zehrab
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Post by zehrab on May 7, 2009 12:01:40 GMT 5
Dostown ki nazar...ek nazm:
Talash-e Khawab
Saraab waqt hay aur bey khudi haqeeqat hay
firaq zehr hay, aur zindgi azziyat hay
Kisi khayal ki hiddat sey rooh phunkti hay
zehan ke der pe raqam daastan-e hasrat hay
KahaN shauur ke raahoN ke mor pehchaaneN
kahaN sey laaeN wo idraak-o hosh ka aalam
teri nazar ka talatum, teri jabeeN ka bhanwar
jo qalb-o zehn ke rishtowN ko ker gaya berham
her ek samt haiN phailey haqeeqatown ke khandr
talash-e khawab mein GerdaaN hay karwaan-e khayal
simat gaey hain mah-o saal ek lamhey meiN
na subh -o shaam hay baqi na roz-o shab ka sawal
kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN
ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN
utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam
mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN
Qamar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 7, 2009 22:39:06 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Qamar sahib
bohat khoob
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Post by nasirmalik on May 8, 2009 9:20:00 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh...................
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zaki
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Post by zaki on May 12, 2009 13:51:28 GMT 5
Wah! Bahut he khoobsorat sharing hai janab ... Khaas taur pe yeh lines tu be'had passand aaii hain ...
utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam
mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN
Sada khush raheay ...
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 14, 2009 18:03:28 GMT 5
umda aur napi tuli nazm hay dad qubool kejeay
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 31, 2009 11:54:03 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib!
Bahut khoob soort nazm ataa ki hai aap nay.
Daad qabool kijiay!
Kia hi behtar ho keh aap aik khoob soorat unwaan bhi daiN iss nazm ko!
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Jun 4, 2009 1:14:04 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib,
Boht hi khoobsoorat nazm hai.
Daad qubool kijiye.
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neha
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Post by neha on Jun 20, 2009 15:21:58 GMT 5
Aadaab QAMAR SAHAB,
kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN
ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN
utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam
mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN
Bohut khubsurat nazm hai ....meri janib se daad qubool kijye.
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:27:41 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Qamar sahib bohat khoob Shukria Rafi Saheb Adab Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:28:22 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh................... Nazm ki pasandeedgi ka shukria Nasir Saheb Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:29:12 GMT 5
Wah! Bahut he khoobsorat sharing hai janab ... Khaas taur pe yeh lines tu be'had passand aaii hain ... utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN Sada khush raheay ... Nazm ki pasandeedgi ka aur daad ka shukria Zaki Saheb Adab Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:29:47 GMT 5
umda aur napi tuli nazm hay dad qubool kejeay Shukria Aqeel Saheb Khaksar Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:32:08 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib! Bahut khoob soort nazm ataa ki hai aap nay. Daad qabool kijiay! Kia hi behtar ho keh aap aik khoob soorat unwaan bhi daiN iss nazm ko! Atif Saheb Aap ke hukam ki tameel ker di hay janab daad ke liye shukria Khaksar Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:40:12 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Boht hi khoobsoorat nazm hai. Daad qubool kijiye. Jooni Bhai aap ka husn-e nazar hay janab daad ka shukria Khaksar Qamar |
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 21, 2009 11:41:45 GMT 5
Aadaab QAMAR SAHAB, kahaN hay shauq ki manzil koi bataao hameN ke justaju ka hi dam ghut ke reh na jaaey kaheeN utha naqab-e taghaful, tu hi bata dey sanam mareez-e gham ke naseeboN mein Maut hay ke naheeN Bohut khubsurat nazm hai ....meri janib se daad qubool kijye. Neha Ji aap ko meri ye nazm pasand aayee....bohat nawazish daad ke liye shukria khaksar Qamar |
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