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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 21:33:57 GMT 5
kanwal
ap kay han nazm ki imagery bahut khoob hoti hay aik kasak aik karb jo daroon e zaat say nikal kar kharji pehnaway mein dar aya hay magar baat wahin ajati hay ke fani taqazooN kay baghair ye telent zaya ho raha hay khud ko spoil mat kejeay aur naqd e sher o fan e sher ki taraf dhian dejeay takeye baytarteebi kisi tarteeb mein away
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 22:03:49 GMT 5
Rooh!
mujhy tu ghazal mein koe behr dikhae nahi dayti baqool anwar masood
youn behr say khali hay ke khushki pe parhi hay youn sher mein sakta hay ke kuch ho nahi sakta
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 21:42:37 GMT 5
bahut arsa say mein ap ki nazmein baqaidgi kay sath partha raha hon magar koe comment nahi deay,is ki waja ye ke souti jamaliat tashna reh jati thi, ap ki in nasri nazmooN ki (agar che mein is term ka qail nahi) interptaion karnay ki zaroorat hay qatae nazar is k ke fani hawala koe nahi banta magar ap kay han shairi hay aur wo lehja aur khanak jo noon meem rashid kay han hay wohi labo lehja ap ki nazmoon mein maujood hay aur bahut khoobsoorat hay bhalay karb ki koe soorat ho zindagi talashnay ka amal ho ya koe imagery bahut khoobsorti aur rachao kay sath ati hay kash ke ap aroozi halway ko bhi dhain mein rakhein aur koe nazm kahin tu dili khushi ho gi
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Aug 20, 2007 15:20:17 GMT 5
daroon zaat karb ki numainda nazm hay dad qaooleay ga
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 22:06:28 GMT 5
dad qabooleay sahab
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 8, 2007 20:39:19 GMT 5
ye ishq nahi asaN bas itna samajh lejay ik aag ga darya hay aur doob kay jana hay
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 21:53:03 GMT 5
Nazm kay unwan nay chaunkaya tu foran thread open kia aur content ko parha unwan mukamal justify hota hay nazm ki zeerein lehr mein shidat e ehsas aur karb ki afaaqi satah maujood hay magar mas'ala wohi hay ke fani hawaly say bahut kamzoor nazm hay is par dhian deay bina sheri haysiat ko gehn lag jata hay is baray socheay ga
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 17, 2007 15:17:32 GMT 5
bahut khoobsorat nazm hay dad qabooleay hafiz sb
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 24, 2007 17:05:42 GMT 5
sunita
ap ki ghazal ka matalia kia is ghazal ,mein aik shair ka chehra saf dikhae dayta hay bhalay ye behr mein hay ya nahi
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