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Post by shahkar on May 7, 2007 18:39:37 GMT 5
qareen
kionkeh mehfil ka aghaaz kerna hay
lehaza socha aik nazm se ker dein, ik nazm hazir her,
wassalam
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Post by Tanweer on May 7, 2007 22:54:15 GMT 5
Waqar Masud sahib!
Hamien khawab-e-khargosh say jaga dein warna najanay apki purkaif nazm mein doob kar kahan say kahan ponch jaien gay....
apki janib say aik omdah nazm, lateef jazbon say mehki hoovi nazm, khawab khawab se .....
bohat se daad
Khair Andesh Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 8, 2007 3:09:57 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Waqar Masood Sahib dad Hazir hay
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Post by kanwal on May 8, 2007 17:22:17 GMT 5
Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Jis meiN ik tasveer ho Jo miri taqdeer ho Jis meiN phool gulaab ka raqs o qehr shabaab ka Lamha lamha saraab ka Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Wo khaab mah o saal ka Maazi, mustaqbil, haal ka Wo khaab hazaaroN saal ka Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Jis meiN roshan dhoop ho Aur tera rang o roop ho wo khaab chaand sitaaroN ka KhushyoN ka, bahaaroN ka Muhabbat ke gulzaroN ka Mujhe wo khab de do tum wo khaab in nizaroN ka jahaN chashma thande paani ka aur shezada kahaani ka jo maalik ho, parwaana ho apni roop ki raani ka mujhe wo khaab de do tum Mujhe wo khaab de do tum jis meiN ik tasveer ho wo jo miri taqdeer ho kuch aisi phir tadbeer ho iss khaab ki tum tabeer ho tum hi miri taqdeer ho tum hi miri tasveer ho Mujhe wo khaab de do tum mujhe wo khaab de do tum Bohat umdaa waqar jee,...
bohat hi achi lagi aapke yeh nazM ,...
daad ke dheroN phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 8, 2007 22:59:22 GMT 5
wah waqar achi nazm hy bohat khoob... khaab lay kar aakhir kia karain gy aap thanx razi
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Post by sunita on May 9, 2007 2:37:03 GMT 5
waqar ji nazm aap ne kahi aur uss ka roman mere liye meri pyaari si behna ne kar diya.sone pe suhaaga vaali baat huii mere liye, varna kaala akshar bhains baraabar vaali baat thi. aap dono ka shukariya jo itni khoobsoorat nazm padne ko di.daad haazir hai.khush rahen.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 12:00:44 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Waqar Masood Sahib dad Hazir hay
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Post by uzair143 on May 9, 2007 15:09:03 GMT 5
waqar sb
zabardast
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:40:03 GMT 5
Waqar Masud sahib! Hamien khawab-e-khargosh say jaga dein warna najanay apki purkaif nazm mein doob kar kahan say kahan ponch jaien gay.... apki janib say aik omdah nazm, lateef jazbon say mehki hoovi nazm, khawab khawab se ..... bohat se daad Khair Andesh TanweerTanveer bhai meri is adna si kawish per aap ke itnay hosla afzaa tasuraat aap ka be had mamnoon hoon, aap ne hosla afzaye farmaye, aap ka baraa pan, nawazish janab wmk
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:41:37 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Waqar Masood Sahib dad Hazir hay Rafi saheb hosla afzayee ka be had shukria, aap ka mamnoon hoon. wassalam
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:42:45 GMT 5
Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Jis meiN ik tasveer ho Jo miri taqdeer ho Jis meiN phool gulaab ka raqs o qehr shabaab ka Lamha lamha saraab ka Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Wo khaab mah o saal ka Maazi, mustaqbil, haal ka Wo khaab hazaaroN saal ka Mujhe wo khaab de do tum Jis meiN roshan dhoop ho Aur tera rang o roop ho wo khaab chaand sitaaroN ka KhushyoN ka, bahaaroN ka Muhabbat ke gulzaroN ka Mujhe wo khab de do tum wo khaab in nizaroN ka jahaN chashma thande paani ka aur shezada kahaani ka jo maalik ho, parwaana ho apni roop ki raani ka mujhe wo khaab de do tum Mujhe wo khaab de do tum jis meiN ik tasveer ho wo jo miri taqdeer ho kuch aisi phir tadbeer ho iss khaab ki tum tabeer ho tum hi miri taqdeer ho tum hi miri tasveer ho Mujhe wo khaab de do tum mujhe wo khaab de do tum Bohat umdaa waqar jee,...
bohat hi achi lagi aapke yeh nazM ,...
daad ke dheroN phooL aapki nazR ,...Assalam o alaikum aap ka be had shukria keh aap ne nazm roman mein bhi likh dee aur itnay acchay andaaz mein hosla afzayee farmaye, be had shukria
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:44:19 GMT 5
wah waqar achi nazm hy bohat khoob... khaab lay kar aakhir kia karain gy aap thanx razi Razi bhai khaab khaab mein aap dekh nahi rehay ham tasveer taabeer sab kuch hi maang rehay hein, bus jab hamain khab mil jaye ga to khaab denay wala khud bhi mil jaye ga ,thori si seyasat bhi to honi chahyee ishq mein be had shukria, aap ne hosla afzayee farmaye,
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:47:26 GMT 5
waqar ji nazm aap ne kahi aur uss ka roman mere liye meri pyaari si behna ne kar diya.sone pe suhaaga vaali baat huii mere liye, varna kaala akshar bhains baraabar vaali baat thi. aap dono ka shukariya jo itni khoobsoorat nazm padne ko di.daad haazir hai.khush rahen. sunita jee maazrat ke mein roman na likh saka daraslmein direct inpage mein likhta hoon to woh he yehan de deta hoon, INSHA ALLAH ayenda koshish keroon ka nazm/ghazal ka roman bhi de deya keroon, kanwal ji ka shukria neez aap ka bhi mamnoon hoon keh aap ne hosla afzaye farmaye
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Post by shahkaar on May 10, 2007 10:49:45 GMT 5
uzair saheb hosla afzaye ka be had shukria
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 11, 2007 18:35:50 GMT 5
BOHAT KHOOB .............. NICE SHEARING ALL THE BEST [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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