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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 19, 2007 11:04:53 GMT 5
Azeezan-e-Mehfil tasleemaat,naye forum par nai ghazal pesh hai.Ummeed hai pasand-e-khatir hogi.Jalees Sherwani
Go haqeeqat maiN teeragi hai abhi. Mere khwaboN main chandni hai abhi.
Kuchh to mausam ne tar kiya daaman. Os aankhoN se bhi giri hai abhi.
Hosh aane maiN waqt lagta hai. Hum ko chhedo na bekhudi hai abhi.
Bhool kar saare gham zamaane ke. Zindagi phool si hui hai abhi.
Ek tamanna se tum ko milwate. Shab ko jaagi thee so gayee hai abhi.
Raat soii to ghar ko jaayenge. Raat jaagi hai chulbuli hai abhi.
Jab se chhoda hai hosh ka daaman. Zindagi shor se bari hai abhi.
Main ne dekha bahaar ka rona. Mere ghar se hi wo gayee hai abhi.
Aap ki garaN qadr aa'raa ka intezaar hai.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 20, 2007 2:49:41 GMT 5
sari ghazal aik bhar poor ghazal daad qabool farmaiay Jalees sahib
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 20, 2007 11:09:32 GMT 5
bahut khoob jalees nasir kazmi ki zameen mein achay mazameen nikaly hein ap nay
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 20, 2007 14:01:35 GMT 5
bohat umda andaz hota hy aap ka jalees bhaai is ghazalmain bhi aap ka makhsoos andaz waazeh taur par jhalakta hy thanx razi
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 20, 2007 15:25:06 GMT 5
Azeezan-e-Mehfil tasleemaat,naye forum par nai ghazal pesh hai.Ummeed hai pasand-e-khatir hogi.Jalees Sherwani
Go haqeeqat maiN teeragi hai abhi. Mere khwaboN main chandni hai abhi.
Kuchh to mausam ne tar kiya daaman. Os aankhoN se bhi giri hai abhi.
Hosh aane maiN waqt lagta hai. Hum ko chhedo na bekhudi hai abhi.
Bhool kar saare gham zamaane ke. Zindagi phool si hui hai abhi.
Ek tamanna se tum ko milwate. Shab ko jaagi thee so gayee hai abhi.
Raat soii to ghar ko jaayenge. Raat jaagi hai chulbuli hai abhi.
Jab se chhoda hai hosh ka daaman. Zindagi shor se bari hai abhi.
Main ne dekha bahaar ka rona. Mere ghar se hi wo gayee hai abhi.
Aap ki garaN qadr aa'raa ka intezaar hai. BOHAT KHOOB JALEES SAHIB .......... Bhool kar saare gham zamaane ke. Zindagi phool si hui hai abhi.
DIL MAIN IK LEHER SE OTHE HAY ABHE ... KI BEHR PER YEH GHAZAL BOHAT PASAND AAE ................... DAD QABOOL KIJIEY ......... WISH U ALL THE BEST
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 20, 2007 21:37:31 GMT 5
Sunita,Aadaab Daant ka ab dar nahiN hai kyunki itni kha chuka hooN k aadat pad gayee hai..Aur bechare mard ke naseeb maiN is ke siva hai bhi kya? Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ke liye shukriya. Aap ka apna Jalees Bhaijaan
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 20, 2007 21:39:42 GMT 5
Rana Sahab,Aadaab-o-niyaaz Ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye mumnoon hooN aapk. Kherandesh Jalees Sherwani
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 20, 2007 21:41:44 GMT 5
Aqeel Sahab,Aadaab Intezaar thha aap ke radd-e-amal ka.ghazal pasand aayee,apne maqsad ko pahunchi.Shukriya Aap ka apna Jalees
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 20, 2007 21:43:20 GMT 5
Dr sahab,Aadaab Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ke liye shukriya.Aap ki rai ehmiyat ki haamil hai. Aap ka apna Jalees
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 20, 2007 21:47:34 GMT 5
Razi Bhai,Aadaab
Naya forum aap shuru kar dete haiN aur meri seniority par paani phir jaata hai...phir se ibtedaaii rukn ban jaata hooN.
KHer baat mazaaq ki hai..aap jahaN honge hum wahaN chale aayenge. Aap se badi mohabbat hai... Ghazal pasand aayee...shukriya. Aap ka apna Jalees
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Post by khalid on May 21, 2007 6:44:35 GMT 5
Hosh aane maiN waqt lagta hai. Hum ko chhedo na bekhudi hai abhi.jalees sb aik khoobsoorat ghazal kehne per daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Jalees Sherwani on May 21, 2007 11:13:06 GMT 5
Khalid Sahab,Aadaab Ash'aar pasand aaye,mere liye sataish ki baat hai.shukriya Kherandesh Jalees
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 21, 2007 12:40:22 GMT 5
Rana Sahab,Aadaab-o-niyaaz Ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye mumnoon hooN aapk. Kherandesh Jalees Sherwani
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 21, 2007 12:45:51 GMT 5
Rana Sahab,Aadaab-o-niyaaz Ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye mumnoon hooN aapk. Kherandesh Jalees Sherwani U WEL COME DEAR ................ MAIN UMEED KERTA HOON KEH AaP KI TARAF SAY HAMEN BAYMESAAL Aor LA-ZAWAAL SHA'ERY PERHNEY KO MILTE RAHEY GEE............... WISH U ALL THE BEST MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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Post by dilshadnazmi on May 29, 2007 18:02:31 GMT 5
Azeezan-e-Mehfil tasleemaat,naye forum par nai ghazal pesh hai.Ummeed hai pasand-e-khatir hogi.Jalees Sherwani
Go haqeeqat maiN teeragi hai abhi. Mere khwaboN main chandni hai abhi.
Kuchh to mausam ne tar kiya daaman. Os aankhoN se bhi giri hai abhi.
Hosh aane maiN waqt lagta hai. Hum ko chhedo na bekhudi hai abhi.
Bhool kar saare gham zamaane ke. Zindagi phool si hui hai abhi.
Ek tamanna se tum ko milwate. Shab ko jaagi thee so gayee hai abhi.
Raat soii to ghar ko jaayenge. Raat jaagi hai chulbuli hai abhi.
Jab se chhoda hai hosh ka daaman. Zindagi shor se bari hai abhi.
Main ne dekha bahaar ka rona. Mere ghar se hi wo gayee hai abhi.
Aap ki garaN qadr aa'raa ka intezaar hai....................................................................... Go haqeeqat maiN teeragi hai abhi. Mere khwaboN main chandni hai abhi. Kuchh to mausam ne tar kiya daaman. Os aankhoN se bhi giri hai abhi. Hosh aane maiN waqt lagta hai. Hum ko chhedo na bekhudi hai abhi. Bhool kar saare gham zamaane ke. Zindagi phool si hui hai abhi. Ek tamanna se tum ko milwate. Shab ko jaagi thee so gayee hai abhi. Raat soii to ghar ko jaayenge. Raat jaagi hai chulbuli hai abhi. Jab se chhoda hai hosh ka daaman. Zindagi shor se bari hai abhi. Main ne dekha bahaar ka rona. Mere ghar se hi wo gayee hai abhi. Aap ki garaN qadr aa'raa ka intezaar hai.[/b] …………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. Jalees sahib Salam _o_alaekum,
Waah waah janab ,keya khoob gazal kahi hai aap ne , ji khush ho gaya , sahl_e_mumtanah me itne peyare peyare ash_aar nikale hain ke kis kis ki tareef karon , aur who shear,,, jawab nahi ,
Bombay ke shab_o_roz yaad aagaey ,
Raat soii to ghar ko jaeinge Raat jagi hai ,chulbuli hai abhi
Kitni masumiyet se aap ne yeh shear kah diya , waah
Main ne dekha bahar ka rona Mere ghar se hi wo gayee hai abhi
Kuch to maousam ne tar kiya daaman Oss aankho”n se bhi giri hai abhi
Bilkul naya iste_aa_ra hai , mere ilm me ,
Janab aap ki iss bharpoor gazal pe main aap ko dher sari mubarak baad pesh karta hoon , qabool kijiye , ( dilshadnazmi,ksa)
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