neha
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Post by neha on Jan 16, 2009 22:43:43 GMT 5
"Raat bhi, neend bhi, kahani bhi" Aakhrish so gai thin Naani bhi
Chand badli main chup gaya jisdam Kho gai chaandni suhaani bhi
Ik tou chahat thi be-panah terii Aur kuch kuch thi mein dwaani bhi
Aaai aur aa kay bas chali bhi gai Chaar din ki hi thi jawani bhi
Haaye uss bewafa kay lehjay main Josh tha soz bhi rawani bhi
Wo jo paareena ho gaya qissa Kuch humain yaad hai zabani bhi
Tum se chup kar zara gham-e-hasti Ik khushii hai humain churani bhi
Kuch tou aaamaal-e-akhirat kar lain Maut aakhir humain hai aani bhi
Jaanay kitno'n ki jaan lay lay gi Ufff yeh badhty hui girani bhi
Zard mausam kay jesi aay Neha Ho gai apniii zindagani bhi
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 16, 2009 23:40:18 GMT 5
achhi ghazal hai.
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neha
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Post by neha on Jan 17, 2009 0:19:36 GMT 5
Shukriya, nawazish.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 3, 2009 0:32:48 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy aap ki neha ji is shair main aap ko aik mamooli tabdeeli karna ho gee Ik tou chahat thi be-panah terii Aur kuch kuch thi mein deewani bhi
doosray misray main deewani ki bajaay dwaani istamaal ho ga
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 3, 2009 23:22:51 GMT 5
Bahut khoob soorat ghazal hai Neha Sahiba! Daad hazir hai
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neha
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Post by neha on Feb 5, 2009 16:17:22 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy aap ki neha ji is shair main aap ko aik mamooli tabdeeli karna ho gee Ik tou chahat thi be-panah terii Aur kuch kuch thi mein deewani bhi doosray misray main deewani ki bajaay dwaani istamaal ho ga Thanx Razi bhai...mein kar dety hoon change
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neha
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Post by neha on Feb 5, 2009 16:18:57 GMT 5
Bahut khoob soorat ghazal hai Neha Sahiba! Daad hazir hai Bohut shukriya Atif sahab
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 4, 2009 11:01:23 GMT 5
Neha Ji
Bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney
Razi ney acha comment diya...sher sudher gaya hay us sey
bohat si daad
Qamar
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neha
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Post by neha on Mar 6, 2009 0:33:35 GMT 5
Neha Ji Bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney Razi ney acha comment diya...sher sudher gaya hay us sey bohat si daad Qamar Bohut shukriya janab.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 7, 2009 23:46:56 GMT 5
Boht hi khoobsoorat ghazal.
Boht sari Daad qubool kijiye.
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neha
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Post by neha on Mar 13, 2009 15:52:27 GMT 5
Boht hi khoobsoorat ghazal. Boht sari Daad qubool kijiye. Bohut shukriya Jooni
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