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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:18:59 GMT 5
Thanx Haseeb sahab, bohut bohut thanx nazam ko pasand karnay ka.
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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:17:24 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai , Aap ki pasandeedgi meray liye sanad hoty hai k mein nay waqai acchi nazam ya ghazal likhy hai ..thanx 4 appreciating me
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Post by neha on May 13, 2007 2:26:11 GMT 5
Thanx Sunita , Aap ki hosla afzai ka bohut bohut shukrya ...yeh appreciation hi hai jo doobara kuch new likhnay par uksaaty hai .thanx a lot
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 16:07:49 GMT 5
………………….HAIN KHWAAB SAARAY RAASTAY!!!!!!
Muhabbaton k darmiyaa’n……….. Hain khwaab saaray raasaty, Saraab saaray raastay, Azaab saaray raastay, Chalay thay jab safar pay hum, Baday hi khush gumaan thay, Baday hi shaadmaan thay, Youn chah ka khumaar tha, Har aik pal bahar tha, Ajab nasha sawaar tha, Kisi ka bas khayal tha, Ye man k youn nihaal tha, Bicharna bhi muhaal tha, …Magar humain khabar na thi, Hain kitnay khaar chah main, Kaii pahaar raah main, Bada kathin safar hai ye, Suhaab bin safar hai ye, Taveel dopeher hai ye, Kadi tamaam dhoop hai, Na chaoon jaisa roop hai, Phir aaye ga beher yahan, Jo aansou’n say hai rawaa’n Judaayon ki raat hai, Na chain na sabaat hai, Tabah bas hayaat hai, Khizaa’n bhary rutain hain sab, Pahaar din…k jaisay shab, Khabar nahin milay thay kab, Youn chaaye ghum k saaye phir, Khushi k pal ganwaye phir, Jo ashk youn bahaye phir, k..lab pay bas duaain thin, Na yaar ki wafaain thin, Na pyaar ki sadaain thin, Bas hijr ki ridaayen thin, Khataain hi khataain thin, Talab thi, jis ki pyaas thi, Milan k jis ki aasa thi, Wo chah kho gai kahin, Wo raah kho gai kahin, Bas ashk aankh say rawaa’n, Hain khwaab sab dhuaan dhuaan, Bhatak rahay hain hum kahan, Judaaiyan hain darmiyaa’n, Youn ho gaye hain bay amaa’n, K Lag raha hai ab yahan, Akailay mar hi jayen gay, Wo saath jo nahin hai ab, Tou uss ko kaisay paayen gay? Kahan say uss ko laayen gay? Youn hum tou jee na paayen gay, Akailay mar hi jayen gay, Youn ho chukka hai faislaa, MuHabbaton k darmiyaa’n…… Saraab saaray raastay, Azaab saaray raastay, Hain khwaab saaray raastay!!!
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Post by neha on May 16, 2007 20:03:34 GMT 5
Thanx a lot Rafi bhai, haseeb sahab, Aqeel sahab, sunita ji n kanwal, Aaap sab ki hosla afzai aur ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka shukriya.
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:48:55 GMT 5
Mein Jaanty hoon k, Tumhain mujh say Muhabbat hai, Tumhary aankhon mein, khwaabon, Tumharay saanson ki har dor main, Bas main hi basty hoon, Tumhary zindagee k har waraq par, Mera hi Naam likha hai, Mein Jaanty hoon, k tum.. Mera bin ik pal bhi, Jee nahin saktay, Magar mein kia karoon Jaanaan, K mein majboor hoon Jaanaan, Tumharay Dil pay likha Naam apna , Padh tou sakty hoon, Magar Un khwaab Lamhon ko, Teri Bayloss Chahat ko, Mein apna nahin sakty, K Mein Majboor hoon Jaanaan, Bohut Majboor hoon Jaanaan.
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:26:28 GMT 5
Khudari e hayaat ka ,.... « Thread Started on Today at 12:08am »
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"Khudari e hayaat ka sauda na kijiye" Duniya meiN apne aap ko ruswa na kijiye
Nazuk haiN kaanch se bhi humari yeh uljhaneiN TooteiN na sar pe aapke uljha na kijiye
Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye
Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye
Soghaat le ke rah meiN kab se khare haiN hum NazreiN chura ke aap yuN guzra na kijiye
Hum aa gaye jo zid pe to phir kya kareiN ge aap Aisa na kijiye are aisa na kijiye
Gir ke zameeN par choor na ho jaaye ay KANWAL raaste meiN dil ko yuN uchhala na kijiye
Kanwal ji...itny khubsurat ghazal hai k samajh nahin aa rahy k kaisay is ghazal ki tareef ka haq ada hoga....aur likhnay walay k baray main kia kahain janab .. aap ki poetry k tou hum wesay hi fan hain.n my favourite shair.....
Is dukh k zamanay main kanwal sab ko kaho tum Rotay huay logon ko hansa kiun nahin detay
mery taraf say dhairon daad qubool kijye .
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:11:52 GMT 5
Sahil sahab, Nice poetry.
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:35:05 GMT 5
Sahil sahab, khubsurat nazam hai..daad qubool kijye
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:00:06 GMT 5
Nice ghazal Sahil sahab, Bohut zabardast ghazal hai janab..daad qubool kijye.
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Post by neha on May 10, 2007 14:48:12 GMT 5
kisi tabeer ki khahish main yeh jeewan gaNwaatay hain agar ik khaab daykha hy to qeemat bhi chukaatay hain
hamaray is safar ka jaanay ab anjaam kaysa ho keh jo bhatky huay hain woh humain rusta batatay hain
ana, shikway, shikayat ,roothna ,naraz ho jana tumhain to yad ho ga hum yeh sab kuch bhool jaatay hain
humain bhi chaahiay sahib koi khil_at , koi mansab mahaz e jang sy hum bhi to bas nakaam aatay hain
hamaray paaon main rasta nahin hy bay qaraari hy agar bhutkain bhi to us ki taraf hi laut jaatay hain
razi hum ko khushi koi kabhi poori nahin milti yeh aankhain bheeg jati hain agar hum muskraaty hain
Razi bhai zabardast ghazal hai aap ki...itnay khubsurat alfaaz aur khayal k parh k maza aa gaya...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye.
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:00:32 GMT 5
Zabardast Rafi bhai...bohut khubsurat ghazal hai bohut khubsurat zamin aur khayal ...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye..
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 13:25:36 GMT 5
Thanx a lot uzair
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 13:56:02 GMT 5
Salam Azeez Sahab n Sunita ji, Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya...mery ghazal main nikhaar aap sab ki rehnumai aur pasandeedgi ki wajah hi say aaya hai.. so thanx a lot 4 ur appreciation.
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 1:53:10 GMT 5
Thanx Rafi bhai, Mein abhi aap ko msg karnay hi waali thi k mery ghazal par aap nay comments kiun nahin kiye but thanx 4 appreciating me.
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