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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:42:51 GMT 5
Gazal
Taaron ka noor lekar ye rat dhal rahee hai Dam todatee huee si ik shama jal rahee hai.
Neendon kee khvahishon men raten guzaratee hoon Sapanon kee aas ab tak dil men hee pal rahee hai.
Aise n doobate ham pahale jo tham lete Maujon kee god men ab kashtee sanbhal rahee hai.
Tum jab juda hue to sab kuchh ujad gaya tha Tum aa gae to duniyan karavat badal rahee hai.
Is jindagee men raunak kam to naheen hai ‘Devi’ Bas ik teree kamee hee din rat khal rahee hai.11
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:35:12 GMT 5
Rafi Saheb Naya andaaz bahut pasand aaya daad ke saath Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 3, 2008 21:25:04 GMT 5
Nadeem ji
aap khush naseeb hai
tujh ko hi mangna nahen aaya mayri jholi to bhar chuka mera ishq
aata hai maangna sabhi ko par chedi jholi bhare to kaise koi.
Daad ke saath
Devi nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 3, 2008 21:16:41 GMT 5
Anmollji
ati sunder gazal ko pesh kiya hai. bahut hi sajwat se buni hui
miree her Khataa yaad rakhe gi dunyaa her ik ki nazar ta'na kastii rahe gi
yehi to hai karti rahi hai sada se yahi duniyaan aage bhi karti rahegi.
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 11:06:14 GMT 5
:)Gazal: 2
DeewarO-Dar the, chat thi, vo acha makaan tha Do chaar teeliyOn pe hi kitna guman tha.
Jub tak ki dil mein teri yaadein jawan thiN ChoTe se ek ghar mein saara jahan tha.
ShabdOn ke teer choDe gaye hum pe is tarah Har zaKhm ka hamare dil par nishan tha.
Tanha nahin hai tu hi yahan aur hain bahut Tere na mere sar pe koi saybaan tha.
Koi nahin tha Devi museebat mein mere saath Bas main, mera muqadar aur aasman tha.
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:58:39 GMT 5
Hamid ji
bahut hi sunder gazal , sunder matle ke saath
woh ahsaan hum per jataanay lagay khud kau apni nazar say giraanay lagay
daad kabool ho Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:53:23 GMT 5
Gazal ke intezaar mein
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:52:04 GMT 5
woh muhabbat hee kerney aata hai peeche nafrat jo chod aataa hai.
bahut acha laga padkar
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:48:04 GMT 5
Rafi saheb aapka dhanyawaad vo humsafar hai use saath lekar chalna hai.
yahi poetry ke saath hamara rishta bhi hai.
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:46:58 GMT 5
Priya Sunita bahut acha lagta hai tere mahkte hue shabdon se guftagoo karte hue. thanks sunita wishes DEvi
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:45:29 GMT 5
WaQaar acha laga ki tumne dhyaan se padke apni vichar v rai se awagat kara diya. dhanyawaad ke saath
Devi aajkal mumbai mein hoon.
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Post by dnangrani on Mar 31, 2008 13:50:44 GMT 5
:)Gazal: 1
Kitne piye hai dard ke ansoo bataOn kya Ye dasTaN gam bhi kisi ko sunaaOn kya?
RishTOn ke aaine mein dararein jo paD gayi Ab aaine se apna hi chehra chupaOn kya?
Dushaman jo aaj ban gaye, kal tak to bhai the Majbooriyaan hai meri, main tumse chupaOn kya?
charOn taraf se tez hawaOn mein hoon ghiri In andhiyOn ke beech mein Deepak jalaaOn kya?
Dewaangi mein kaT gaye mausam bahaar ke Ab patjhaDOn ke khauf se daaman bachaaOn kya?
Saazish mere khilaaf mere dostOn ki thi Ilzaam dushmanOn pe mai Devi lagaaOn kya?
Devi Nangrani
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Post by dnangrani on Mar 31, 2008 13:43:59 GMT 5
Nahin usne hargiz raza rab ki paayi Nahin jisne bhi haQ ki roti kamaayi. Jo vaade se apne mukarte nahin hai Hai milti unhiN ko khuda ki khudaayi. Daya ke daroN ko jo hai khatkhataate Dua banke ujli kiran milne aayi. Mili manzilein usko beshak yahin par jahaN jisne himmat ki shaama jalaayi. Khudi ko mitta kar Khuda ko hai paana Hamari samajh mein yahi baat aayi. Raha jaagta jo bhi sote mein Devi MuQaddar ki deta nahin vo duhaayi Devi ji bohat arsay ba,ad aap ki ghazal dekhi khoobsoorat khayalaat sachaai kay saath khushbu bakhairtay huwa daad qabool farmaiay Rafi Sahe aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad, Sach kaha bahut arse ke baad!!! Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Mar 31, 2008 13:42:38 GMT 5
Sunita ji aapke gulshan ke mahkte phool mile , tahe dil se dhanyawaad is gazal ko pasand karne ke liye. ssneh Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Mar 27, 2008 17:11:07 GMT 5
Raazi saheb sach kaha hai manzar to achaanak hi badalta hy achaanak hadson ki tarah bahut achi rachna ke liye badhayi sweekarein.
sadar
Devi
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