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Post by zehrab on Nov 23, 2011 11:33:06 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ke saathiyon ki nazar
ek adna si kawish:
Zlum seh seh ke..zabt ker ker ke Log tow ho chukey hain pather ke
Samney chara ger ke dafter ke chal basa koi khud kushi ker ke
Jashn berpa hay qasr-e shahi meiN Ji rahey haiN awam mer mer ke
Sab Gunah ho gaey haiN jaez ab ssaey mein sheikh ji ke mimber ke
KawaN manziloN pe kya ponhcheN Rah zan roop meiN haiN rah ber ker
Band aankhen kiye rawaN haiN log DaaeroN mein bagher mehwar ke
Muntazar kab sey hay sahar lekin sab makeeN so rahey haiN is gher ke
Adab
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:18:34 GMT 5
Wah Qamar Bhai, Aap ka shukriya, aap ki Ghazal k bahanay Tahira Masood Sahiba bhi aa gayeeN Atif Bhai Chaliye aap kehtey hain tow ham ye ilzam apney ser le letey hain... Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:17:36 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki mehfil mein aik adna si tuk bandi:
YaqeeN Abhaam hona chahta hay JunooN gumnam hona chahta hay
Abhi tak tha dabi sergoshiyon meiN Wo ab paigham hona chahta hay
Bujha ker sab sham’oN ko aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay
Tamaashey ka naye baazigaroN ke Bas ab anjam hona chahta hay
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
adab
Qamar Bohat a'alaa
Manderjah baala ash'aar bohat hi pasand aaey
daad Haazir haiTahira Saheba Ghazal ko pasand kerney ka shukria Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:16:39 GMT 5
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay Zehrab ji bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai lafzon mein daaad ke saath Devi nangrani Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukria Rani ji Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:15:46 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai bahut umda ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay. Bahut Shukriya!
Naveed bhai kay mashwaray ki taeed ka khwastgaar hoon. Himmat afzaai ka shukria Atif Bhai Is bazm ki ronaq kahan gayee janab? Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jul 8, 2011 3:14:47 GMT 5
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay wah ji bahut khoob Bujha ker sari shm'ain aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay yon ho to kaisa ho??? Daad ka shukria Naveed Bhai aap ki advice per amal ker diya hay Shukria again Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Apr 20, 2011 11:26:13 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki mehfil mein aik adna si tuk bandi:
YaqeeN Abhaam hona chahta hay JunooN gumnam hona chahta hay
Abhi tak tha dabi sergoshiyon meiN Wo ab paigham hona chahta hay
Bujha ker sari sham’aen aagahi ki Andhera aam hona chahta hay
Ponhach ke saamney manzil ke apni Koi Nakam Hona chahta hay
Tere hontowN ko chu ker bey khudi meiN Piayala jam hona chahta hay
Teri zulfoN ki resham bandishoN meiN Ye wehshi raam hona chahta hay
Tamaashey ka naye baazigaroN ke Bas ab anjam hona chahta hay
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
adab
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 7, 2009 12:00:03 GMT 5
SukhanwaroN ki nazar ek adna si tuk bandi:
Phool bulbul ko, shama chahiye perwaaney ko ek zanjeer bohat hay tere deewaney ko
Shokh hontowN pe tabasum ki gulabi chamki thaamiye dil ke qayamat hay kaheeN aaney ko
Aakhri bar mere geet ki ley ban jaao saaz-e hasti hay kisi lamha bikher jaaney ko
sokhta Jan ko ab aur hawa mat dena koi angara jala dey na sanam khaaney ko
ham talab gar-e tawajuh haiN faqat rind naheeN Muntazir lab haiN tere saamney khul jaaney ko
apney jazbaat ke aahoo ki tanaabeN khaincho mastiy-e chashm-e ghazalaaN hay behek jaaney ko
kuch tow dereena taluq ka bharam rakh letey aap - ghairoN ki tarah aaey haiN samjhaaney ko
apney daaman meiN inheN aap jaga dey di jey chand aansoo they mere pas yahaN laaney ko
Adab
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:48:53 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai! Takheer ki maazrat. Sarkaari masroofiyaat kay sabab itni khoobsoorat ghazal say mehroom raha. Bila shuba aik umda aur manjhi huwi shaeri ataa ki hai aap nay. Atif Bhai aap ki ye daad mere liye sanad ka derja rakhti hay bohat bohat shukria janab khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:44:53 GMT 5
Neha Ji
wah
kya andaz hay...kya asloob hay khoobsoorat tarakeeb...nazuk nazuk khayalaat
lutf aa gaya
her sher apni jaga mukamil ghazal
dil daad hazir hay
Kher andesh
Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:41:45 GMT 5
Aadaab QAMAR SAHAB, kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN Bohut khubsurat nazm hai ....meri janib se daad qubool kijye. Neha Ji aap ko meri ye nazm pasand aayee....bohat nawazish daad ke liye shukria khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:40:12 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Boht hi khoobsoorat nazm hai. Daad qubool kijiye. Jooni Bhai aap ka husn-e nazar hay janab daad ka shukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:32:08 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib! Bahut khoob soort nazm ataa ki hai aap nay. Daad qabool kijiay! Kia hi behtar ho keh aap aik khoob soorat unwaan bhi daiN iss nazm ko! Atif Saheb Aap ke hukam ki tameel ker di hay janab daad ke liye shukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:29:47 GMT 5
umda aur napi tuli nazm hay dad qubool kejeay Shukria Aqeel Saheb Khaksar Qamar
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:29:12 GMT 5
Wah! Bahut he khoobsorat sharing hai janab ... Khaas taur pe yeh lines tu be'had passand aaii hain ... utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN Sada khush raheay ... Nazm ki pasandeedgi ka aur daad ka shukria Zaki Saheb Adab Qamar
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