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Post by maya on May 26, 2007 20:33:45 GMT 5
Jis ka wajood payas say ebaratt hay...
Jis ka wajood payas say ebaratt hay... Jo rag rag main dorti talab say waqif hay Aur, Jo rooh kay veran Jangal main Chaltay howay , Khushk pattoun ki awaz sunta hay Uskay leya mumkin nahi kay Zindgy kay sahil per kharay ho ker Serf Ankhoun ki seraabi per Wo dil shad ho uthay Wo abad ho uthay Uski Rah main ha'el lakh tofaan lahraien hun ya talatum bapa ho Wo gahraioun main utray ga gahrai uska muqader hay Jiska wajood Payas say Ebaratt hay....
Fatima
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 26, 2007 23:46:28 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhh Fatimah ji khoobsoorat nazm kahi aap nay Daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by kanwal on May 30, 2007 1:56:20 GMT 5
wah ,...
bohat khoob ,...
aik umda si poem par dil ke gulshan se hazaar haa hazaar daad e guL aapke liye ,...
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Post by maya on May 30, 2007 16:39:11 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib Kanwal Aapa
hosla afzai ka bay had shukria
waslam
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Post by uzair143 on May 31, 2007 13:52:33 GMT 5
wah wah wah bout khoob
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 31, 2007 19:12:07 GMT 5
bohat khoob fatima aap ka andaz hamaysha chonka daynay wala hota hy nazm ka unwaan bhi maanwiat rakhta hy aur is ka matan bhi wah wah thanx razi
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Post by maya on Jun 2, 2007 10:02:51 GMT 5
Uzair Sahib aur Razi Sahib Nazam pasand karnay aur hosla afzai ka shukria waslam
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Post by rooh on Jun 27, 2007 22:14:38 GMT 5
Dear Fatimah...
Salam...bahot dinoN baad waqt nikal kar sab post parh rahii hun..yuN nahii ke waqt nahiii thaa..par shayad dil nahii thaa..khair aap ki saarii nazmein parhii...as usual dil ko chhoo gaii..aur sabze ziyada ye nazm...
Wo gahraioun main utray ga gahrai uska muqader hay Jiska wajood Payas say Ebaratt hay....
bahot khoob dear...aap se aur bhi aisii hii dilkash nazmon ke ummed kahtey huey
Allah Hafeez
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Post by maya on Jul 1, 2007 21:01:08 GMT 5
Bohat Shukria Ruh Jee
main be itnay din bad ai hun.aur sab say pehlay yahi dekha k ap nay es nazm kay baray main izha e khaial kea... han Ruh jee ! ap theak kahtian hain.yea dil ko be pata nai kea ho jata hay khabi khabar??? waslam
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 3, 2007 21:53:03 GMT 5
Nazm kay unwan nay chaunkaya tu foran thread open kia aur content ko parha unwan mukamal justify hota hay nazm ki zeerein lehr mein shidat e ehsas aur karb ki afaaqi satah maujood hay magar mas'ala wohi hay ke fani hawaly say bahut kamzoor nazm hay is par dhian deay bina sheri haysiat ko gehn lag jata hay is baray socheay ga
aqeel
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Post by neelofar on Jul 3, 2007 22:09:21 GMT 5
hello friends....mai sukhanwar ki nyii member hoon.........is mahfil me apni eik ghazal arsal kerne ki gisaret ker rahi hoon..... ghazal mujh ko mera yaqeen bhot motaber lga ye aor bat bakht bra bekhabar ...lga
soocha tha tum se door nikal jaoNgi mger dekha to har moqaam teri rhguzar lga
binayii mujh se chiin ke yuN le gya kooi roshan hai din mager mujhe pichla pher lga
aankhoN ke sab diye tere raste pe rakh diye tareek iss liye mere di ka nager..............lga
zeer E falak to mil na saki chat sukoon ki neeche zameen ke jo mila apna ghar lga ----------------------------------------------------
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Post by neelofar on Jul 3, 2007 22:14:36 GMT 5
DEFINATION OF WOMAN -------------------------------
maiN ke ek mom ki putli hoon! jis me taqat hai ke har saNche me dhal jati hai ----------------------
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Post by maya on Jul 7, 2007 10:23:07 GMT 5
Jee Aqeel MAlik sahib
Ap nay es nazm ko parha.bay had shukria.aur apki yea baat be fanii eitbaar say kotahiaan muj say ja bajja sarzad hoi hain mgr main wo mareez hun jisko andaaza nahi kay asal takleef kahan hay??? aisay dard ka elaaj kea kejeay? waslam
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 8, 2007 20:39:19 GMT 5
ye ishq nahi asaN bas itna samajh lejay ik aag ga darya hay aur doob kay jana hay
aqeel
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Post by maya on Jul 16, 2007 17:18:30 GMT 5
Aqeel Malik Sahib
darusat farmaya aap nay
waslam
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