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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 12:42:51 GMT 5
Gazal
Taaron ka noor lekar ye rat dhal rahee hai Dam todatee huee si ik shama jal rahee hai.
Neendon kee khvahishon men raten guzaratee hoon Sapanon kee aas ab tak dil men hee pal rahee hai.
Aise n doobate ham pahale jo tham lete Maujon kee god men ab kashtee sanbhal rahee hai.
Tum jab juda hue to sab kuchh ujad gaya tha Tum aa gae to duniyan karavat badal rahee hai.
Is jindagee men raunak kam to naheen hai ‘Devi’ Bas ik teree kamee hee din rat khal rahee hai.11
Devi Nangrani
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 15:45:17 GMT 5
Wah Devi ji! Qabil-e-daad hai aap ki poori ghazal. KhaS taur per aap nay Qafia bahut khoob soorat chunaa hai. Aur likhiay.......
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Post by Bilal Mirza on Jun 14, 2008 17:54:23 GMT 5
Devi sahiba aap kighazal bohot bhayee. Har aik sher khoob hai. Bharpoor daad deta hoon. Qabool kijiey.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 14, 2008 23:25:23 GMT 5
Gazal
Taaron ka noor lekar ye rat dhal rahee hai Dam todatee huee si ik shama jal rahee hai.
Neendon kee khvahishon men raten guzaratee hoon Sapanon kee aas ab tak dil men hee pal rahee hai.
Aise n doobate ham pahale jo tham lete Maujon kee god men ab kashtee sanbhal rahee hai.
Tum jab juda hue to sab kuchh ujad gaya tha Tum aa gae to duniyan karavat badal rahee hai.
Is jindagee men raunak kam to naheen hai ‘Devi’ Bas ik teree kamee hee din rat khal rahee hai.11
Devi Nangrani har aetebaar say khoobsoorat ghazal Devi ji daad haazir hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 15, 2008 10:03:57 GMT 5
achi lagi ap ki ghazal
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 29, 2008 15:12:55 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy devi g daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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