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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 22, 2009 19:48:56 GMT 5
aap ki sabhi ghazlain mujhe munfarid aur behtreen lagti hain..khususan ye shair buhat pasand aaya.. "hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi" buhat khoob ! ap ki mahabat hay warna ham mein tu koe baat nahi hay khiar andesh
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 22, 2009 19:42:58 GMT 5
Ham terey sehraa kelye so darya chhoR ke aaye haiN
darj bala misra tu kia kamaal ka hay ghazal ka majmooe ahang appealing hay dad qaboolkejeay
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 22, 2009 19:39:28 GMT 5
ghazal ka mizaj acha aur jadeed labo lehja ka hay maagr jabaja taqbull radeef ki waja say tabiat par garani ajati hay
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2009 20:31:34 GMT 5
aek ham hii na luTe i'shq ki raahoN meiN :Zia: saaniHe aise zamaane meiN ka'ii baar hu'e !
kia sher ashoob likha hay ap nay bahut he umda aur khoobsorat aur napay tuly andaz ki ghazal hay dad qabooleay ga
aqeel malik
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2009 20:29:11 GMT 5
khoon day kar deay jalany hein Ye amal gah gah karna he
kia khoobsorat aur umda sher kaha hay ap nay bahut dair tak is sher kay sehr mein giraftar raha tab kahin kuch keh paya dad qabool kejeay
aqeel malik
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2009 20:26:16 GMT 5
Aqeel Bhaa'ii, aadaab ! aaj aek muddat ke baa'd aap se ham-kalaam hone ka sharaf HaaSil kar k bahut Khushii HaaSil ho rahii hai ! aap kii Ghazal ka to maiN ibtedaa hii se deevanaa hooN ! so yeh Ghazal bhii mere shu'la-e-junooN ko musalsal havaa de rahii hai ! daad qabool kejiye ! mujhe KhaaS taur par vuhii she'r pasand aayaa hai jo razi bhaa'ii ko pasand hai ! daad !! Zia Baloch Baloch sahab ye tu ap ki mahabta hay ke ap ko mayri shairi pasand hay warna mujh mien asi koe khas baat nahi hay ap kay iltifaat ka shukria dua go aqeel malik
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:59:22 GMT 5
Aqeel Sahib, Khoobsoorat Ghazal per Boht si DaaD qubool kijiye. ap ki dhairoN dad par hamry dhairoN adab ap ki mahabat hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:58:06 GMT 5
aqeel boht munfarid andaz aur khobsoorat lehja hy aap ka yoon to tamaam ashaar khoob hain magar mujhy yeh do shair to boht pasand aay jab us nay hijr kay sary usool tay keay thay tu ham pe ishq ki aayat utaar di gae thi hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi thanx razi Razi sahab mayray leay is say barh kar aur kia compliment hosakta hay ka lehja munfarid hay ap ki zarra nawazi hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:55:40 GMT 5
Aqeel jee, aap kee ghazal buhat umdah hai aur matla'a aur pehlaa she'r laa jawaab! daad qubool kijiye! Naheed g ap ki ala zarfi hay ke ap ko ghazal ka majmoee mizaj acha lga warna ham aisy log tu lohaaroN wala kam kar rahay heiN aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 13, 2008 17:51:41 GMT 5
bahut achi girha lagae hay dad qabooleay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 16:14:07 GMT 5
Neha ap nay girha umda lagae hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 16:08:15 GMT 5
Ham nay janab Atif Mirza sahab ko fone kia tu kaha gia ke ham Eid ki mubarak us waqt qubool kareiN gay jab forum par aeaiN gay..........so atif sahab aur deegar sukhnwaroN ko EID mubarak
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 16:04:44 GMT 5
isi leay tu falak say pukaar di gae thi rida-e-waqt saroN say utaar di gae thi
abhi wujood meiN uski nishaniaN nahi thiN so umr bay khabari mein guzaar di gae thi
hamary hath meiN thiN kainaat ki nabzeiN hamary dam say khudaee shumaar di gae thi
jab us nay hijr kay sary usool tay keay thay tu ham pe ishq ki aayat utaar di gae thi
hamara sabr hamara ghuroor tha,so hameiN tamaam umr shab-e-intizaar di gae thi
hamari soch ko qaidi bana lia gia tha hameiN ye roshni jab musta'ar di gae thi
ham us zamany say guzray heiN jis zamany meiN hamray naam pe dunya sanwaar di gae tih
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 15:58:43 GMT 5
ghazal ka mizaj acha hay kahiN kahiN aik adh anch ki kami hay majmooee taur par umda ghazal hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 15:43:29 GMT 5
ye ghazal na sirf mazkora muqa ki tafheem karti hay balkeh is kay mana ki tafheem us say kahi agay ki hay aur kisi fanparay ki meraaj he yehi hay ke us kay mawni afaqiyat qaim hojaeay baray napay tulay alfaz mein asr e hasir ka sher r ashoob likha hay dad qaboll kejeay
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