neha
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Post by neha on Oct 14, 2008 19:52:05 GMT 5
Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai aik new ghazal .
"Dil ki dehleez pay yadon k diye rakhay hain" Jaisay tootay huay khwaabon k diye rakhay hain
Shab -e hijra'n jo teri raah taka karty thin Raah main ab bhi un ankhon k diye rakhay hain
Janay kab in ko naibhanay ka samay aa jaye Yun sambhalay huay wadon k diye rakhay hain
Jo kay ik pal ki judai say ruka karty thin Unhi rukty hui saanson kay diye rakhay hain
Dil ka aalam yeh hai jesay koi hasrat ka mazaar Ja baja hum nay muradon kay diye rakhay hain
Har guzarta hua pal hum say yehi poochta hai Kis ki khatir bhala ashkon kay diye rakhay hain
Qais say keh do kabhi in pay bharosa na karay Dasht-e- ulfat main sarabon kay diye rakhay hain
Jalwa-e-Noor say roshan hai shabistan-e- wujood Jaisay amber pay sitaaron kay diye rakhay hain
Hum nay tou sab ki nigahon say chupa kar Neha Dil kay aangan main gulabon kay diye rakhay hain
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 14, 2008 22:08:31 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh bohat khoob neha g kisi tarah par ghazal kehna waqaee aik mushkil kaam hota hay aap is maiN kamyaab rahi haiN
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 14, 2008 23:38:31 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap nay neha ji thanx razi
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 14, 2008 23:43:25 GMT 5
Neha G, Bpht hi khoobsoorat aur umdah ghazal hai. boht si daad hazir hai. "Har guzarta hua pal hum say yehi poochta hai Kis ki khatir bhala ashkon kay diye rakhay hain"
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:18:01 GMT 5
Wah Neha ji ek ek sher apni jaga khub sey khub ter hay kis kis ka zikr kiya jaaey...lekin ye sher tow jaisey jaan le gaya:
Dil ka aalam yeh hai jesay koi hasrat ka mazaar Ja baja hum nay muradon kay diye rakhay hain
kis qadar zalim sher kaha aap ney
bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 16, 2008 19:54:57 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh bohat khoob neha g kisi tarah par ghazal kehna waqaee aik mushkil kaam hota hay aap is maiN kamyaab rahi haiN Thanx Rafi sahab...aap ki hosla afzai k liye bht shukar guzar hoon.
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 16, 2008 19:56:03 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap nay neha ji thanx razi Shukriya Razi bhai
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 16, 2008 20:03:21 GMT 5
Neha G, Bpht hi khoobsoorat aur umdah ghazal hai. boht si daad hazir hai. "Har guzarta hua pal hum say yehi poochta hai Kis ki khatir bhala ashkon kay diye rakhay hain" Thanx a lot janab
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 16, 2008 20:12:18 GMT 5
Wah Neha ji ek ek sher apni jaga khub sey khub ter hay kis kis ka zikr kiya jaaey...lekin ye sher tow jaisey jaan le gaya: Dil ka aalam yeh hai jesay koi hasrat ka mazaar Ja baja hum nay muradon kay diye rakhay hain kis qadar zalim sher kaha aap ney bohat si daad Khaksar Qamar Thanx a lot Qamar sahab
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 17, 2008 15:56:14 GMT 5
Qais say keh do kabhi in pay bharosa na karay Dasht-e- ulfat main sarabon kay diye rakhay hain Wah!! bahut he umdah Neha Ji......
bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay....Sada khush raheay.....
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 17, 2008 22:33:34 GMT 5
Qais say keh do kabhi in pay bharosa na karay Dasht-e- ulfat main sarabon kay diye rakhay hain Wah!! bahut he umdah Neha Ji......
bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay....Sada khush raheay..... Bohut bohut shukriya Zaki sahab
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 20, 2008 8:55:15 GMT 5
BAHUT KHOOBSURAT GHAZL HAY
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 20, 2008 16:18:51 GMT 5
BAHUT KHOOBSURAT GHAZL HAY Thanx a lot janab
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sahil
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Post by sahil on Dec 12, 2008 23:41:11 GMT 5
Neha Ji ! Zinda Baad...........Boht Khoob.........Jamshaid Sahil
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neha
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Post by neha on Dec 13, 2008 22:02:57 GMT 5
Neha Ji ! Zinda Baad...........Boht Khoob.........Jamshaid Sahil Shukriya Sahil sahab
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