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Post by dnangrani on Aug 18, 2008 20:48:05 GMT 5
ek gazal march mein women's day ke liye likhi thi. agar ise behtar banane ke liye koi raah ban pade to zaroor bataiyega.
Gazal: 45
Ye hai pehchaan ek aurat ki maaN bahen, biwi, beti ya Devi.
Apne aanchal ki chaanv mein sabko De rahi hai panaah aurat hi.
Dariya ashkoN ka paar karti vo Zindagi ki bhaNwar mein jo rahti.
duniyaaN vale badal gaye, lekin ek main hi hoon jo nahin badli.
Jitni oonchi imaaratein haiN ye Main to lagti hoon utni hi choti.
benakaaboN ki bheed mein khokar khuD vo parda nasheeN nahin hoti.125
Devi Nandrani
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 19, 2008 23:15:39 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal hy devi ji aurat k hawalay sy isay aik nazm kaha jaay to yeh ziaada behtar ho ga thanx razi
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:53:47 GMT 5
Thanks Razi Ji Devi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 1, 2008 6:17:46 GMT 5
wah
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 3, 2008 22:29:14 GMT 5
Bahut khoob devi ji!
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Post by waqaar on Sept 6, 2008 0:36:13 GMT 5
Devi ji, aadaab! umeed hay kher kheriYat say hoNgii. aChh~ii naZ^m kahii hay aapnay. aCHh~aa likh~nay lag gaii haiN. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Sept 7, 2008 15:45:03 GMT 5
Devi Nandrani jee bohot khoob klaam hai aap ka, dad qabool kejay
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 9, 2008 10:55:59 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob ......
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 15, 2008 14:19:37 GMT 5
Nandrani ji!
Bohat khoob likha ap nay, pasand aaya, daad qabool kejiey.
Tanweer
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Raheel
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by Raheel on Dec 2, 2008 20:30:51 GMT 5
Saheh kehti hain ... Bahut umda!
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Dec 2, 2008 21:01:22 GMT 5
khoobsoorat aur umdah.
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