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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:11:49 GMT 5
Gulzaar mahke Devi, dil dil ko hai duaayein Manthan kiiya jo man ka anubhuti ek paayi.
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 18, 2008 20:48:05 GMT 5
ek gazal march mein women's day ke liye likhi thi. agar ise behtar banane ke liye koi raah ban pade to zaroor bataiyega.
Gazal: 45
Ye hai pehchaan ek aurat ki maaN bahen, biwi, beti ya Devi.
Apne aanchal ki chaanv mein sabko De rahi hai panaah aurat hi.
Dariya ashkoN ka paar karti vo Zindagi ki bhaNwar mein jo rahti.
duniyaaN vale badal gaye, lekin ek main hi hoon jo nahin badli.
Jitni oonchi imaaratein haiN ye Main to lagti hoon utni hi choti.
benakaaboN ki bheed mein khokar khuD vo parda nasheeN nahin hoti.125
Devi Nandrani
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 18, 2008 20:43:01 GMT 5
Kanwal tumhare phoolon ki sugandh ka lutf lene aa gayi aaj manch par, bahut miss karti hoon is mehfil ko
Bhale toot jaana dehar ke sitam se Magar toot kar bhi adaaboN meiN rehna
ek aap ki zameen par aapke liye
vo aukaat bhoola tha apni sada se laga usko accha nawabon mein rahna
wishes
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 18, 2008 20:35:54 GMT 5
Nadeemji bahut hi jazbaat se bharpoor hai ek ek sher daad kabool ho
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 18, 2008 20:31:53 GMT 5
Anmol ji
Bahut nazakat se talash zari ki hai
maiN jab tak bhi zindaa hooN Anmol, us ki kamee naag ban ban ke Dastii rahe gi
ek isi silsile mein
Jo dil mein base ho, nazar par n aayeN Sada yaad unki to aati rahegi
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:49:11 GMT 5
KaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAsha aisa ho paata!!!!!!! Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:48:16 GMT 5
Razi saheb Is Mubarak mauke par aap ko aur manch ke sabhi sukhanwar doston ko meri shubhkamnayein hai sukhanwar par jaane kya paaya , par jo bhi paaya vo lajawab fan ka suroor raha hai. shubhkamnaon sahit Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:36:32 GMT 5
Rafi saheb Nayab gazal Sukoon ka ek bhi lamha............!! Bahut sunder ye to bhala ho urdu ka jo main pad pati hoon, varna jane kya khone ke chances rahte.
Kya aisa ho sakta hai kahin hum hindi se Urdu mein transcript kar paayen Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:31:29 GMT 5
:)Gazal
Humne paaya to bahut kam hai, bahut khoyaa hai Dil hamaara labe-dariya par bahut royaa hai.
Kuch na kuch tootkar judta hai yahaan to yaaro Humne toote hue sapnon ko bahut dhoyaa hai.
Arsaa lagta hai jo pane mein, vo pal mein khoya Beej afsoos ka sahra mein bahut boyaa hai.
Teri yaadon ke mile saaye bahut sheetal se Unke ahsaas se tan-man ko bahut dhoyaa hai.
Hoke bedaar vo dekho to savere ka samaaN Jaagne ka hai ye mausam, vo bahut soyaa hai.
imtihaaN zeest ne kitne hi liye haiN Devi un saleebon ko jawaani ne bahut dhoyaa hai.124
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:24:48 GMT 5
Zaamin bahut khoob likha hai. ye sher acha laga
tere hone se 'ayaaN hai hayaat-e-hoor-o-tahoor teri qurbat ko maiN jannat ka hii paighaam likhooN
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:19:21 GMT 5
mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi!
Liye tishanagi umr bar jo chale hain Sada pyaas aise hi badti rahegi
bahut achi lagi aapki gazal Anmol ji Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 13:05:35 GMT 5
azaab bakhshe
maiN apni kitab e hasti
ka intesaab uss ke nam likh dooN
bahut Khoob Neelofar ji
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:59:33 GMT 5
Raazi saheb
aapka tahe dil se shukriya Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:53:19 GMT 5
Bahut Bahut shukraguzar hoon aap sabhiki. Is Bazm mein samil hona ek sukhad anubhav hai wishes Devi
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gazal ,
Jun 14, 2008 12:45:52 GMT 5
Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:45:52 GMT 5
Dishaad ji is khoobsoorat gazal ke liye aapko jitni daad doon vo kam hai
shabdon ka silsila kam padta hai isliye ssneh Devi Nangrani
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