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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 11:09:32 GMT 5
bahut khoob jalees nasir kazmi ki zameen mein achay mazameen nikaly hein ap nay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 20:02:15 GMT 5
this is what we call freshness
bhut umda
dad qabooleay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 11:28:10 GMT 5
ghar sa mahol hi nahi ghar me esi sourat me ghar rahe ga keya
ye sher aj kay jis siasi aur samaji intishaar ki taraf nishandehi kar raha hay us ka nibhao umda hay bahut khoobsorat alamat apnay pory talazmy kay sath ae hay
lout aao ge tum chalo man liya mosam e gul magar rahe ga keya
bahut khoob ashaar nikaly hein ramish sb dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 23, 2007 15:05:39 GMT 5
Neha...! ap ko takheeli jast umda lagi ap ka zauq e sher hay warna banda is qabil kahaN
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 19:30:15 GMT 5
sunita !
shukria ke ap nay ashaar ko saraha jounhi ghazal ki kant chant mukal ho kar koe wazeh sorat ikhtiar karay gi zaroor pesh karoN ga
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:32:21 GMT 5
agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar bohat khoob aqeel sahib wah wah thanx razi Razi sb shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:31:02 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaab malik sahaaaab agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar waah bohat ummdaaa tasleemaaaaaat ap nay sher pasand kia bahut shukr guzar hon
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:28:47 GMT 5
aqeel bhai ashaar pasand ayee aap ki mazboot soch aur pukhta khayalaat ka aks jhalakta hay shukria ap ki muhabat hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:27:00 GMT 5
ankhoon ki dararooN say lapakty hein bujhy khaab urta hay koe raakh samandar miry andar agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar Bohat Khoob Aqeel Malik Sahibdr sb ap ka shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:24:59 GMT 5
bohat umdaa ,... Daad ke phool aapke liye,... Bahut shukria kanwal ap ka
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 19, 2007 19:23:17 GMT 5
ankhoon ki dararooN say lapakty hein bujhy khaab urta hay koe raakh samandar miry andar agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar BOHAT KHOOB AQEEL JEE ........... DAD QABOOL KEJEY
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] haseeb sb Bahut shukria
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:49:03 GMT 5
ankhoon ki dararooN say lapakty hein bujhy khaab urta hay koe raakh samandar miry andar
agni pe chirakta hay tamanaein barahman parmatma dalay kahin jhomar miry andar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:01:24 GMT 5
ghazal ka matalia kia aj kay adabi ufuq say mail nahi khati ye ghazal is kay ilawa alfaz ka istemaal par bhi nazr e sani chaheat arabia aur farsi alfaz mein ataf jaiz nahi hota jasay bint o pisar isi tarha ay ki haey majhool ka girana qabeeh hay mehnaat aur shauq say rahein hamwar hoa chahein gi
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Ghazal
May 15, 2007 15:16:03 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:16:03 GMT 5
bahut khoob dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:26:06 GMT 5
samnay ki nazmhay magar ehsasati wabastagi ka nibhae umda hay
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