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Post by sunita on May 8, 2007 3:43:33 GMT 5
Ek pooraani ghazal unn dinnoN ki jab behr ka ilm nahin tha, socha aap ke saath share ki jaaye taaki pooraani yaadain taaza ho jaayen. kisii bewafaa ki yaad meiN,tera dard mujh ko rulaa gayaa jis ka pataa mujhe na thaa,use duniya ko dikhaa gayaa jo dabi huii thii ujaad main na pataa tha jinka kabhi mujhe un yadon ko naa janne kab, kayii aandhiyon se udaa gaya meri zindagi bhi meri tarah asbaab hai dhondhti roz roz chah kar bhulaayegi kaise, jo nazar se usko giraa gaya kya milega zakham kured kar,kyun afsos ho kisii baat ka hai koi yahaan jise apna kahuun,i`tibaar sab se chala gaya tere dard ka hai mujhe pataa,tere ashkon kii hai mujhe khabar kya kare `Nikhat` us dard ka,jo toofaan dil mai utha gaya
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 8, 2007 3:51:44 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Sunita ji dad qabool farmaiay
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Post by neha on May 8, 2007 15:43:38 GMT 5
Wah Sunita ji, tere dard ka hai mujhe pataa,tere ashkon kii hai mujhe khabar kya kare `Nikhat` us dard ka,jo toofaan dil mai utha gaya
Bohut khubsurat ghazal hai mery taraf se daad qubool kijye.
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Post by kanwal on May 8, 2007 17:25:27 GMT 5
didi rona nahiN ,....... warna maarooN gi,.......... bohat umdaa ghazl didi ,... dil ke gulshan ke saare gul aapke liye,....
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Post by shahkaar on May 8, 2007 20:11:05 GMT 5
sunita ji
acchi ghazal he
aghaaz ki shairi aap ke pasand ayee
daad qubool kerain
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Post by uzair143 on May 8, 2007 23:42:15 GMT 5
sunita ji
zabardast
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Post by hooriya on May 15, 2007 14:39:00 GMT 5
kya milega zakham kured kar,kyun afsos ho kisii baat ka hai koi yahaan jise apna kahuun,i`tibaar sab se chala gaya
tere dard ka hai mujhe pataa,tere ashkon kii hai mujhe khabar kya kare `Nikhat` us dard ka,jo toofaan dil mai utha gaya
sunita ji ..aapka ibtedai kalaam mujhe buhat achha laga .... daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by ramishjaan on May 19, 2007 15:47:58 GMT 5
AOA sunita didi jee kesi hain ap dekh li jiye me apna khas mote mote shesho wala chashma laga kar aya hon ke kahin didi ki koi ghazal reh na jaye lol didi umda ghazal ke liye bohat sari sad qabol ki jiye waslam ap ka bhai ramishjaan ( ho sake to mujhe pm me us bewafa ka name bhi bata di jiye ga ;D ;D)
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 24, 2007 17:05:42 GMT 5
sunita
ap ki ghazal ka matalia kia is ghazal ,mein aik shair ka chehra saf dikhae dayta hay bhalay ye behr mein hay ya nahi
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