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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 12:15:25 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 12:15:25 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat maiN is bazm maiN aik ghazal paish kar raha hooN arraa o tabsray ka muntazir hooN
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 12:25:10 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 12:25:10 GMT 5
Ahbab ki khidmat maiN is bazm maiN aik ghazal paish kar raha hooN arraa o tabsray ka muntazir hooN
Rewait maiN nai har roz ik tarmeem karta hay nay andaz say woh payar ki taqweem karta hay
laraz uthta hay pehlay to hawaoN ki siasat par dia jalta rahay to raushni taqseem karta hay
jo pehlay to bohat ilzam deta hay zmanay ko zmanay say magar thak haar kay tafheem karta hay
nia andaz hota hay hamaisha zulm dhanay ka ghamooN ki nit nai sorat main woh tajseem karta hay
hamaisha shak zada rehta hay jo meri wfaoN par yaqeenan dil maiN woh apna mujhay tasleem karta hay
machal uthta hay aksar raat ko tanhai maiN ziddi mra dil yooN to mehfil maiN meri ta,azeem karta hay
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 13:32:41 GMT 5
Post by azeezbelgaumi on May 9, 2007 13:32:41 GMT 5
Bahut Khub Rafi Bhai..... Kya kahne....... Subhanalla.... Bahut Achchi Gazal kahi hai..... Ji chah raha hai ke kuch sheir is zameen mein mere bhi nikal jayen....... kya khayal hai... azeez belgaumi
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 14:00:32 GMT 5
Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:00:32 GMT 5
Zabardast Rafi bhai...bohut khubsurat ghazal hai bohut khubsurat zamin aur khayal ...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye..
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 22:42:06 GMT 5
Post by shahkaar on May 9, 2007 22:42:06 GMT 5
wah wah wah
janab e rafee saheb
buhut khoob, aap ki thori si shairi mein ne parhee he pehlay, lekin yeh ghazal to sab se barh ker he, buhut umdah, aur munfarid qafyaay ke saath, meray pass alfaz nahi hein itni acchi ghazal prt sahee terah apnay tasurat beyaan kernay ke leye,
aap ki koye kitab shaye hoye he abhee tak???
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 23:04:37 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 23:04:37 GMT 5
Bahut Khub Rafi Bhai..... Kya kahne....... Subhanalla.... Bahut Achchi Gazal kahi hai..... Ji chah raha hai ke kuch sheir is zameen mein mere bhi nikal jayen....... kya khayal hai... azeez belgaumi Hausla afzai ka shukria Aziz Belgrami Sahib
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 23:10:51 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 23:10:51 GMT 5
Zabardast Rafi bhai...bohut khubsurat ghazal hai bohut khubsurat zamin aur khayal ...mery taraf say daad qubool kijye.. bohat bohat shukria izat afzai ka Neha Ji
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Ghazal
May 9, 2007 23:20:16 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 23:20:16 GMT 5
wah wah wah janab e rafee saheb buhut khoob, aap ki thori si shairi mein ne parhee he pehlay, lekin yeh ghazal to sab se barh ker he, buhut umdah, aur munfarid qafyaay ke saath, meray pass alfaz nahi hein itni acchi ghazal prt sahee terah apnay tasurat beyaan kernay ke leye, aap ki koye kitab shaye hoye he abhee tak??? bohat bohat shukria Waqar Masood Khan Sahib meri urdu ghazalooN ka majmooa {KirchiaN Halaat Ki} 1995 maiN shaia ho chuka hay meri ketab ka debacha muhtarema Banu Qudsia aur aziz dost jnab Aslam kolsari nay likha tha jabkeh back flap muhtaram Ashfaque Ahmad sahib nay likha tha
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Ghazal
May 10, 2007 1:04:50 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 10, 2007 1:04:50 GMT 5
wahhh,...
Bohat dilfarebi hai aapki sukhanwari meiN ,...
parh ke dil baagh baagh ho jaata hai aur phir ussi baagh ke guL daad ki soorat paish karne ko jee chahta hai,.......
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Ghazal
May 10, 2007 1:27:58 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 10, 2007 1:27:58 GMT 5
daad bhi mukhtalif andaz main milti hay mukhtalif logooN say Kanwal ji aap ki daad nay hamain bhi baagh baagh kar dia bohat bohat shukria
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Ghazal
May 14, 2007 16:28:15 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on May 14, 2007 16:28:15 GMT 5
nia andaz hota hay hamaisha zulm dhanay ka ghamooN ki nit nai sorat main woh tajseem karta hay
boaht munfarid andaz hay aap ka rafi sahib zameen bhi bohat khoob nikaali aap ny thanx razi
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Ghazal
May 14, 2007 16:30:50 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 14, 2007 16:30:50 GMT 5
Shukria Razi bhai himat afzai ka
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Ghazal
May 9, 2008 13:00:56 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 13:00:56 GMT 5
Rafi saheb aap kafi khoobsoorat aur mushkil qafiay baRi kaamyaabi kay saath istemaal kartay hai. KhaSooSi daad kay haqdaar haiN aap.
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Ghazal
Jun 5, 2008 23:34:12 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 5, 2008 23:34:12 GMT 5
Shukria Mirza sahib
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