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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:57:17 GMT 5
GHAZAL Mast aankhon k seher say tou nikal kar dekho Khwaab baaton k asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Hoga maloom tumhain Rab ki kareemi ka asar Zarb-e- ehsaas kay dar say tou nikal kar dekho
Tum badal saktay ho in tund hawaou'n k mizaaj Gardish-e- shams-o- qamar say tou nikal kar dekho
Fikr-o- Idraaak ki dunya main nahin koi kami Khud farebi kay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Sabr tou aik riwayat hai.............hamaray jad ki Fitrat -e- zair -o- zabar say tou nikal kar dekho
Bol baaala hi rahay sach ka.....hamesha jag main Jhooot kay meethay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Pyaaar tou aik ibaaadat hai ...aur wasf -e- RABBI Bughz -o- nafrat ki dagar say tou nikal kar dekho
Ik naiii subha tery r aaaah main ho gii Neha Zulmat -e- shab kay safar say tou nikal kar dekho
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Post by kanwal on May 8, 2007 17:06:34 GMT 5
Bohat Umdaa neha jee,... bohat khubsoorat khyaal paish kiya aapne,... daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,....
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 8, 2007 23:00:12 GMT 5
aik aur achi ghazal zara mukhtalif aur mushkil radeef k saath bohat khoob neha ji thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 11:53:10 GMT 5
Aik aur Khoob soorat Ghazal Neha ji daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by shahkaar on May 9, 2007 22:38:42 GMT 5
neha saheba
umda ghazal kahi hee, buhut khoob, daad hazir hey
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neha
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Post by neha on May 10, 2007 0:05:21 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai, Rafi bhai n Shahkaar sahab, Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya janab
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Post by uzair143 on May 10, 2007 0:42:25 GMT 5
neha baji
Pyaaar tou aik ibaaadat hai ...aur wasf -e- RABBI Bughz -o- nafrat ki dagar say tou nikal kar dekho
kia baat hai is jumle ki.zabardast keep it up
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 10, 2008 19:36:50 GMT 5
Achchi ghazal hai, Neha Ji Daad hazir hai
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Post by naheedv on May 10, 2008 22:23:36 GMT 5
GHAZAL Mast aankhon k seher say tou nikal kar dekho Khwaab baaton k asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Hoga maloom tumhain Rab ki kareemi ka asar Zarb-e- ehsaas kay dar say tou nikal kar dekho
Tum badal saktay ho in tund hawaou'n k mizaaj Gardish-e- shams-o- qamar say tou nikal kar dekho
Fikr-o- Idraaak ki dunya main nahin koi kami Khud farebi kay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Sabr tou aik riwayat hai.............hamaray jad ki Fitrat -e- zair -o- zabar say tou nikal kar dekho
Bol baaala hi rahay sach ka.....hamesha jag main Jhooot kay meethay asar say tou nikal kar dekho
Pyaaar tou aik ibaaadat hai ...aur wasf -e- RABBI Bughz -o- nafrat ki dagar say tou nikal kar dekho
Ik naiii subha tery r aaaah main ho gii Neha Zulmat -e- shab kay safar say tou nikal kar dekho Neha jee, iss se qabl aap kaa kalaam nazar se naheeN guzraa. magar ye ghazal khoob hai. daad! aik baat kee taraf aap kee tavajjoh karnaa chaahati hooN ke aap ne matle' ke 1st misre' meN "sehr" ko "sehar" ke wazn par baandhaa hai, jis se misra' be-wazn ho geyaa hai. aap isey dobaarah daikh leN. aap aankhoN ke "sehr = jaadoo" kehnaa chaah rahi hain, jab ke aap ne misre meN "sehar = subh" baandhaa hai. shukriya Naheed
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