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Post by dnangrani on May 2, 2011 14:36:18 GMT 5
AyaaN ker ke jigar ke daagh apney Qamar badnam hona chahta hay
Zehrab ji bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai lafzon mein daaad ke saath Devi nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on May 2, 2011 14:29:01 GMT 5
Gazal
Ab n baki nishan raha hoga
Jo likha ret par mita hoga
Aad men dosti ke dushman hi
var peechhe se kar raha hoga
Raah chattan ne jise di vo
Shakhas faulad sa raha hoga
Usaki nas-nas sihar uthi hogi
dard ne jab use chhua hoga
Ramz jisako n jeene ki aai
zindagi ne use jiya hoga
Basti raushan n yoon hui hogi
dil kisi ka vahan jala hoga
kar n parahez khaar se, jiska
gul se nata sada raha hoga
Maujen sahil se aake takaraai
dil men toofaaN koi utha hoga
Hoti saragoshiyan n yoon Devi
Bejaubani ne kuch kaha hoga
Soch ki shamma bujh gai Devi
Koi sooraj naya uga hoga. 115
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on May 2, 2011 14:12:01 GMT 5
Razi saheb evam Atif ji aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad is mehifil mein mujhe saheek karne ke liye. apne prayason ko pesh karne ka yeh manch bahut hi protsahjanak hai Devi nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 19, 2011 23:19:47 GMT 5
Be asar har baddua hoti rahi uske liye Amma bapoo ki duaon ka asar hi hoga Vo.
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 19, 2011 23:09:05 GMT 5
Pahli baar is manch par ghazal post kar rahi hoon. yeh manch mere liye ek den rahi hai jahan aakar main bahut kuch seekh paati hoon. Aae bhi yahi hoga isi Ummed se..
Gazal:
Mere khuda kuch aisa kar, Dil se mitaade teeragi "jalte rahen deepak sada, Qayam rahe ye raushni"
Ye shairi kya cheez hai? alfaaz ki jaadoogari Tere liye aavaaragi, mere liye deevangee!
Gurbat ke ghar mein dosto! faaqe abhi tak haiN vahi Haalaat gar yoon hi raheN, kaise mitegi bhukmari
Le kar udaasi aankh men, chupchaap baithe bazam meiN Aaya gaya koi nahi, muddat se jheli khamushi
Girte rahe, uthate rahe, khud se sada ladte rahe Is zindagi ki jung mein, haare kabhi jeete kabhi
Jalta raha kis aag men, jaane chaman sham-o-sahar Samajhega koi baagabaan ki kya kabhi lacharagi
Jaani hui vo raah thi, pahachaan ka vo mod tha Ik doosare ke vaaste phir kyon the ham tum ajanabi?
Aaine men yoon muskura kar dekhna kya jurm tha Haasil mujhe kyouN fir hui Devi teri narazagi..98 Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 19, 2011 22:54:51 GMT 5
lambe arse ke baad vapsi mubarak hai hamein jo Roman mein post kar paate hai. Ek help- Apni ghazal post karne ke liye..where to start after logging. Pl let me know the thread that I need to hold Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 18, 2011 19:36:00 GMT 5
Bahut hi umda bhav poorn ghazal
Dard piyala dekar mujhko Kuch to wo bhi tadpa hoga
Bahut Khoob Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Sept 5, 2008 8:59:33 GMT 5
Atif Ji
Dua mangta hai is vighnavinayak Ganpathi ji ke dar par jiska Parv yahan Chal raha hai HIndustan mein. Mangal kamnaon ke saath Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 28, 2008 11:58:05 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! Koi to hota jo apnepan ke rishton ka kuch hissab rakhta Bahut subnder bhav poorna soch ka unwaan Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:53:47 GMT 5
Thanks Razi Ji Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:51:57 GMT 5
Gazal
Tapti dopahri mein har dam chanv chahe mera man Gunguni-si dhoop ko phir pal mein tarse mera man
Jab kshitij ke paar dekha kashtiyon ko doobte Saath unke doobte sooraj- sa doobe mera man.
shokhiaaN youvan ki, bachpan ki sharaarat beshumaar Dekhkar yaadoN ka sheesha tilmilaaye mera man.
gadishoN ki dhool mein dhaNste hai mere paanV jab Chatpataye chootne ko changulooN se mera man.
Bewafayi, berukhi uski rahi aadat sada Chupke -chupke tanha baitha aaj roye mera man
Baraha yaadon ke angnaayee mein ghoon aati hooN main Laakh usko main manaooN, par na mane mera man.
AndhiaoN mein bhi jale haiN aas ke Deepak sada Saaye mein unke hi Devi jhilmilaaye mera man.
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:34:40 GMT 5
GHAZAL Usey to khaab kisi aur ke suhaney lagey Hamarey dil se nikaltey jisey zamaney lagey Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey JinheN panah di ham ne, wohi bacha ke nazar hamrey ghar meN naey raastey bananey lagey Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey Hamri kam nagahi pe wo khud bhi hairaN tha Ham apna jaan ke jisko galey laganey lagey ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Wo jin ke naam se pehchaan ek ehd ki thi Charagh, Tashie, dam e sehr wo Thikaney lagey Tashie Zaheer, Chairman Urdu Academy of North America, California, USA Bahut khoob!! ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Lajawaab sher hai Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:30:28 GMT 5
Bahut hi achi Gazal ke liye daad kahna kafi nahin, par kya kahoon isi soch mein Bahut Khoob tab tak Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:23:00 GMT 5
Amjad Ji
Gazal ka har ek sher bahut hi lajawaab
Achi taa umr aasman peh uRta rahaa magar marne ke baa'd thoRi zameeN chaahiye mujhe
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:13:17 GMT 5
Ansoo ek na zaya karma, ye bemul anmol hai moti Dil ke zakhmon ko seena hai is paani ko taar banaakar.
Devi
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