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Post by kanwal on May 23, 2008 1:47:19 GMT 5
Aik adnaa si kaavish aapki nazR ,.... Jiss din se mere dard ki humraaz hai chaahat Jo gham bhi mile soch ki parwaaz hai chaahat Jo dard bhi mehsoos hua karta hai dil ko Uss dard meiN palta hua har naaz hai chaahat Yeh jaan nikalati hai jahaN yaar wahaN se Ik silsila e wasl ka aghaaz hai chaahat Iss zeest ka har din hai uss hi zaat ki nemat Har din pe uss hi zaat ka ejaaz hai chaahat Sukh chain kahiN hai to kahiN hai to kahiN karb ka hai bain Sar basta hai jo aaj bhi wo raaz hai chaahat Ma´doom hue jaate asaar hayaa ke Lagta hai har ik aankh se naraaz hai chaahat Tum rooH ki gehraayee se gar iss ko suno to Dil saaz hai aur saaz ki aawaaz hai chaahat Marte haiN kaNwal gar to mohabbat ki adaa meiN Jeete haiN to jeene ka bhi har andaaz hai chaahat
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 23, 2008 19:43:16 GMT 5
kanwal aap ki ghazal achi lagi hum ny multan wali taqreeb main bhi yeh suni thee tamaam ashar achay hain magar aap ki baaqi poetry k muqaablay main yeh zara kamzor ghazal hy shaid is ki aik waja yeh ho k chaahat radeef rakhnay k baad aap ki ghazal k mazameen main yaksaaniat aa gain aik shair par mujhay aytraz hay
Iss zeest ka har din hai uss hi zaat ki nemat Har din pe uss hi zaat ka ejaaz hai chaahat
aap nay dono misron main laf us hi istamaal kia hy aap yahan kehna to usi chaahti hain magar wazan poora karnay k liay aap ko us hi kehna par gia ye munasib is liay nahi k hum ye lafz USI istamal kartay hain US HI nahi isay drust kar lijiay bazi theek hy thanx razi
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Post by neha on May 23, 2008 21:07:11 GMT 5
Salam Kanwal ji, How r u? ?/ Aaap ki ghazal padhi n so impressed ...bht khubsurat ghazal hai Mashallah,,,,,,,,,,, Mery taraf se dhairon daad hazir hai Janab
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 23, 2008 23:41:05 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhhh
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Post by suhelulfat on May 24, 2008 15:41:18 GMT 5
ek-ek she'r naayaab bahut achchhii ghazal kahii hai!
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