zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Feb 16, 2009 11:30:47 GMT 5
Sukhanwaron ki mehfil mein ek haqeer si kawish.....
sholoN ka roop, rang ka mehshar liye huey baaleeN pe wo haiN khawab ka manzer liye huey
hijraaN ka rang, derd ke tewar liye huey aayee hay sham yaad ke nishter liye huey
weeran raah-e shauq meiN tanha huN gaam zan daamaan-e dil mein yaad-e sitam ger liye huey
chup chap dekhtey rahey armaan ki chita aankhoN mein aansoowoN ka samander liye huey
jin sey thi ahl-e derd ko dermaN ki aarzoo wo bhi kharey haiN haath mein pather liye huey
kab sey junooN hay raah-e tamanna mein ser giraN ik aashna sa daagh jiger per liye huey
sad chak perhan mein chupaaey jiger ke chaak aaya huN tere der pe muqadder liye huey
thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey
adab
Qamar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 17, 2009 23:26:55 GMT 5
riwayat sy jurri hui khoobsoorat ghazal
thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey
is shair ny to boht lutf dia qamar bhai khush rahain aur apna klaam gaahay gaahay ataa kartay rahain thanx razi
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neha
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Post by neha on Feb 22, 2009 16:23:35 GMT 5
jin sey thi ahl-e derd ko dermaN ki aarzoo wo bhi kharey haiN haath mein pather liye huey
thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey
Bohut khoob Qamar sahab...aap ki ghazal ne hamesha ki tarah bohut lutf diya..padh k maza aagaya.. munfarid khayalat aur khubsurat alfaz se muzayyan ghazal k liye daad qubool kijye.
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Mar 1, 2009 18:16:00 GMT 5
Tamaam ashaar bahut passand aye... bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay Qamar sahab.. Sada khush raheay....
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 3, 2009 23:23:51 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Adaab. Khoobsoorat ghazal hai.
"hijraaN ka rang, derd ke tewar liye huey aayee hay sham yaad ke nishter liye huey
weeran raah-e shauq meiN tanha huN gaam zan daamaan-e dil mein yaad-e sitam ger liye huey"
Boht si daad hazir hai.
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:36:33 GMT 5
riwayat sy jurri hui khoobsoorat ghazal thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey is shair ny to boht lutf dia qamar bhai khush rahain aur apna klaam gaahay gaahay ataa kartay rahain thanx razi Razi Bhai aap ki mohabbat hay aur husn-e nazar hay werna ham kya aur hamari shaeri kya Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad ka shukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 10:38:04 GMT 5
jin sey thi ahl-e derd ko dermaN ki aarzoo wo bhi kharey haiN haath mein pather liye huey thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey Bohut khoob Qamar sahab...aap ki ghazal ne hamesha ki tarah bohut lutf diya..padh k maza aagaya.. munfarid khayalat aur khubsurat alfaz se muzayyan ghazal k liye daad qubool kijye. Neha Ji aap ki daad bhi aap ki shaeri ki tarah jaame aur murassa hoti hay itni achi daad ke liye bey ha dshukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:09:09 GMT 5
Tamaam ashaar bahut passand aye... bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay Qamar sahab.. Sada khush raheay.... Zaki Saheb Meri khush naseebi ke aap jaisey qalam kar ney meri is kawish ko parha aur usey pasand kiya daad ke liye bey had shukria saheb Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Mar 29, 2009 12:55:39 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Adaab. Khoobsoorat ghazal hai. "hijraaN ka rang, derd ke tewar liye huey aayee hay sham yaad ke nishter liye huey weeran raah-e shauq meiN tanha huN gaam zan daamaan-e dil mein yaad-e sitam ger liye huey" Boht si daad hazir hai. Shukria Jooni saheb Khaksar Qamar
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 7, 2009 9:46:42 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai! Takheer ki maazrat. Sarkaari masroofiyaat kay sabab itni khoobsoorat ghazal say mehroom raha. Bila shuba aik umda aur manjhi huwi shaeri ataa ki hai aap nay.
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:48:53 GMT 5
Qamar Bhai! Takheer ki maazrat. Sarkaari masroofiyaat kay sabab itni khoobsoorat ghazal say mehroom raha. Bila shuba aik umda aur manjhi huwi shaeri ataa ki hai aap nay. Atif Bhai aap ki ye daad mere liye sanad ka derja rakhti hay bohat bohat shukria janab khaksar Qamar
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