zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Feb 5, 2008 6:51:36 GMT 5
mehkate lafzoN meN jii chaahe tira naam likhooN har eik phool ki pattii pe sar-e-aam likhooN
raat taaroN ko tirii yaad ki zulfoN meN chunooN subH ugta huwaa suuraj tumeiN salaam likhoon
dhoop likhkhooN to tere husn ka saraapa ho terii aankhoN meN sitaare hoN jab bhii shaam likhooN
lab-o-rukhsaar pe rangiiniyaaN, saansoN men 'itr sau bahaaroN ka huwaa jaise ihtemaam likhoon
kabhii samjhooN inheN mandir men jaise jalte diye mai teri aankheN jo chalkaayeN to phir jaam likhoon
hazaaroN naam hain uske khuda hai eik magar rahiim bhii hai mira ,gar maiN chaahooN raam likhooN
tere hone se 'ayaaN hai hayaat-e-hoor-o-tahoor teri qurbat ko maiN jannat ka hii paighaam likhooN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 5, 2008 22:51:23 GMT 5
wahhh Khoobsoorat khayalaat Zaaman sahib
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 6, 2008 14:35:38 GMT 5
zamin sahib umda khyalat hain aap k bohat khoob thanx razi
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Post by kanwal on Feb 13, 2008 3:28:01 GMT 5
Zamin jee umdaa khayaal par daad ke phooL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,.........
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Feb 25, 2008 23:04:48 GMT 5
wahhh Khoobsoorat khayalaat Zaaman sahib mamnoon hoon,rafi saahib zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Feb 25, 2008 23:22:26 GMT 5
zamin sahib umda khyalat hain aap k bohat khoob thanx razi shukriya,razi saahib aap hamesha hausla-afzaaii karte hain,jis ke liye teh dil se mashkoor hoon zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Mar 1, 2008 3:19:04 GMT 5
zaamin ji bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi aap ne.sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage.daad qubuul karen. shukriya,sunita di zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Mar 1, 2008 3:19:31 GMT 5
Zamin jee umdaa khayaal par daad ke phooL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,......... mamnoon hoon,kanwal ji zaamin
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 17:43:58 GMT 5
Achchi kavish hai, dua hai keh: -
Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:24:48 GMT 5
Zaamin bahut khoob likha hai. ye sher acha laga
tere hone se 'ayaaN hai hayaat-e-hoor-o-tahoor teri qurbat ko maiN jannat ka hii paighaam likhooN
Devi
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Post by saeed on Jul 15, 2008 9:22:13 GMT 5
mehkate lafzoN meN jii chaahe tira naam likhooN har eik phool ki pattii pe sar-e-aam likhooN
raat taaroN ko tirii yaad ki zulfoN meN chunooN subH ugta huwaa suuraj tumeiN salaam likhoon
dhoop likhkhooN to tere husn ka saraapa ho terii aankhoN meN sitaare hoN jab bhii shaam likhooN
lab-o-rukhsaar pe rangiiniyaaN, saansoN men 'itr sau bahaaroN ka huwaa jaise ihtemaam likhoon
kabhii samjhooN inheN mandir men jaise jalte diye mai teri aankheN jo chalkaayeN to phir jaam likhoon
hazaaroN naam hain uske khuda hai eik magar rahiim bhii hai mira ,gar maiN chaahooN raam likhooN
tere hone se 'ayaaN hai hayaat-e-hoor-o-tahoor teri qurbat ko maiN jannat ka hii paighaam likhooN achi kavish hai Zamin saab. Daad Saeed
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