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Post by brijinder on Aug 14, 2007 1:40:03 GMT 5
Thanx a lot for the kind words.This poem is not about Clerks but about the clerkish mentality which is far more prevalent than we honestly admit.This mentality can be found in high-ranking officers as well.
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Post by brijinder on Aug 10, 2007 1:46:55 GMT 5
ZiNdagi clerk zehanoN ki
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi Phir say hayaat ko Phir say shuru hoga Ik besilsilaywar silsila Phir say chalaiNgay daftaroN Laykar khanay ki dibiaN Phir say hoga bewajaah hi Intazaar shaam ko
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Post by brijinder on Aug 17, 2007 2:37:34 GMT 5
thanx a lot to both of you for the kind words. Regards
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Post by brijinder on Aug 6, 2007 1:48:02 GMT 5
Open to suggestions but which dont compromise my expresion at the cost of craft.
Jab say toonay bhii muskaanaa chora hai phooloN ne baaghoN meN aanaa chora hai
Ulfat maiN ab woh kahaanN lazzat baaqi Jab say toonay dil ko dukhaanaa chora hai Mor pay kaise aayay maraasim ab apnay Roothana tumnay, maiNay manaanaa chora hai
Waqt-e-wasl maiN tera ghair sa milnaa Bharam gharait-e-ishq nay ab khaanaa chora hai
Waqt-e-wasl maiN ghairoN saa milnaa teraa Ghairat-e-ishq nay bharam ab khaanaa chora hai
Walwale dil ke Kisko dikhaauNga apnay Toonay woh to rishta hii nibhaanaa chora hai -----------------------------------------
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Udaasi
Aug 17, 2007 2:37:02 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Aug 17, 2007 2:37:02 GMT 5
I am thankful to both of you for the kind words.
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Udaasi
Jul 31, 2007 1:43:55 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 31, 2007 1:43:55 GMT 5
Udaasi
ChaheroN kay jhurmatoN maiN ghoomta hooN tahnaa JaauN magar kahaaN har chayhra gar ajnabi sa
Har aqs ka daaman pakra Har dil ka kona taakaa Har aqs nikla pathar Har dil ka maNzar sehma
Jaanay kahaaN kahaaN khyaaloN ki mai urayli Kisi ka haath saNg tha paimaaN kahiN pay tootaa
MaiN laykar gayaa tha un tak haazir ki mastiaaN Maazi maiN ji raha tha magar kehkahoN ka sehra
Kissay kary hai shkiway tu ja kay ai "sagar' Daanaa bhi so rehay haiN ab ban kay naaashnaa
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Post by brijinder on Aug 17, 2007 2:35:31 GMT 5
Thanx a lot Tanweer saheb,for the suggestion. Regards
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Post by brijinder on Jul 30, 2007 1:51:57 GMT 5
Tanweer saheb, I am sorry for being late in replying.I have since made the correction n i am very thankful for pointing these out to me.Sum is poison n I dont know how to convey the uu sound in roman. Tabbassum saheb thanx a lot for the words of appreciation as usual. Regards brijinder
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Post by brijinder on Jul 25, 2007 2:43:21 GMT 5
TalkhiaN-3
Kya tujhko sunaauN haal-e-dil apna Kya tujhko dikhaauN apni kashmakash ka jahaaN Tu abhi is des say nawaaqif hai meray dost Toonay daikha hi nahi abhi koi maNzar tanhaa
Toonay piya hi nahi jo gham-e-ishq-o-jahaaN ka sum Tu samjhayga phir mera tarpana kya? Toonay to guzaari hai apni umr mefiloN kay saayoN maiN Ho kay bayparwaa ya reh kay khaufzadaa Aur daikhee jo har charay maiN aisi hi baigairat ki jhalak Toonay isay parakhany ki kabhi koshish hi na ki
Aaj tu aayaa hai meri duniya maiN Aur khara hai uljha-uljha KhwaaboN kay abr say darta darta Ahsaas kay sooraj say sehma-sehma Tak raha hai meri wusat-e-tanhai ko beyaqeeni say Daikh raha hooN maiN teri aaNkhoN maiN hairat kay nishaaN
Kya tujhko sunaauN haal-e-dil apna Kya tujhko dikhaauN apni kasmkash ka jahaaN?
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Plz point out if there is any typo mistake
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Aarzoo
Aug 17, 2007 2:36:30 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Aug 17, 2007 2:36:30 GMT 5
Tanweer saheb,thanx once again for the suggestion. Regards
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Aarzoo
Jul 30, 2007 1:55:15 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 30, 2007 1:55:15 GMT 5
I am very grateful to u all for the words of appreciation.I have made the correction,Tanweer saheb,as suggested by you.Any better word than khamoshi??
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Aarzoo
Jul 19, 2007 10:08:07 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 19, 2007 10:08:07 GMT 5
Aarzoo
Main nay daikhay haiN tanhai kay woh maNzar Afkaar bhi meray jahaaN gooNgay ho gayay Daikha hai woh dasht chuppi ka BarsoN jahaaN waqt ki aari na chali
Pehlay akayla to nahi raha itnaa Subsay door reh kay bhi maiN Saath jab tak diya lafzoN nay dard sehnay maiN Bahishti ban ban kay pilaatay paani Tashnagi jab jab barti Duniya kay usooloN say
Aur ab JazboN ka jam jaanaa SaaNsoN ko nijaat kaisay milay Aanay haiN abhi to kitnay mausam Banay kya jo barf na yeh pighlay
Kabhi fariyaadi to nahi rahaa tera Magar ZiNdagi aaj yeh tujhko kehta hooN Day sau nashtar,tau bhi mujhay maNzoor Par taaqat-e-lafz-bayaani meri Har haal maiN mujh tak rehnay day
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Post by brijinder on Jul 30, 2007 1:55:49 GMT 5
Once again many thank to u both for these kind words.
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Post by brijinder on Jul 14, 2007 9:23:11 GMT 5
tabasum saheb,baqhut bahut shukriya
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Post by brijinder on Jul 11, 2007 5:28:11 GMT 5
Kee KaraaN??
Meray chup-chupeetay keernay Meray hokay nazaribaNd Meray beawaazay wain vay Paatan dil di kaNdh
Hik vich ghut ghut marda Piya aj mera virlaap vay Meri sochaaN neeli hoiaN Aj peeta aisa paap vay
JiNd hoi meri jhal-valali Lagiay aisa ghaat vay Deedaqy vit-vit vaikhday Pakar na aaway baat vay
Aj gali takdeer khaloti Has-has paatay saNgh Man ardaasaaN sodhadhaa Kitay chup-chupeetay laNgh
Aj nain payay kurlaan vay Vich haNjhuiaN nu la kay bun Eh tu karayNgi naal meray MaiN kiwaiN lawaaN man? Eh khed tera fareb si Mera dhuaaNkh gaya hai Chan
Meray vishwaasaaN day bhawaan nu Sut gaya vich masaan tuN Gilli lakkar teelee la kay Chad gayaa maiNnu bhakhaan nuN
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