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Post by neelofar on May 21, 2008 1:42:06 GMT 5
INTESAAB USS KE NAAM....... **********************
Kayi din se maiN yahi soochti hooN
ke jiss ne tamam umr ki reaazatoN k bedle
azaab bakhshe
maiN apni kitab e hasti
ka intesaab uss ke nam likh dooN
hawa k shanoN pe shaam likh ker
usse maiN subhe dawam likh doonn!!!!!!!! ***************
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 22, 2008 22:31:47 GMT 5
wahh
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 1:58:49 GMT 5
Aik Ache khayaal par daad e guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 2, 2008 9:31:45 GMT 5
khoobsoorat nazm hay mukhtasir magar achoota khyaal daad hazir hy thanx razi
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Post by dnangrani on Jun 14, 2008 13:05:35 GMT 5
azaab bakhshe
maiN apni kitab e hasti
ka intesaab uss ke nam likh dooN
bahut Khoob Neelofar ji
Devi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 15, 2008 10:05:14 GMT 5
umda nazm hay dad qabooleay
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Post by neelofar on Jun 18, 2008 22:22:45 GMT 5
bhai Rafi, bhaiyya Razi, Humnaam bhnaa, Devi g & Aqeel g Aap sab ki mohabbaton kaii tah e dil se mashkoor
hoon....aap sab ke tareefi wah ka eik sath iss trah jwab dena tahzeeb mnafi hai......is baat k liye moazret chahoon gi...wajah eik to ye k i hate typing & 2nd reason is my health...umeed hai meri kotahi moaff ker di jaaiyegi.......... mohtaje duaa Regards from Neelofar *****
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Post by saeed on Jun 26, 2008 4:43:05 GMT 5
Acha khayal hai. Daad
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jun 27, 2008 9:41:41 GMT 5
Wah
Bohat acer angez nazm kahi aap ney
Daad qabool ki jiye
Qamar
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Post by rooh on Jun 29, 2008 14:26:10 GMT 5
very nice nazm neelofar ji...
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