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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 0:13:16 GMT 5
AIK TAZAH TREEN GHAZAL ......... KANWAL JE KI FERMAESH PER SUKHAN WAR K NAAM .............. UMEED HAY APP KO PASAND AaEY GEE .............. ........................................ THANKZ
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:01:24 GMT 5
ghazal ka matalia kia aj kay adabi ufuq say mail nahi khati ye ghazal is kay ilawa alfaz ka istemaal par bhi nazr e sani chaheat arabia aur farsi alfaz mein ataf jaiz nahi hota jasay bint o pisar isi tarha ay ki haey majhool ka girana qabeeh hay mehnaat aur shauq say rahein hamwar hoa chahein gi
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Post by kanwal on May 15, 2007 20:13:50 GMT 5
Humari farmaish pe nazr e karam karne ke liye be had shukriya janaab ,..... Khushi hui dekh kar ke aap iss bazm ke active rukan bante jaa rahe haiN ,.... Umdaa khiyaal paish kiya hai aapne ,.... dil ke gulshan se dheroN daad ke guL aapki nazR;....
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 15, 2007 22:31:18 GMT 5
AIK TAZAH TREEN GHAZAL ......... KANWAL JE KI FERMAESH PER SUKHAN WAR K NAAM .............. UMEED HAY APP KO PASAND AaEY GEE .............. ........................................ THANKZ
bohat khoob Rana Sahib
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 14:40:34 GMT 5
ghazal ka matalia kia aj kay adabi ufuq say mail nahi khati ye ghazal is kay ilawa alfaz ka istemaal par bhi nazr e sani chaheat arabia aur farsi alfaz mein ataf jaiz nahi hota jasay bint o pisar isi tarha ay ki haey majhool ka girana qabeeh hay mehnaat aur shauq say rahein hamwar hoa chahein gi THANK U V-MUCH AQEEL SAHB ........ AaP NY AeTRAZAT KE'EY . TANQEED KI ................ AaP KA BAY HAD MAMNOON HOON ....... JWABAT PE'SH-E-KHEDMAT HAYIN .........
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 15:29:40 GMT 5
Humari farmaish pe nazr e karam karne ke liye be had shukriya janaab ,..... Khushi hui dekh kar ke aap iss bazm ke active rukan bante jaa rahe haiN ,.... Umdaa khiyaal paish kiya hai aapne ,.... dil ke gulshan se dheroN daad ke guL aapki nazR;.... HAAH HAAAH HAAAAAAAAA ........ HUMMMMMMMMMMM .... AJI YEH TU AaP KI ZRA NWAZI HAY KEH AaP NAY FERMAESH KI ...... WERNA HUM IS QABEL KAHAN KEH KOE HUM SAY FERMAESH KERY .... ............KANWAL DAR ASAL MAIN ZMANAH SAZI MEIN IS-QADER PHANS CHUKA HOON KEH FORUM KO THEEK TARAH SAY TIME NAHEEN DAY PATA ......... LAKIN MAIN KOSH'SH KARON GAA KEH BAZM SAY DOOR NA HONY PAOON ...... INSHA ALLAH .. WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 15:33:13 GMT 5
AIK TAZAH TREEN GHAZAL ......... KANWAL JE KI FERMAESH PER SUKHAN WAR K NAAM .............. UMEED HAY APP KO PASAND AaEY GEE .............. ........................................ THANKZ
bohat khoob Rana SahibTHANK U V-MUCH TABASUM JEE BE HAPPY
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Post by khalid on May 18, 2007 17:18:33 GMT 5
ghazal ka matalia kia aj kay adabi ufuq say mail nahi khati ye ghazal is kay ilawa alfaz ka istemaal par bhi nazr e sani chaheat arabia aur farsi alfaz mein ataf jaiz nahi hota jasay bint o pisar isi tarha ay ki haey majhool ka girana qabeeh hay mehnaat aur shauq say rahein hamwar hoa chahein gi THANK U V-MUCH AQEEL SAHB ........ AaP NY AeTRAZAT KE'EY . TANQEED KI ................ AaP KA BAY HAD MAMNOON HOON ....... JWABAT PE'SH-E-KHEDMAT HAYIN .........
[/color] [/quote] haseeb sb aadaab!
aapki ghazal peRhi! lutf aaya! dad qubool keeje!
mujhe khushi hai k aap ne aqeel sb kee tanqeed ko khanda peishaani se, naak bhauN cheRhaaey baghair qubool kiya!
aapki ye baat ke tanqeed haqeeqat per mabni honi chaahiye, bilkul durust hai! her shaaer ka mutaale,aa, mushaaheda, umr, gird o navaah aur tareeqa e vaardaat mukhtalif hota hai. aik naaqid ko in tamaam pehloo,oN ko mad e nazar rakhna chaahiye. is bezm k meiyaar ke mutaabiq to jo shaaer behr meiN kahe, aur baat smjha sake, uski hosla afzaii honee chaahiye! ye koii ghaalib o meer kee mehfil nahiN hai. aap ne theek kaha k aajkal adab aik bohraani daur se guzar raha hai. aur hameN hosla shikani se gurez kerna chaahiye.
kuch arsa qabl meiree aik ghazal per aqeel sb ne fermaaya tha k "khayalaat puraane haiN", ya rivaayati haiN; bahar haal maiN ne yehi arz kiya ke jab ham puraane haiN to khayalaat naey kahaN se laaeN
aik mertaba phir daad qubool keeje!
dua go, khaalid.
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 18, 2007 22:41:36 GMT 5
AaP KA SHUKER GUZAAR HOON KEH AaP NAY GHAZAL PERHE PASAND KI ......... Aor IS NACHEEZ KO DAD K QABEL SUMJHA .... THANKZ ONCE AGAIN .... JE KHALID SAHIB .. NARAZ HONEY KI IS MIN KOE BAAT HE NAHEN HAY ....... KUENKEH MAIN SAMJHTA HOON KEH JAIZ TANQEED Aor AETRAZAT HUMAREY KAAM KO Aor B NIKHAARBAKHSHTEY HAYIN ........ Aor IS TARAH MALOMAAT MAIN B IZAFAH HOTA HAY ......... MERE TU WESEY B KOSH'SH HOTE HAY KEH KOE AISE BAAT NA KAROON JISS SAY KISE KI DIL AaZARE HO .... LAKIN YEH B SACH HAY KEH PAYMANAH BHER KER AaKHER CHALAK HE JATA HAY .. BEHR HAAL MUJHEY AQEEL SAHIB KI TANQEED ACHE LAGEE ...... HO SAKTA HAY IN K E'LAM MAIN YEH BATEN NAA HOON ...... JO INHOON NAY KEEN .... YA PHER YEH B MOMKIN HAY KEH IN KO KOE NEEM USTAD MIL GAYA HOO .... JISS NAY IN KO YEH GHALAT TALEEM DAY DEE ........... MAIN SAMUJHTA HOON KEH YAHAN PER IS PEYARE BAZM MAIN HUMAREY AaNEY KA MAQSAD HE SEKHNA Aor SEKHANA HE HAY ........ WERNA SHAERE TU AaP KAHEN PER B KER SEKTEY HAYIN .. Aor P-MEDIA IS K LEY BEST PLACE HAY ....... MAIN AaP SAY B YAHE UMEED KERTA HOON . KEH AaP B POETRY SECTION MAIN IN RAHEN GAY .............. Aor APNI SOOJH BOOJH K MOTABEQ AGAR KAHEEN PER KISI KI POETRY MAIN KOE KAME BESHE AaP KO NAZER AaTE HAY TU AaP BEHTER TAREQEY SAY MSALOON KI MADAD SAY ISLAH KAREN GAY ......... MAIN NAHEEN SAMJHTA KEH E'LAM HUMARE JAGEER HAY ..... BELKEH HER US TALEB-E-E'LAM KA HAQU HAY JO IS KO PANA CHAHEY ..... I HOPE K AaP IS ZIMAN MAIN MERA BHER POR SATH DAYN GAY .. BE HAPPY n KEEP SMILING MAY ALLAH BLESS U [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 5:41:52 GMT 5
Rana Sahib! Lag bhag aik baras baad aap ki ghazal paRh raha hooN, Ghazal achchi hai. Mujhay lutf aayaa Aqeel Malik sahiB kay nikaat per aur mazeed lutf dobaalaa huwa aap kay jawabaat paRh kar. Behtar andaaz aur muSbat tareeqay say aap nay jawabaat diyay. Khush rahaiN.
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