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Post by neha on May 24, 2008 3:29:35 GMT 5
Assalam o alaikum Ramish sahab, aap ki shairy k tou hum shuroo say fan hain ..bohut khubsurat ghazal hai hamesha ki tarhan.. Sehar ke lout anay me abhi kuch dair baqi hai Sitara akhri shab ka chamakta he nigaho'n main
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Post by neha on May 24, 2008 3:23:42 GMT 5
Salam, aap ka kalaam aaj first time padha aur bht lutf aya...bht manjhi hui aur khubsurat shairy hai..
MaiN apni soch ka izhaar bhi na kar paya ZabaN ka hotay huway bay-zabaan tha maiN bhi
wese tou poory ghazal acchi hai but ye shair bohut zabardast hai
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Post by neha on May 23, 2008 22:31:42 GMT 5
Ik pagal sii wo larki thi, Rangon se khaila karty thi, Khushbu ki batain karty thi, Chahat k sundar sapno'n ko, Lafzo'n main piroya karty thi, Phir beth k apni sakhiyo'n ko , Wo ghazal sunaya karty thi, Barsat main barish ki boondain, Hathon se uchala karty thi, Aur chandni raato'n main aksar, Bas chand ko daikha karty thi, Khud se hi batain karty thi, Shayad man hi man main koi, Sapno'n ki maala bunty thi, Lekin uss ko maloom na tha, Jis dunya ki wo baasi hai, Wo insaano'n ki dunya hai, Koi khwaabo'n ki nagri tou nahin, Jahan har koii bas Sapno'n se , Apni basty taameer karay, Bas phir kia tha ik din yunhi, Sab sapnay uss k choor huay, Wo khushbu, barish , rang, hawa, Wo chand,ghazal,sapnay saaray, Ik deewani ka khwab huay, Ab uss ki weera'n aankhon main, Koi khwab nahin, koi aaas nahin, Ik khamushi sannata hai, Han ye chup chup aankhain bas, Har aik se poocha karty hain, Wo pagal si jo larki thi, Rangon se khaila karty thi, Khushbu ki batain karty thi, Chahat k Sapnay bunty thi, Wo kis dunya ki BAASI thi?
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Post by neha on May 23, 2008 21:29:31 GMT 5
Assalam o alaikum Atif Sahab, Thanx 4 appreciation.......Actually kuch masrufiat ziada thi thats y yahan iss forum se ghair hazir rahy...ab Inshallah ap sab ko kuch new kavishain padhnay ko milain gi ...
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Post by neha on May 23, 2008 21:07:11 GMT 5
Salam Kanwal ji, How r u? ?/ Aaap ki ghazal padhi n so impressed ...bht khubsurat ghazal hai Mashallah,,,,,,,,,,, Mery taraf se dhairon daad hazir hai Janab
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Post by neha on May 20, 2007 21:10:55 GMT 5
INNA LILLAAH E WA INNA ELEIH E RAAJEOON Muhatarma Parveen javed sahiba k intiqal really adab ka aik bohut bara nuqsaan hai..Aur 2nd wo mery rishtay main moomani hoty thin tou is liye bhi bohut ziada afsos hua .Allah unhain apnay jawar-e- rehmat main jaga day AAAMEEN SUMMA AAMEEN
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 2:03:32 GMT 5
INNA LILLA HE WA INNA ELEHE RAJEOON
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Post by neha on Aug 4, 2007 16:25:54 GMT 5
SALAM TO ALL, AAP SAB KI MUBARAKBAAD KA BOHUT BOHUT SHUKRIYA.MEIN KUCH BUSY SO YAHAN NA ASAKY ...AAJ ONLINE AAI TOU AAP SAB K MUHABBAT BHARY WISHES DEKHIN...THANX A LOT:)
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 23:25:59 GMT 5
Welcome Sada ji:)
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Post by neha on May 21, 2007 23:24:22 GMT 5
Salam Muzaffar Sahab, Is new forum main aap ko bohut bohut khushamdeed.
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:12:48 GMT 5
Kanwal ji , sukhanwar k is new forum par khushamdeed.
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:08:39 GMT 5
Welcome Noshi ji, Mein tou mehdood say lamhon main mili thi us say Phir bhi wo kitny wazahat say mujhay sochta hai
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:19:56 GMT 5
Sunita ji, Sukhanar k is new forum par welcome .
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:22:49 GMT 5
WELCOME Ramish ji
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Post by neha on May 9, 2007 14:10:26 GMT 5
Rafi bhai....Is new forum par aap ko khushamdeed.
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