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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 23:46:10 GMT 5
Aik rawani hai jo baha kar liay chali jaati hai khayalaat-o-alfaaz ko...... Aik sehr hai jo jakaRta chalaa jaataa hai soch ko....... Aik gumaan hai jo chhaay rehta hai taSawwuraat kay aasmaan per....... Aik Haqeeqat hai jo aashikaar hoti chali jaati hai paRhnay walay per....... Aur uss kay baad kia kia munkashif nahiN hota.
aik waalihana muhabat hy jo aap k is tabsray sy jhalak rahi hy aatif bhai boht shukria in muhabaton ka thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 23:37:42 GMT 5
shukria k aap ny is forum k araakeen ko is mushairay ki tafseel aur tasweeri jhalkion sy nawaza thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 23:34:52 GMT 5
rooh ji khoobsoort ashaar hain doosray shair k pehlay misray main aap nay lafz kalisaaN likha hy yeh drust nahi asal lafz kalisa hay isay drust kar lijiay shukria aap ny achi ghazal parhnay ko dee thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 1:05:50 GMT 5
Razi bhaaii nazm kyaa hai ek madhoshi bhara jaam hai....aakhiri ke do band behadd pasand aaye merii taraf se aisii dilkash aur rooh ko sukun baKhshne vaalii nazm ke lie daad ke taazaa phool pesh-e-khidmat haiN qubul kareN Suhel boht nawazish aap ki suhail sahab razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 1:04:29 GMT 5
boht shukria kanwal k tumny itni tafssel k saath ghazal par baat ki thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 1:03:39 GMT 5
Taaza ghazl par, daad ke taaza taaza guL aapki nazR razi jee ,... ji taaza taaza phool hum ny wasool kar liay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 1:02:45 GMT 5
Waah umdaaa bohat khoob razi jee ,....
aapki har tahreer dil ke andar utarti mehsoos hoti hai ,...
Mohabbat ka yeh andaaz sirf aur sirf aap jaisa shkhs
hi paish kar sakta hai ,...
daad ke saare gulshan aapki iss umdaa nazM ke naaM,... kanwal muhabat ki is nazm par itna muhabat bhara jawab boht shukria khush raho sada razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:58:12 GMT 5
bhai donon ghalain kamal ki hain khaas taur par meri ik baat kahin baat main reh jaati hay aur chaandni dil k muzafaat main reh jaati hay kia kehnay bhaai sehl e mumtna ki kia khoobsoorat misaalain hain khush raho yaar aur aysay hi shair kehtay raho thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:51:58 GMT 5
aaif boht khoob bhai aap ki yeh boht puraani ghazal bhi hamaray liay to boht naai hay dhair saari daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:28:12 GMT 5
dr najma shaheen khosa ka taaluk dera ghazi khan sy hy aik shairi majmooa bhi in ka manzar e aam par aa chuka hy njma sahiba is forum ki haal hi main rukn bani hain hum unhain is mehfil main khush aamdeed kehtay hain aur umeed rakhtay hain k un ki aamd sy sukhanwar forum ki sargarmion main mazeed izaafa ho ga aur woh mehfil main sargarmi sy hissa lay kar apni mojoodgi ka ehsaas dilaain gee thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:22:08 GMT 5
boht khoobsoorat maloomati column hy akhtar bhai aysi tehreeron sy hamaray forum ko nawaaztay rahain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:16:32 GMT 5
boht acha khyaal hay is nazm main behr k muaamlat to mojood hain magar isay achi koshish keh saktay hain yeh nazm hamaray wasaib ki aik shaira dr najma shaheen khosa ki hy najma sahiba is bazm ki naai rukn hain main un ka mukamal taaruf mehfil main karaaoon ga najma sahiba welcome aur boht see daad aap k liay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:00:43 GMT 5
nadeem boht khoob saari ghazal pasand aai her shair khoobsoorat aur mukamal magar mujhy is shair ny boht lutf dia
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
wah wah dhairon daad aur boht see muhabatain tumhari nazr thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 28, 2008 12:39:57 GMT 5
naz ghazl sahiba hum is bazm main aap ko khush aamdeed kehtay hain umeed hy aap ki poetry bhi jald parhnay ko milay gee thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 27, 2008 16:18:38 GMT 5
sunita sahiba aur khalid bhaai mujhy khushi hy k aap is bazm main aay to sahi chaahay naraazi ka izhaar karnay hi aay main koi taweel guftagoo nahi karna chaahta k is mahol main taweel guftagoo mazeed uljhanain payda kar sakti hay jahan tak is baat ka taaluk hy k main ny aap donon ko wapis laanay ki sanjeeda koshish nahi ki is k liay main bhala kia safaai doon aap donon ko pm bhi kiay aur thread k zariay bhi invite kia magar jawab main talkh baatain sunin khair baat mukhtasir karta hoon aap ki baat tasleem k main nay sakht rawaiyaa nahin apnaaya is k baray main mera moaqaf yeh hy k doston k forum main sakht rawaiyaa main munasib nahi samajhta tha is k bawajood main nay admins sy kaha tha k jo ikhtlaafi post daykhain delete kar dain aap fikr na kijiay aainda bhi aysa ho ga main khud bhi nazar rakhoon ga k kisi ki tazheek na ho aap say aik baar phir multamis hoon k ghussa khutm kar dijiay agar mera qasoor tha to main is kotaahi pr muaafi chaahta hoon mayray her rukn mohtram aur muaziz hay magar aap to taseesi arkan hain aap ki ehmiat meray liay boht ziaada hay aap ko aainda meri janib sy shikayat na ho gi mazeed kisi ilzaam ka ya maazi ki baaton ka main zikr karna chaahta hoon na jawab daynay ki zaroorat hay kion k mera khyaal hay muhabaton main aik doosray k saath behas nahin karna chaahiay main aap ka muntazir hoon thanx razi
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