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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:18:18 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish: Arz kiya hay: Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee Adab Qamar NICE POETRY ................ BE HAPPY
Thanks a lot Rana Saheb appreciate ur comments. Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:17:29 GMT 5
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee masroofeat ki waja say aik arsay baad ana hoa aur ap ki is ghazal nay taza kar dia bahut napi tuli rawaN si ghazal kehnay par dhairooN dad qabooleay aqeel malik Malik saheb bey had shukria itni achi daad ka. Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Feb 20, 2009 11:16:24 GMT 5
Qamar Sahab bahut khoobsorat kalam share kia hai app ne .... Tamam ashaar qabil-e-daad hain.... laikan yeh ashaar tu bahut passand aye.... Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay..... Sada khush raheay... Zaki saheb Bey had mashkoor hun aap ka ke aap ney meri is kawish ko itney ghaur sey parha...pasand kiya...aur itni sari daad di. Adab Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Feb 16, 2009 11:30:47 GMT 5
Sukhanwaron ki mehfil mein ek haqeer si kawish.....
sholoN ka roop, rang ka mehshar liye huey baaleeN pe wo haiN khawab ka manzer liye huey
hijraaN ka rang, derd ke tewar liye huey aayee hay sham yaad ke nishter liye huey
weeran raah-e shauq meiN tanha huN gaam zan daamaan-e dil mein yaad-e sitam ger liye huey
chup chap dekhtey rahey armaan ki chita aankhoN mein aansoowoN ka samander liye huey
jin sey thi ahl-e derd ko dermaN ki aarzoo wo bhi kharey haiN haath mein pather liye huey
kab sey junooN hay raah-e tamanna mein ser giraN ik aashna sa daagh jiger per liye huey
sad chak perhan mein chupaaey jiger ke chaak aaya huN tere der pe muqadder liye huey
thak ker theher na jaaey kaheeN raah meiN Qamar sadiyoN ka bojh waqt hay ser per liye huey
adab
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:58:04 GMT 5
"Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee" Boht khoob Qamar sahib. Daad hazir hai. Shukria Juni ji khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:57:27 GMT 5
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee wah wah qamar sahab kamal kar dia aap nay aur is shair per to hum jhoom gaay Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi saheb aap jaisey sukhanwar ko meri ye tuk bandi pasand aayee...meri khus naseebi. daad ke liye shukria janab khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:56:14 GMT 5
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee Bohut khubsurat ghazal hai,har shair hi qaabil -e- daad hai Neha Saheba Ghazal ki pasndeedgi ka shukria Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:55:09 GMT 5
bohat bohat shukria Rafi saheb Khaksar Qamar
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zehrab
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Post by zehrab on Nov 20, 2008 10:46:48 GMT 5
Wah Wah Razi saheb
bari murassa ghazal ata ki aap ney
her sher bohat khub hay
daad hazir hay
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:25:04 GMT 5
Jooni ji
aap ney tow deriya ko koozey mein band ker diya
aur is jin ko phir Atif bhai ki jholi mein daal diya
kya andaz hay janab aap ka.
ek choti si magar bohat taweel ma'ani wali nazm ke liye
ye choti si daad
khaksar
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:18:01 GMT 5
Wah Neha ji ek ek sher apni jaga khub sey khub ter hay kis kis ka zikr kiya jaaey...lekin ye sher tow jaisey jaan le gaya:
Dil ka aalam yeh hai jesay koi hasrat ka mazaar Ja baja hum nay muradon kay diye rakhay hain
kis qadar zalim sher kaha aap ney
bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:11:25 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai
bohat murassa ghazal as usual
khas taur per ye ahsaar bohat pasand aaey:
Musaafat ki tawalat ka koi andaza mushkil hay Lipat ker mere qadmoN sey meri raftar hi gum hay......wah
aur
Gila tark-e taluq ka kisi sey kya bhala kertey laboN per jis ney dam tora tha wo iqrar hi gum hay........kya baat hay....lutf aa gaya
ek guzarish hay ager bura na maanen tow:
akhri sher ka doosra misra: "Meezan-e waqt per aa ker mera shehkar hi gum hay"
mein kuch wazan ka mas'ala lag raha hay ya shayed meri kam fehmi ho
Bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 15, 2008 11:28:04 GMT 5
Sukhanwar ehbab ki nazar ek haqeer si kawish:
Arz kiya hay:
Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee Zindgi chain sey basar na huee
Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee
Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee
Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee
Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee
Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee
Ek alam pe hay karam tera KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee
Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee
Adab
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:57:11 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
bohat shukria Rafi saheb is khubsoorat ghazal ko share kerney ka
Khaksar
Qamar
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:55:07 GMT 5
Neha Ji
Bohat rawani hay aap ke kalam mein
bari sadgi sey bohat gehri baaten bayan ker deen aap ney
Bohat achey ashaar dil ko chu jaaney waley
maqta mein kuch abham hay...doosra misra kuch samajh mein naheen aaya......kam aqli meri.... ager kuch wazahat ferma den tow inayat ho gi......
ek bohat achi ghazal per daad hazir hay...qabool fermaaiye
Khaksar
Qamar
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