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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 4, 2008 11:02:46 GMT 5
bus yehi soch kar hua tha alag tera mujh sy jo raasta tha alag
jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag
us ka chehra tha meri aankhon main aur meray dill main woh basa tha alag
log to khush thay mutmain thay boht per mera dukh main sochta tha alag
hijr ki neend to suhaani thee bus main sotay main jaagta tha alag
shehr taameer karnay waalon nay is ko mismaar kar dia tha alag
ji utha tha tumhari chaahat main aur yaqeenan main mer chuka tha alag
razi-ud-din razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 4, 2008 20:29:14 GMT 5
Respected Razi shab khoob ghazal kahy ap ny take care
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 4, 2008 23:32:03 GMT 5
Respected Razi shab khoob ghazal kahy ap ny take care saeed bhai pazeerai ka shukria
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 4, 2008 23:52:38 GMT 5
bus yehi soch kar hua tha alag tera mujh sy jo raasta tha alag jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag us ka chehra tha meri aankhon main aur meray dill main woh basa tha alag log to khush thay mutmain thay boht per mera dukh main sochta tha alag hijr ki neend to suhaani thee bus main sotay main jaagta tha alag shehr taameer karnay waalon nay is ko mismaar kar dia tha alag ji utha tha tumhari chaahat main aur yaqeenan main mer chuka tha alag razi-ud-din razi Bohat Khoob Razi bhai aap ki ghazal bolti hui mehsoos hoti hay
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Post by nadeem on Apr 5, 2008 3:37:30 GMT 5
Muhtram Razi sahib Assalam u alikum kiya acha sher hai waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah yahan alag naen apna pora mafhoom diya aur maza aaya khush rahaen
jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag
dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by naheedv on Apr 5, 2008 4:36:11 GMT 5
Razi bhai,
buhat umdah ghazal hai, zameen buhat zarkhaiz hai. daad qubool kijiye!
Naheed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 1:58:14 GMT 5
bus yehi soch kar hua tha alag tera mujh sy jo raasta tha alag jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag us ka chehra tha meri aankhon main aur meray dill main woh basa tha alag log to khush thay mutmain thay boht per mera dukh main sochta tha alag hijr ki neend to suhaani thee bus main sotay main jaagta tha alag shehr taameer karnay waalon nay is ko mismaar kar dia tha alag ji utha tha tumhari chaahat main aur yaqeenan main mer chuka tha alag razi-ud-din razi Bohat Khoob Razi bhai aap ki ghazal bolti hui mehsoos hoti hay shukria rafi sahab aap ki pazeerai mera sarmaaya hy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 2:01:05 GMT 5
Muhtram Razi sahib Assalam u alikum kiya acha sher hai waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah yahan alag naen apna pora mafhoom diya aur maza aaya khush rahaen jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag dua go Nadeem Bhabha shukria nadeem mujhay khud is shair ny boht lutf dia razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 2:02:57 GMT 5
Razi bhai jaan ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut hi achhe lage.daad qubuul kareN. boht shukria sunita ji razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 2:08:59 GMT 5
Razi bhai, buhat umdah ghazal hai, zameen buhat zarkhaiz hai. daad qubool kijiye! Naheed shukria naheed sahiba razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 6, 2008 12:54:26 GMT 5
bus yehi soch kar hua tha alag tera mujh sy jo raasta tha alag
(Jaandaar matla hai)
jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag
(Hasil-e-Ghazal sher hai, iss per khaaS taur per daad)
us ka chehra tha meri aankhon main aur meray dill main woh basa tha alag
(Khoobsoorat)
log to khush thay mutmain thay boht per mera dukh main sochta tha alag
(Kurb angaiz!)
hijr ki neend to suhaani thee bus main sotay main jaagta tha alag
(Achcha hai)
shehr taameer karnay waalon nay is ko mismaar kar dia tha alag
(Hasb-e-Haal hai)
ji utha tha tumhari chaahat main aur yaqeenan main mer chuka tha alag
(Wah)
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Post by saeed on Apr 7, 2008 5:04:39 GMT 5
Razi bhai,
Khub kavish hai...zameen bhi khubsurat hai aur lehja bhi. Daad!
saeed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 10, 2008 11:35:10 GMT 5
bus yehi soch kar hua tha alag tera mujh sy jo raasta tha alag
(Jaandaar matla hai)
jab woh pehli dafa mila tha mujhay ayn usi waqt ho raha tha alag
(Hasil-e-Ghazal sher hai, iss per khaaS taur per daad)
us ka chehra tha meri aankhon main aur meray dill main woh basa tha alag
(Khoobsoorat)
log to khush thay mutmain thay boht per mera dukh main sochta tha alag
(Kurb angaiz!)
hijr ki neend to suhaani thee bus main sotay main jaagta tha alag
(Achcha hai)
shehr taameer karnay waalon nay is ko mismaar kar dia tha alag
(Hasb-e-Haal hai)
ji utha tha tumhari chaahat main aur yaqeenan main mer chuka tha alag
(Wah)
aatif sahab shukria aap nay itni tafseel k saath izhaar e khyaal kia razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 10, 2008 11:36:09 GMT 5
Razi bhai, Khub kavish hai...zameen bhi khubsurat hai aur lehja bhi. Daad! saeed shukria saeed sahab razi
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Post by tmasood on Apr 11, 2008 20:43:00 GMT 5
moHteram Razi bha'ee
salaam
meri teraf se bhi daad qabuul fermaaiN
wassalam
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