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Post by brijinder on Aug 6, 2007 1:48:02 GMT 5
Open to suggestions but which dont compromise my expresion at the cost of craft.
Jab say toonay bhii muskaanaa chora hai phooloN ne baaghoN meN aanaa chora hai
Ulfat maiN ab woh kahaanN lazzat baaqi Jab say toonay dil ko dukhaanaa chora hai Mor pay kaise aayay maraasim ab apnay Roothana tumnay, maiNay manaanaa chora hai
Waqt-e-wasl maiN tera ghair sa milnaa Bharam gharait-e-ishq nay ab khaanaa chora hai
Waqt-e-wasl maiN ghairoN saa milnaa teraa Ghairat-e-ishq nay bharam ab khaanaa chora hai
Walwale dil ke Kisko dikhaauNga apnay Toonay woh to rishta hii nibhaanaa chora hai -----------------------------------------
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 6, 2007 23:36:33 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Brijinder sahib
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Post by hooriya on Aug 7, 2007 13:57:33 GMT 5
khoob....
achha kalaam kaha aapne..daad hazir hai janab.
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Post by brijinder on Aug 17, 2007 2:37:34 GMT 5
thanx a lot to both of you for the kind words. Regards
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Post by masagar on Aug 17, 2007 19:38:28 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Brijinder sahib
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Post by kanwal on Sept 11, 2007 23:27:42 GMT 5
aik khubsoorat se khiyaal pe daad e guL haazir haiN ,...
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