukriya sunita ji
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:09:46 GMT 5
aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch lamhe an chooye se haiN mujhe un lamhoN ko basaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! kuch log haiN jinse milna hai kuch bataiN unse kehni haiN mairi neendaiN unpar qarz theen jo wo saari neendaiN laini hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! iss duniya ki bheed me ek hasti aisi rehti hai jo mairay dilme basti hai uss hasti k haiN qarz buhat kuch yadaiN uss se laini haiN kuch tehreeraiN usay deni hai kuch waday uss se lainay haiN kuch sapne usku denay haiN aur chahat k saaray badal ab uspar barsaana hai mujhe uska qarz chukaana hai aii umr e rawaaN aahista chal ! mujhe apna farz nibhana hai ! Wah bohut hi khubsurat nazam hai hooriya ji, "Mujhay apna farz nibhana hai" Itny pyaari nazam likhnay par mery taraf se dhairoon daad haazir hai:)..aaainda bhi aap ki post ka intizaar rahay ga.. thanx 4 sharing . iss hausla afzaai ka buhat shukriya
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:12:40 GMT 5
hooriya ji aap ki nazm main ny pehlay roz parh li thee magar socha is nazm par kuch dinn baad reply karoon ga achi tehreer ka taqaaza bhi hota hy k us say lutf kasheed kia jaay so main ny aysa hi kia aik khoobsoorat nazm k jis ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaay kum ho gi wah kia ghazab ki lines hain hoorya ji apni khoobsoorat poetry is bazm main parhnay ko dayti raha karain bohat lutf aaya is nazm ka thanx razi razi bhai itne bharpoor andaaz se sarahne aur hausla afzaai karne par main mutashakir hoon..ummed hai aainda bhi aapki hausla afzaai saath rahaygi
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:14:32 GMT 5
Hooriya Bohat khoob likha ap nay.khaial be umda hay aur ezhaar be aala daad qabool kejeay waslam fatimah is pasandeedgi k liye aapka buhat shukriya fatimah behen
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:15:50 GMT 5
bohut khubsurat hooriya g , zindagi ka safar umer ko ap nen bohut achay andaz men lafzun men peroya haa ! thanks 4 appriciation.
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