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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 16:07:49 GMT 5
………………….HAIN KHWAAB SAARAY RAASTAY!!!!!!
Muhabbaton k darmiyaa’n……….. Hain khwaab saaray raasaty, Saraab saaray raastay, Azaab saaray raastay, Chalay thay jab safar pay hum, Baday hi khush gumaan thay, Baday hi shaadmaan thay, Youn chah ka khumaar tha, Har aik pal bahar tha, Ajab nasha sawaar tha, Kisi ka bas khayal tha, Ye man k youn nihaal tha, Bicharna bhi muhaal tha, …Magar humain khabar na thi, Hain kitnay khaar chah main, Kaii pahaar raah main, Bada kathin safar hai ye, Suhaab bin safar hai ye, Taveel dopeher hai ye, Kadi tamaam dhoop hai, Na chaoon jaisa roop hai, Phir aaye ga beher yahan, Jo aansou’n say hai rawaa’n Judaayon ki raat hai, Na chain na sabaat hai, Tabah bas hayaat hai, Khizaa’n bhary rutain hain sab, Pahaar din…k jaisay shab, Khabar nahin milay thay kab, Youn chaaye ghum k saaye phir, Khushi k pal ganwaye phir, Jo ashk youn bahaye phir, k..lab pay bas duaain thin, Na yaar ki wafaain thin, Na pyaar ki sadaain thin, Bas hijr ki ridaayen thin, Khataain hi khataain thin, Talab thi, jis ki pyaas thi, Milan k jis ki aasa thi, Wo chah kho gai kahin, Wo raah kho gai kahin, Bas ashk aankh say rawaa’n, Hain khwaab sab dhuaan dhuaan, Bhatak rahay hain hum kahan, Judaaiyan hain darmiyaa’n, Youn ho gaye hain bay amaa’n, K Lag raha hai ab yahan, Akailay mar hi jayen gay, Wo saath jo nahin hai ab, Tou uss ko kaisay paayen gay? Kahan say uss ko laayen gay? Youn hum tou jee na paayen gay, Akailay mar hi jayen gay, Youn ho chukka hai faislaa, MuHabbaton k darmiyaa’n…… Saraab saaray raastay, Azaab saaray raastay, Hain khwaab saaray raastay!!!
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Post by kanwal on May 8, 2007 17:24:01 GMT 5
bohat umdaa neha jee,.... Daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 9, 2007 12:26:06 GMT 5
Neha ji aap ki nazm bhi khoobsoorat hoti hay
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Post by uzair143 on May 9, 2007 14:35:25 GMT 5
neha baji
bout zabardest.daad kabool kigey
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Post by neha on May 13, 2007 2:26:11 GMT 5
Thanx Sunita , Aap ki hosla afzai ka bohut bohut shukrya ...yeh appreciation hi hai jo doobara kuch new likhnay par uksaaty hai .thanx a lot
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 13, 2007 14:15:32 GMT 5
neha ji bohat shaandaar andaz hy nazm main jo rawani hay aur jo funkarana mahaarat nazar aati hy us nay khaas taur par mutaasar kia bohat khoob thanx aur han main isay andaaz e bayan main shift kar raha hoon razi
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 14, 2007 13:49:17 GMT 5
………………….HAIN KHWAAB SAARAY RAASTAY!!!!!!
Har aik pal bahar tha, Ajab nasha sawaar tha, Kisi ka bas khayal tha, Ye man k youn nihaal tha, Bicharna bhi muhaal tha,!!! NICE POEM ............ NEHA JE KEEP IT UP ....... BE HAPPY ALL THE BEST [/COLOR]
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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:17:24 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai , Aap ki pasandeedgi meray liye sanad hoty hai k mein nay waqai acchi nazam ya ghazal likhy hai ..thanx 4 appreciating me
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Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:18:59 GMT 5
Thanx Haseeb sahab, bohut bohut thanx nazam ko pasand karnay ka.
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 19:25:15 GMT 5
Thanx Haseeb sahab, bohut bohut thanx nazam ko pasand karnay ka. U WEL COME JEE ............. BE HAPPY
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 5:29:06 GMT 5
Wah Neha ji! Bus kahiN kahiN wazan say out ho rahay haiN aik dau misray.
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