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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 12, 2008 19:52:40 GMT 5
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 12, 2008 21:06:38 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib, Aik boht hi khoobsoorat ghazal per boht si daad aur mubarak qubool kijiye. Meri naaqis ra'aiy hai keh doosray sh'er kay pehlay misra'a per nazr-e-sani kijiye.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 13, 2008 0:34:38 GMT 5
Shukria jooni sahib
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neha
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Post by neha on Oct 14, 2008 19:57:54 GMT 5
Mere apnon ki mujh par hain karam farmaiyan itny Meri apni kahaani say mera kirdar hi gum hai
Bohut khoob Rafi sahab...itny khubsurat aur murassa ghazal likhnay par meri taraf se dhairon daad haazir hai.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 14, 2008 22:09:55 GMT 5
SHukria Neha g
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 15, 2008 23:31:29 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap nay rafi sahab razi
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:11:25 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai
bohat murassa ghazal as usual
khas taur per ye ahsaar bohat pasand aaey:
Musaafat ki tawalat ka koi andaza mushkil hay Lipat ker mere qadmoN sey meri raftar hi gum hay......wah
aur
Gila tark-e taluq ka kisi sey kya bhala kertey laboN per jis ney dam tora tha wo iqrar hi gum hay........kya baat hay....lutf aa gaya
ek guzarish hay ager bura na maanen tow:
akhri sher ka doosra misra: "Meezan-e waqt per aa ker mera shehkar hi gum hay"
mein kuch wazan ka mas'ala lag raha hay ya shayed meri kam fehmi ho
Bohat si daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 17, 2008 2:20:30 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap nay rafi sahab razi Hausla afzai ka shukria Razi bhai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 17, 2008 2:24:33 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai bohat murassa ghazal as usual khas taur per ye ahsaar bohat pasand aaey: Musaafat ki tawalat ka koi andaza mushkil hay Lipat ker mere qadmoN sey meri raftar hi gum hay......wah aur Gila tark-e taluq ka kisi sey kya bhala kertey laboN per jis ney dam tora tha wo iqrar hi gum hay........kya baat hay....lutf aa gaya ek guzarish hay ager bura na maanen tow: akhri sher ka doosra misra: "Meezan-e waqt per aa ker mera shehkar hi gum hay" mein kuch wazan ka mas'ala lag raha hay ya shayed meri kam fehmi ho Bohat si daad Khaksar Qamar Qamar sahib ghazal pasand farmanay ka shukria aap ki baat say ittefaaq karta hooN is misray maiN meezaan mukamal nahi parha jata isi liay behr say kharij lagta hay yeh asal misra nesaab e waqt maiN aa kar mera shahkaar hi gum hay
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 23, 2008 15:21:00 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob Rafi sahab........ bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay......
Sada khush raheay.....
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 23, 2008 19:53:47 GMT 5
Shukria Zaki sahib
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