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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 27, 2009 14:38:36 GMT 5
Dosto Haalaat-e-Haazira kay pas-e-manzar maiN likhi gayee aik nazm aap ki khidmat maiN paish kar raha hooN. Umeed hai keh aap ko pasand aay gi.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 27, 2009 19:33:59 GMT 5
Atif Mirza zahab
ap nay tu sher e ashoob likha hay hamri mahroomiooN aur nakameoN par jo between the lines tanz kia wo seedha dil meiN ja kar laga bahut acha aur npa tula matter hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 28, 2009 0:46:20 GMT 5
boht khoob aatif bhai aap ki yeh nazm hum ny to ab suni hi nahin thee boht umda aur boht kuch sochnay par majboor karnay wali shaairi thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 28, 2009 21:45:14 GMT 5
Atif Mirza zahab ap nay tu sher e ashoob likha hay hamri mahroomiooN aur nakameoN par jo between the lines tanz kia wo seedha dil meiN ja kar laga bahut acha aur npa tula matter hay dad qabool kejeay Aqeel Sb bahut shukriya hosla afzayee ka. Yeh dar asl aik nouHa hai, awaz hai hum musalmanoN kay dil ki. Bus aik roz ghabar nikal kar kaGhaz per aayaa aur ab himmat kar k aap kay samnay lay aayaa hooN. Sharf-e-Pazeerayee kay liay mamnoon hooN!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 28, 2009 21:50:17 GMT 5
boht khoob aatif bhai aap ki yeh nazm hum ny to ab suni hi nahin thee boht umda aur boht kuch sochnay par majboor karnay wali shaairi thanx razi Razi bhai! Yeh nazm 2003 maiN yeh likhi thi aur uss kay baad yeh kaghza maiN kahiN rakh kay bhool gaya tha, kuchh roz pehlay hi bar aamad huwa aur nok palak durust kar kay aaap ki khidmat maiN paish kar di, aap ko pasand aayee mujhay khushi huwi keh
Kuchh hashr tau in say uththay ga, kuchh door tau naalay jaieN gay!
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Jan 29, 2009 23:10:43 GMT 5
Boht Umdah Atif Bhai.
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Post by Tanweer on Jan 30, 2009 16:22:41 GMT 5
Atif Mirza saheb,
ye qalam aapkay liey sirf bohat sari "DAAD" he raqam kar paya esay qabool kejiey
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 30, 2009 18:45:25 GMT 5
Jooni bhai bahut shukriya!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 30, 2009 18:46:36 GMT 5
Atif Mirza saheb, ye qalam aapkay liey sirf bohat sari "DAAD" he raqam kar paya esay qabool kejiey Tanweer Sahib aap kay qalam say Daad ki ataaygi meray liay sand hai! Qabool hai, shukriya.
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:07:57 GMT 5
Atif Bhai
ye ma'rka-e haq-o batil tow azal sey jari hay aur shayad abad tak jari rahey ga
aap ki is nazm ney bohat sey zakhmon ke munh khol diye hain aur apni majbooriyon, mehroomiyon aur ghaflaton ka ehsas dila diya hay
ek khayal angez, dehakti huee, sulagti huee nazm ke liye mubark bad
Allah karey zor- qalam aur ziyada
Aameen
Qamar
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 14, 2009 18:53:06 GMT 5
Qamar bhai! Zarra nawazi hai keh aap nay iss adna si kaawish ko saraahaa. Dil ki aawaz thi so qalam nay aap tak pohoNchanay maiN madad ki. Haqeeqat yehi hai keh Ummat-e-Muslima iss waqt zair-e-ataab hai. Dua kijiay keh Allah Taalaa mushkilaat aasaan karay.
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Post by H BASHIR QADRI on Apr 8, 2009 19:01:20 GMT 5
verygood aatif saahib bahut khoob soorst klaam hay
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:32:39 GMT 5
bohat Theek manzar kashee ki hai Atif Bah'ee aap ne
Alllah Ta'ala is derdnaak Surat-eHaal per reham kare .Aameen
Jazakomullah
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 25, 2009 17:47:07 GMT 5
Qadri sahib Aur Tahira behn aap ka shukriya.
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