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Post by ramishjaan on May 16, 2008 21:39:48 GMT 5
AOA sukhanwar ke muzaaz sathio,n kafi arse ke bad apni kisi shikasta si tehreer ke sath bazm me hazir ho,n aik ghazal ap ki biasarto ki nazr ap ki qeemti ara ka intzar rahe ga waslam mukhlis ramishjaanHareem e sham ka manzar chamakta he nigaho,n me Yeh kis ki yad ka darya machalta he nigaho,n me Gulabo,n ke jazeere me akele beth kar aksar Tumhri soch ka peekar nikharta he nigaho,n me Jise hum umr bhar dekha kiye apne kehyalo me Wohi ik naqsh sadio,n ka bikharta he nigaho,n me Me jab bhi rat jagi ki chandni me raqs karta ho,n Kisi ka Aaks chupke se utarta he nigaho,n me Wo naz e dil jaha bhi rahe qarar e ja,n hi rehta he Gulabi sa wohi chehra sanwarta he nigaho,n me Sehar ke lout ane me abhi kuch deer baqi he Sitara akhr e shab ka chamakta he nigaho,n me Huamra khuab shayed ho raha he munkashif ramish Tumhare khuab ka parto ubharta he nigaho,n me
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 16, 2008 22:42:47 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal Ramish ji
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Post by ramishjaan on May 17, 2008 23:57:27 GMT 5
AOA dr sahib bohat shukriya ap ki yeh hosla afzei mere liye bohat ehmiyat ki haiml hoti he shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Tanweer on May 18, 2008 9:01:27 GMT 5
Ramish Bhaee!
Bohat he khoobsurat aur omdaah ghazal apki janib say, jis say aapki khoobsurat shakhsiyat ka "aaks utTarta hay nigahon mEin".
Daad k phool, patiyaan, aur haar hazir hain.
Tanweer
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 13:01:41 GMT 5
raamish sahib khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap ny wah wah lutf aa gia
Sehar ke lout ane me abhi kuch deer baqi he Sitara akhr e shab ka chamakta he nigaho,n me
wah wah janab khoobsoorat baat ki aap nay thanx razi
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Post by neelofar on May 18, 2008 14:16:49 GMT 5
salam ramish bhaijan!!!!! ALLAH KRE ZOR E QALAM AOR ZIADA....ghisa pita misra hai mager eik bhan ki traf se bhai k liye dil ki ghraaiyon se nikli hoi duaa hai..aap ki guzashta kisi bhi mail ka jawab na de saki...iss k liye behad moazret aap ki sehat kaisi hai? apne bare me kya btaaon yahi k............. DARD K MARHALEY BOHAT SE HAIN SAREY RESTON SE MAIN GUZER AAI ISSI LIYE AB SOCHA HAI APNA MIDDLE NAME""derd"" rakhlon zindagi bakhair....phir milen ge .... ALLAH HAFIZ
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tarana
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Post by tarana on May 18, 2008 16:09:25 GMT 5
Salamz, umda ghazal perhnay ko mili shukriya !!!
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Post by ramishjaan on May 18, 2008 19:49:19 GMT 5
AOA tanweer bhai bohat shukriya ap ki mohabto ka ap ko ghazal pasadn aei mere liye ezaaz he waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 18, 2008 19:51:20 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai aj ap ne jis pur josh andaz me mujhe dad di he meri himat himalya jesi buland ho gai bohat shukriya ,mamno,n ho,n ap ki in mohabato ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 18, 2008 19:55:29 GMT 5
AOA neelofer sis zahe naseeb ap ki tashreef awari mere liye ese hi jese tapte sehra me mamta ki chao.n mouyasaer agai ho ............... neelofar behna jumla kitna bhi porana kio,n n aho jab us me behan ki duaa ka jazba sahmil ho jata he to wo asma,n ke kisi sitare ki manand chamakta he me ap se rabta nahi kar saka magar ap ki kheriyat se agahi hasil karta raha ho,n aur gahe gahe salam ka tohfa bhi ap tak pohnchata raha ho,n ap ko ghazal pasand aei is ke liye bohat bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ap ka bhai ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 18, 2008 19:56:51 GMT 5
Salamz, umda ghazal perhnay ko mili shukriya !!! wa lekum salam shukriya ghazal ki umadgi ko sarhane ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by waqaar on May 19, 2008 16:11:59 GMT 5
RaamiSh bh~aa,i! itnay 'arSay baa'd aaye umeed hay sab bakher hay. aapki ghazal hamaiShah ki t^arah hii bahut munfarid hay. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by ramishjaan on May 20, 2008 1:01:32 GMT 5
AOA waqar bhai bohat mamn,n ho,n ap ki mohabto ka bas takheer hoi to kuch bayese takheer bhi tha kuch zindagi ki mushklat ese apne jlo me le kar chal rahi hain ke kuch likhne ko na jee chahta he aur na itna teim milta he ke kuch likhe bas kabhi kabhi agar kuch atta ho jaye to ap ki khobsorat bisarto ki nazr kar deta hon ghazal ap ko pasand aei bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 21, 2008 16:43:21 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai pehlay tau taakheer ki maazrat keh aap ki ghazal aaj paRh raha hooN. Maza aa gayaa itni khoobsoorat ghazal paRh kar. Wallah kia kamal ki shaeri hai. Meri jaanib say daad-o-tehseen kay doNgray.........
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Post by ramishjaan on May 22, 2008 1:22:00 GMT 5
AOA Atif bhai bohat bohat shukriya ap ki is pur khlos dad ke liye hazoor takheer ho gai koi bat nahi ho jata he masrofiyat ke sabab shukar he ke ap tashreef laye aur itni khobsort aur pur khlos dad se nawaza mujhe jis ke liye me bohat mamno,n hon ap ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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