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Post by nadeem on May 26, 2008 14:37:41 GMT 5
aik ghazal aap tamaam dostoon ki nazr khaas taur par Akhtar Shumaar ki aamad ki nazr
har aik saaNs pay dhaRka kay Akhri to naheN milay dobara agar aysi zindagi to naheN
achanak Ana tumhara aur is qadar chahat kaheN ye dost meri Akhri khushi to naheN
to kiyoN na tujh say teri guftago hi ki jaey teray ilaawa yahaN mera koi bhi to naheN
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
faseelaeN chaTnay walay mujhay bataeN nadeem kahaeN zameen pay ye Akhri sadi to nahen
dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by naheedv on May 26, 2008 17:22:32 GMT 5
aik ghazal aap tamaam dostoon ki nazr khaas taur par Akhtar Shumaar ki aamad ki nazr
har aik saaNs pay dhaRka kay Akhri to naheN milay dobara agar aysi zindagi to naheN
achanak Ana tumhara aur is qadar chahat kaheN ye dost meri Akhri khushi to naheN
to kiyoN na tujh say teri guftago hi ki jaey teray ilaawa yahaN mera koi bhi to naheN
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
faseelaeN chaTnay walay mujhay bataeN nadeem kahaeN zameen pay ye Akhri sadi to nahen
dua go Nadeem Bhabha Nadeem, ghazal achi hai, magar maiN ne aap kaa jitnaa kalaam paRhaa hai, us ke muqaable meN ye ghazal qadre kam hai.
lekin
to kiyoN na tujh say teri guftago hi ki jaey teray ilaawa yahaN mera koi bhi to naheN
ye achaa she'r hai. daad qubool kijiye
shukriya Naheed
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Post by saeedsaeed on May 26, 2008 19:02:17 GMT 5
aoa nadeem bahi jann acchi ghazal hy dadd qabool karain aur khas toor pr es share py daad aur piyar bhi
faseelaeN chaTnay walay mujhay bataeN nadeem kahaeN zameen pay ye Akhri sadi to nahen
thanks ap ka bahi mubashir saeed
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 26, 2008 23:25:42 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh Bohat khoob Nadeem sahib
to kiyoN na tujh say teri guftago hi ki jaey teray ilaawa yahaN mera koi bhi to naheN
Wahh
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
wahh
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Post by kanwal on May 26, 2008 23:48:42 GMT 5
Aik achi ghazl par daad ke guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by nadeem on May 27, 2008 3:10:08 GMT 5
Naheed yaqeenan aap theek kehti haen aik hi satah ya aik hi miyaar par to muhabbat bhi nahen ho sakti shairi to aik taraf lekin ye jaan kar khushi hoi kay aap mujh say is say achi ghazal expect karti haen maen koshish karon ga aap ki tawaqquaat par pora utar sakon mashkoor Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on May 27, 2008 3:19:47 GMT 5
biradram saeed bahut arsa ki masroofiyat kay baad ab time mila yahan aanay ka yahan aik jang tamam shud ho chuki aur aik nai jang say pehlay wala amn nazar aaya doston ki muhabbat sipah ki sorat sath ho to jang ka dar nahen hota meray khiyaal maen jang hi zindagi ka naam hai ab yahan jang say muraad shairana jang li jaey to zindagi achanak baykhauf o khatar ho jati hai aap naen ghazal pasand ki is kay liey mamnoon hoon Allah Saeen aap ko khush rakhay aur takhleeq e sher par mamoor rakhay
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Post by nadeem on May 27, 2008 3:25:22 GMT 5
muhtram Rafi tabassum Sahib Salamtiaan bahut dino baad aaya aur aap ka fauran reply karna bahut acha laga aap naen ashaar pasand kiey is ka bahut shukriya bahut ji chahta hai aap say mulaqaat ho baith kar bataen hoon lekin jab bhi milay mushairay maen hi milay jahan bahut say dost aur bhi hotay haen aur banda pori tawajo say baat bhi nahen kar sakta hansi mazaaq maen waqt guzar jata hai kher qismat maen hai to zaroor
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Post by nadeem on May 27, 2008 3:30:54 GMT 5
kanwal aap naen phool bhejay bahut acha laga mamnoon hoon albatta tajub ye howa keh aap naen gulaab kay phool bhejay jab kay aap ko kanwal kay phool bhejna chahey thay jo ka aap kay naam say munasbat rakhtay haen
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Post by ibnesiddique on May 28, 2008 16:46:37 GMT 5
Nadeem saHib
salaam arz hai
aik muddat baa'd aap se niyaaz Haasil ho rahaa hai. 3-4 saal pehle ebazm meiN aap ka kalaam paRhne ka mauqa milaa karta tha.
faseelaeN chaTnay walay mujhay bataeN nadeem kahaeN zameen pay ye Akhri sadi to nahen
bahot khoob janaab daad qubool keejiye
amjad
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 29, 2008 0:00:43 GMT 5
nadeem boht khoob saari ghazal pasand aai her shair khoobsoorat aur mukamal magar mujhy is shair ny boht lutf dia
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
wah wah dhairon daad aur boht see muhabatain tumhari nazr thanx razi
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Post by rooh on May 29, 2008 20:15:53 GMT 5
aik ghazal aap tamaam dostoon ki nazr khaas taur par Akhtar Shumaar ki aamad ki nazr
har aik saaNs pay dhaRka kay Akhri to naheN milay dobara agar aysi zindagi to naheN
achanak Ana tumhara aur is qadar chahat kaheN ye dost meri Akhri khushi to naheN
to kiyoN na tujh say teri guftago hi ki jaey teray ilaawa yahaN mera koi bhi to naheN
ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN
faseelaeN chaTnay walay mujhay bataeN nadeem kahaeN zameen pay ye Akhri sadi to nahen
dua go Nadeem Bhabha Salaam Nadeem sahab aap ke ye ghazal parhii hai meine..shayad aap ki site per haaN magar daad dena ka moqa sukhanwar per milaa hai... achanak Ana tumhara aur is qadar chahat kaheN ye dost meri Akhri khushi to naheN ham ehl e ishq baRay waza daar hotay haeN hamari Ankh maeN dekho kahiN nami to naheN humarii taraf se daad hazir hai janab... salam Rooh
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Post by nadeem on May 30, 2008 13:30:59 GMT 5
muhtram amjad as salam u alikum ghazal pasand karnay ka shukriya yaqeenan meray jazbaat bhi yehi haen kay bahut arsay baad aap say mulaaqaat hoi bahar haal is baat say hausla howa kay banda zinda ho to mulaqaat ho hi jati hai dua go
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Post by nadeem on May 30, 2008 13:38:35 GMT 5
muhtram Razi bhai salamat rahaen maen daikh raha hoon keh yahan bahut say yaar ikathay ho rahay haen yeh yaqeenan aap ki muhabbat hai warna aaj kal waqt kis kay paas hai aap naen ghazal pasand ki bahut acha laga daad ka bahut shukriya Allah saeen aap ko khush rakhay
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Post by nadeem on May 30, 2008 13:41:45 GMT 5
rooh maen heraan hota hoon jab aap ashaar ka intkhaab karti haen jab keh aap shaira nahen . jab koi qari is had tak pahunch jata hai to waqt nahen lagta keh wo khud sher kehnay lag jaey ab to bas yehi intazaar hai kay aap apni ghazal kab post kar rahi haen
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