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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 19:26:38 GMT 5
aawaaz se aawaaz ka jab raabta tootay ga to' saawan ki rutt barkha ka zor aur kokti koyel ka shor sab besura hojayega parbat ko chootay khwab aur khwaboN ka ambar jab kabhi' aaNsoo k sagar se milayga tab aas aur ummeed ka daman dilse juda hojayega an mitt si yadoN k nuqoosh laa hasil musafat ki' thakan liye' reh jaaiN ge hum phir akaile k' tanha kati theen sab hi raahaiN aur tanha katay ga ye safar k hum' tanha musafir hi to haiN!!
Hooriya.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 11, 2007 22:38:29 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh bohat khoob Hooriya
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 23:27:52 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh bohat khoob Hooriya iss hausla afzaai ka shukriya rafi bhai
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 15, 2007 21:20:22 GMT 5
Wlliam Words Worth ki To The COKO yad agae natural flow mein acha nasr para hay dad qabooleay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 16, 2007 12:28:44 GMT 5
hooriya ji aap ki yeh khoobsoorat nazm main aaj parh raha hoon aur aaj saawan ka maheena shuroo hua hy is nazm nay aaj k din bohat lutf dia daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2007 20:55:06 GMT 5
Hooriya
ap ki nazm ka matalia kia pehli qiraat mein dil ko bha gae ap ki ye umda nazm,is mausam mein ehsas ki satah par likhi hoe qadray achi taasuraati nazm hay dad qabool kejeay Note: Aqeel Sahab ki Id say jawab is leay day raha hon ke mayra account abhi active nahi hoa mazrat qabool karein
Shayaan Chaudhry
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Post by hooriya on Aug 6, 2007 20:59:39 GMT 5
Wlliam Words Worth ki To The COKO yad agae natural flow mein acha nasr para hay dad qabooleay iss daad k liye shukriya janaab.
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Post by hooriya on Aug 6, 2007 21:01:13 GMT 5
hooriya ji aap ki yeh khoobsoorat nazm main aaj parh raha hoon aur aaj saawan ka maheena shuroo hua hy is nazm nay aaj k din bohat lutf dia daad qabool kijiay thanx razi hausla afzaai k liye buhat shukriya razi bhai.
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Post by hooriya on Aug 6, 2007 21:05:47 GMT 5
Hooriya ap ki nazm ka matalia kia pehli qiraat mein dil ko bha gae ap ki ye umda nazm,is mausam mein ehsas ki satah par likhi hoe qadray achi taasuraati nazm hay dad qabool kejeay Note: Aqeel Sahab ki Id say jawab is leay day raha hon ke mayra account abhi active nahi hoa mazrat qabool karein Shayaan Chaudhry janab shayaan sahab iss tabsere aur daad k liye buhat shukriya.
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Post by kanwal on Sept 11, 2007 23:48:08 GMT 5
bohat umdaa hooriya jee ,... daad ke laakhoN phooL aapki iss takhleeQ ki nazR ,...
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Post by hooriya on Nov 12, 2007 11:06:56 GMT 5
bohat umdaa hooriya jee ,... daad ke laakhoN phooL aapki iss takhleeQ ki nazR ,... Kanwal aapke phool mujhe behadd pasand aaye buhat shukriya
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Post by riaz ahmed saraa on Nov 18, 2007 1:00:00 GMT 5
aawaaz se aawaaz ka jab raabta tootay ga to' saawan ki rutt barkha ka zor aur kokti koyel ka shor sab besura hojayega parbat ko chootay khwab aur khwaboN ka ambar jab kabhi' aaNsoo k sagar se milayga tab aas aur ummeed ka daman dilse juda hojayega an mitt si yadoN k nuqoosh laa hasil musafat ki' thakan liye' reh jaaiN ge hum phir akaile k' tanha kati theen sab hi raahaiN aur tanha katay ga ye safar k hum' tanha musafir hi to haiN!! Hooriya. bohat khoob Hooriya behn tumhaari ye nazm behad pasand aaii mairy taraf se dhairoon daad
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Post by Tanweer on Nov 18, 2007 11:26:16 GMT 5
Horiya ji
Bohat khoobsurat, bohat si daad.
Tanweer
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Post by maya on Nov 29, 2007 13:02:40 GMT 5
Hooriaya jee
Mashallah bohat acha likha aap nay. daad qabool kejeay.
waslam Fatimah
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