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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:28:22 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh................... Nazm ki pasandeedgi ka shukria Nasir Saheb Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:27:41 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Qamar sahib bohat khoob Shukria Rafi Saheb Adab Qamar
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Post by zehrab on May 7, 2009 12:01:40 GMT 5
Dostown ki nazar...ek nazm:
Talash-e Khawab
Saraab waqt hay aur bey khudi haqeeqat hay firaq zehr hay, aur zindgi azziyat hay Kisi khayal ki hiddat sey rooh phunkti hay zehan ke der pe raqam daastan-e hasrat hay
KahaN shauur ke raahoN ke mor pehchaaneN kahaN sey laaeN wo idraak-o hosh ka aalam teri nazar ka talatum, teri jabeeN ka bhanwar jo qalb-o zehn ke rishtowN ko ker gaya berham
her ek samt haiN phailey haqeeqatown ke khandr talash-e khawab mein GerdaaN hay karwaan-e khayal simat gaey hain mah-o saal ek lamhey meiN na subh -o shaam hay baqi na roz-o shab ka sawal
kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 29, 2009 12:55:39 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Adaab. Khoobsoorat ghazal hai. "hijraaN ka rang, derd ke tewar liye huey aayee hay sham yaad ke nishter liye huey weeran raah-e shauq meiN tanha huN gaam zan daamaan-e dil mein yaad-e sitam ger liye huey" Boht si daad hazir hai. Shukria Jooni saheb Khaksar Qamar
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QTTA
Mar 6, 2009 11:01:47 GMT 5
Post by zehrab on Mar 6, 2009 11:01:47 GMT 5
Jamshed Saheb
bohat sachi baat kahi aap ney
is per ek sher yad aa gaya:
ab hay bari baseerton ki Qamar Kho chukey log tow zubaN kab ke
dher sari daad qabool ki jiye
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:16:08 GMT 5
Razi Bhai
jaaney kaisey ab tak aap ki is ghazal sey mehroom raha. Kabhi kabhi yahan aana hota hay aur mein hamesha koshish kerta hun ke aap ka naya kalam parhney ko miley lekin ....
bohat rawan aur gehri ghazal kahi aap ney
khas taur per
baat karnay ki tamanna main yahan aatay hain zindagi baat bananay main guzar jaati hy
kuch to kut_ti hy koi naam raqam kartay huay aur kuch us ko mitaanay main guzar jaati hy
ye 2 ashaar tow jan lewa sher hain......kahan sey nikal ke laaey hain aap ye khayalat.. bohat khub....wah
aur ye sher.......bohat lutf diya is sher ney
din main palkon pay kaai khaab sajaatay hain hum raat tabeer bananay main guzar jaati hy
bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:09:09 GMT 5
Tamaam ashaar bahut passand aye... bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay Qamar sahab.. Sada khush raheay.... Zaki Saheb Meri khush naseebi ke aap jaisey qalam kar ney meri is kawish ko parha aur usey pasand kiya daad ke liye bey had shukria saheb Khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:07:57 GMT 5
Atif Bhai
ye ma'rka-e haq-o batil tow azal sey jari hay aur shayad abad tak jari rahey ga
aap ki is nazm ney bohat sey zakhmon ke munh khol diye hain aur apni majbooriyon, mehroomiyon aur ghaflaton ka ehsas dila diya hay
ek khayal angez, dehakti huee, sulagti huee nazm ke liye mubark bad
Allah karey zor- qalam aur ziyada
Aameen
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:01:23 GMT 5
Neha Ji
Bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney
Razi ney acha comment diya...sher sudher gaya hay us sey
bohat si daad
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:55:56 GMT 5
Neha Ji
bari rawan aur dil ki gehraai sey nikli huee ghazal kahai aap ney
Meri har baat ka mehwar tu hai Yun meri zaat kay andar tu hai
Bohat piyara matla' hay....khub
Tujhe bhoolo'n tou tujhe yad karun Meri socho'n main barabar tu hai
wah....kya khubsoorat khayal hay
Jo chalakta nahin hatho'n se kabhi Us hasee'n chaah ka saaghar tu hai
wah wah jo chalakta naheen hathon sey kabhi....kya bat hay
Tujhe paa kay yun saja loon khud ko Meray jazbaat ka zewar tu hai
bohat khub
Tujhe dekhon tou meri pyas bujhe Meri aankhon ka samnadar tu hai
wah
Kia mera wasta aghyar say bas Meri hasti ka sukhanwar tu hai
yahan hasti ka taluq sukhanwar sey.......zara dekh li jiye isey
may be.....merey lafzon ka sukhanwar tu hay....... shayad Razi ya doosrey sukhawar hazraat koi raaey dey saken.
Tere bin Neha bhala kesay jiye Dil ki deewar bhi aur dar tu hai
neha ji maqta ke doosrey misrey mein wazan ka problem lag raha hay....
Dil ki deewar bhi aur dar....yahan kuch jhatka sa hay...dekh len isey zara
Bohat si daad
Qamar
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SWAAL
Mar 4, 2009 10:39:44 GMT 5
Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:39:44 GMT 5
Jamshaid Saheb
kafi silwaten hain is bayan mein bhi
bohat khub
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:38:04 GMT 5
jin sey thi ahl-e derd ko dermaN ki aarzoo wo bhi kharey haiN haath mein pather liye huey thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey Bohut khoob Qamar sahab...aap ki ghazal ne hamesha ki tarah bohut lutf diya..padh k maza aagaya.. munfarid khayalat aur khubsurat alfaz se muzayyan ghazal k liye daad qubool kijye. Neha Ji aap ki daad bhi aap ki shaeri ki tarah jaame aur murassa hoti hay itni achi daad ke liye bey ha dshukria Khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:36:33 GMT 5
riwayat sy jurri hui khoobsoorat ghazal thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey is shair ny to boht lutf dia qamar bhai khush rahain aur apna klaam gaahay gaahay ataa kartay rahain thanx razi Razi Bhai aap ki mohabbat hay aur husn-e nazar hay werna ham kya aur hamari shaeri kya Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukria Khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Feb 21, 2009 11:36:54 GMT 5
Are wah qamar sahib! kia khoobsoorat kalam share kia he aap ne. thanks. Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee dher sari daad qabool kejie. Nasir Malik Nasir Saheb Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur aisi bherpoor daad ke liye bey had shukria janab Khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:18:59 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish: Arz kiya hay: Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee Adab Qamar bohat khoob MashallahShukria Tahira Saheba Khaksar Qamar
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