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Post by brijinder on Oct 6, 2007 0:35:21 GMT 5
Sumaira saheba, Oops!I am very sorry for not replying earlier.Thanx a ton for the appreciation.I have read Bullay Shah but not in a book form.Few poems here n there.Sufi thought is very dear to me.It is a rebellious thought but which is always the voice of the heart. Regards brijinder
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Post by brijinder on Jul 14, 2007 9:24:20 GMT 5
thanx a lot,brother
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Post by brijinder on Jul 8, 2007 5:26:47 GMT 5
Shayar Da Dard
Eh kahay laikh likhay prabhji GaaNday na muskaaNday HaasiyaaN day dariya laiy kay vi Piyaasay hi mar jaaNday
Eh dariya uh khaaray paani Jo rasmaaN naal saraapay
Lehar lehar nu naagan dasdi Har pal nu pa galwakri Zehar eh meri sochaaN charia Zehar eh meray piNday waria
Geet meray is 'choN jamman TanhaaiaN day kouray chumman Aad kaal to eho cha Aaway kitoN khushiaN do bhaa Aad kaal to eh supnaa Aadam nay dita aapay sooli laa
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Uff!
Jul 14, 2007 9:23:54 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 14, 2007 9:23:54 GMT 5
I am thankful to both of u for these very warm words.
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Uff!
Jul 5, 2007 1:47:14 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:47:14 GMT 5
Uff!
Uff!
Ashk peeta hi rehaa lub seetaa hi rehaa Dabaa kay izhaar-e-tamanna kay khwaab Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetaa hi rehaa
Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko Key na huNs sakaa unpay na kabhi ro hi sakaa Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch taqaazaa-i-halaat uska Apnaa sakaa usko na kabhi kho hi sakaa
Mainy taraashay thay khalwat main Husn-o-ishq kay jo sehar khwaab Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar Apnay tamaam ilm-o-ahsaas
Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus !TanhaaiaN
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Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:46:24 GMT 5
Razi saheb, I am very thankful for the kind words of appreciation. Aqeel saheb, I was moved by your such frank words of appreciation.Am not sure if I really deserve these. I couldnot understand what you asked in addition to your appreciation.It was not clear to me.Plz elaboarte so that i can keep in mind next time. Regards Brijinder"Sagar"
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Post by brijinder on Jun 29, 2007 1:57:56 GMT 5
Bekhudi
Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-qaynaat hai zindagi Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi
Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat
Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay UmroN kay qaafilay Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN Kabhi manzil ka pa laina Phir us say uqta jaanaa Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa
Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai But banayay banai azaanaiN Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN
Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN
Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi
Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main Liyay beqasi-e-namaloom diloN main Har koi jiyay jaataa hai Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko Unwaan-e-zindgai diyay jaataa hai
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Post by brijinder on Jun 28, 2007 2:12:07 GMT 5
I am very thankful to u all.Nazm is my forte n I am more comfortable in it as to me,it uits more to my temperament n I can more freely fit in my philosophical n psychological outpouring in that form. I am very thankful to u all for the warm words.
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Post by brijinder on Jun 18, 2007 4:34:30 GMT 5
Ha!ha.To itna bura likh raha tha maiN?Ofcourse I was not writing gazals but azaad nazms which is really my style.
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Post by brijinder on Jun 18, 2007 2:52:30 GMT 5
Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage ki guzre huwe din fasaane lage
Jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagew
Lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lage
Pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo the kabhii bahut faasle ab banaane lage
Guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal Woh sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lage.
Jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lage
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Shayar
Jul 5, 2007 1:42:35 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:42:35 GMT 5
I am really sorry for replying late.Am thankful for your kind words.
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Shayar
Jun 11, 2007 1:04:47 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 11, 2007 1:04:47 GMT 5
Thanx a lot
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Shayar
Jun 9, 2007 1:19:29 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 9, 2007 1:19:29 GMT 5
I am thankful to u bot for the kind words.This brings out the difference between a craftsman n an artist,as i understand.
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Shayar
Jun 6, 2007 2:02:47 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 6, 2007 2:02:47 GMT 5
Shayar
Shohrat ka nahi saudai shayar Daulat bhi nahi iska nishaanaa Bus bhatkay hai dil dil ki mehfil k mil jayay koi chehra-e-daanaa
Umr apni tehzeeb ko day jaataa hai shayar JazboN ko neeNd say jagaa laataa hai shayar
Safar-e-shayar kaho ya naam laylo tanhai ka k itna dishwaar hai jeena laal-e-khudai ka
Afkaar iskay aadmi kay bhoolay huay ahsaas JunooN iska mehw-eneeNd main say jaagoN ki talaash
Nahi pehchaany pawaazaiN iski daur-e-zamaanaa iska Dariya-e-haazir main hai shayr ik safinaa-e-fardaa
Tasleem-e-shayar hai gar aadmiyat ko pa jay aadmi Muaaf gunaah sub hoNgay gar muhabbat ko pa jay aadmi.
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Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:43:30 GMT 5
Once again I am really very sorry for replying so late.Thanx a ton for the appreciation.
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