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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:44:56 GMT 5
bahut khoob
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 11:43:29 GMT 5
Razi sb
bahut achi ghazal hay aik likhari ka mansab ye hay k apnay daur apnay irdgird honay walay waqiat o masail ko inhail kary aur aik sachay tareeekh dan ka kam kray kiun aik adeeb apnay zamany ki akasi kar raha hota hay pakistan par jis tarha dictator ship aur neu colonialism kay hamiun nay yalghar kar rakhi hay us karb ki shidat is ghazal ki tehtee rau mein nazar ati ha yahan pakistan mein masla ye hay koe bhi nazrea kuli taur par raij hay he nahi kahi industrialist apna difa kar rahay hein tu kahin fudalists apna kahin NGOs ki ar mein saltanat ki bunyadon ko hilaay jaraha hay tu kahi comunist apna par char kar rahay hein ye aik intishar ka daur hay jis mein mazhmti adab parwan char rahay aur yehi mazahmat yahan maujood hay ap ki is ghazal mein
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 13, 2007 19:50:02 GMT 5
ap kay han is nazm(agar kahin tu warna is ko nasr para kehna chaheay) tasawuf ki jhalak dikhae dayti hay jahan aik salik manzil e fana ka khahish mand hay ye khahish agar cheh khushk paton ki waja say manfi rujhan dayti hay kiun keh fana salik ki khahish hay khair mehnat aur matalia say ap ka wijan ap ko rah dikhaeay ga magar riazat shart hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 26, 2007 18:57:35 GMT 5
Tanweer sahab ghazal bahut kamzoor hay,behr say kharih ashaar ki tadad bahut ziada hay is taraf dhian daynay ki zaroorat hay
A M
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 28, 2007 15:24:29 GMT 5
Shayaan sahab ka forum mein nick active hoty he un ka accedent ho gia hay aur un ka hath toot gia hay lihaza un ki janib say mein ap ka shukr guzar hon
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:49:19 GMT 5
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:55:06 GMT 5
Hooriya
ap ki nazm ka matalia kia pehli qiraat mein dil ko bha gae ap ki ye umda nazm,is mausam mein ehsas ki satah par likhi hoe qadray achi taasuraati nazm hay dad qabool kejeay Note: Aqeel Sahab ki Id say jawab is leay day raha hon ke mayra account abhi active nahi hoa mazrat qabool karein
Shayaan Chaudhry
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 15, 2007 21:20:22 GMT 5
Wlliam Words Worth ki To The COKO yad agae natural flow mein acha nasr para hay dad qabooleay
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NAZM
Jul 5, 2007 13:02:28 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 5, 2007 13:02:28 GMT 5
koe bhi sinf likhty hoey aik sawal zehn mein hona chaheay ke keh mein kiun keh raha hon,aur kitna mukhtalif keh raha hon mein nay is saniha kay hawalay say aisi aisi nazmein parhein jo academy of letter ki ADBIAT mein publish hoe thiN us kay baad is nazm nay bilkul bhi haunt nahi kia
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:46:00 GMT 5
Hooriya!
adab ap ki mukhlisana sataish ka shukr guzar hooN
Shayan
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 4, 2007 15:32:39 GMT 5
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 3, 2007 17:40:51 GMT 5
kanwal,sumaira
ap ka bahut shukria ye sab aqeel malik sahab ka dast e shafqat hay warna(banda is say bhi ziada qabil hay)
Shayan Chaudhry
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:47:43 GMT 5
Hooriya
shukria!
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 9, 2007 15:51:14 GMT 5
boht shukria RAFI sab ap ki hosla afzai mery irduN k liye mehmizsabit ho gi. nawazish... SHAYAAN CHAUDHRY
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 4, 2007 15:22:25 GMT 5
shayan chaudhry mayray bahut he achay dost hein jald he wo khud yahan online hoa karein gay fil hal un ki aik ghazal ap ki nazar:
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