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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 10, 2008 22:36:21 GMT 5
shaheed benazir bhutto ki barsi k moqay per chund ashaar .. aap ki raaay ka muntazir rahoon ga thanx razi ud din razi hawain qayd kar k roshni ko maar datay hain yeh kaysay log hain jo zindagi ko maar daytay hain hamaray wastay jeenay ka jo paygham lata hy hamara zarf to daykho usi ko maar daytay hain yahan khushboo ka laasha hy, isay gulshan nahin kehna yeh maqtal hy yahan to her kisi ko maar dytay hain yeh dunya un craaghon k dhuain sy aaj roshan hy jo bujhtay hain magar her teergi ko maar daytay hain woh pehlay dars daytay hain her ik ko aadmiat ka aur us k baad her ik aadmi ko maar daytay hain kaha tum bay_gunaahon ko bhala kion qatl kartay ho jawab aaya k lo hum ab tumhi ko maar daytay hain razi haakim ki khushion ka bharam rakhna zaroori hy so hum apni khushi say her khushi ko maar daytay hain
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Post by jooni on Dec 10, 2008 23:30:04 GMT 5
Boht umdah ash'aar hain Razi Bhai. Boht Khoob.
Dhair saari DaaD hazir hai.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Dec 11, 2008 12:19:45 GMT 5
Hasb ema,amool Umda ash,aar Razi bhai aap kay nazariyat kay tarjumaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 11, 2008 13:28:19 GMT 5
Boht umdah ash'aar hain Razi Bhai. Boht Khoob. Dhair saari DaaD hazir hai. pasandeedgi ka shukria razi
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Post by roshy on Dec 11, 2008 14:30:22 GMT 5
really nice , every word is reflecting the reality going on in our country
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Post by neha on Dec 11, 2008 18:17:19 GMT 5
Aadaab razi bhai, hamaray wastay jeenay ka jo paygham lata hy hamara zarf to daykho usi ko maar daytay hain
Bohut khoob razi bhai...bht hi hasb-e- haal ghazal hai..padh k acha laga ..
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Post by Tanweer on Dec 12, 2008 5:25:42 GMT 5
Razi Bhaee
Shaheed Mohtarama k liey aapka khiraaj-e-aqeedat dil ko chHoo gaya, bohat omdah khiyalaat ki tarjumani.
itni azeem shakhsiyat par likhnay par daad k alfaaz chohtay hain....
Tanweer
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 12, 2008 15:43:29 GMT 5
ye ghazal na sirf mazkora muqa ki tafheem karti hay balkeh is kay mana ki tafheem us say kahi agay ki hay aur kisi fanparay ki meraaj he yehi hay ke us kay mawni afaqiyat qaim hojaeay baray napay tulay alfaz mein asr e hasir ka sher r ashoob likha hay dad qaboll kejeay
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Post by tmasood on Dec 12, 2008 15:48:41 GMT 5
shaheed benazir bhutto ki barsi k moqay per chund ashaar .. aap ki raaay ka muntazir rahoon ga thanx razi ud din razi hawain qayd kar k roshni ko maar datay hain yeh kaysay log hain jo zindagi ko maar daytay hain hamaray wastay jeenay ka jo paygham lata hy hamara zarf to daykho usi ko maar daytay hain yahan khushboo ka laasha hy, isay gulshan nahin kehna yeh maqtal hy yahan to her kisi ko maar dytay hain yeh dunya un craaghon k dhuain sy aaj roshan hy jo bujhtay hain magar her teergi ko maar daytay hain woh pehlay dars daytay hain her ik ko aadmiat ka aur us k baad her ik aadmi ko maar daytay hain kaha tum bay_gunaahon ko bhala kion qatl kartay ho jawab aaya k lo hum ab tumhi ko maar daytay hain razi haakim ki khushion ka bharam rakhna zaroori hy so hum apni khushi say her khushi ko maar daytay hain Mashallah bohat a'alaa bohat khoob
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:19:59 GMT 5
Hasb ema,amool Umda ash,aar Razi bhai aap kay nazariyat kay tarjumaan rafi bhai ashaar pasand karnay ka shukria razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:21:13 GMT 5
really nice , every word is reflecting the reality going on in our country thanx 4 ur appreciation razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:22:32 GMT 5
Aadaab razi bhai, hamaray wastay jeenay ka jo paygham lata hy hamara zarf to daykho usi ko maar daytay hain Bohut khoob razi bhai...bht hi hasb-e- haal ghazal hai..padh k acha laga .. neha ji mamnoon hoon k aap nay pasandeedgi ka izhaar kia razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:24:15 GMT 5
Razi BhaeeShaheed Mohtarama k liey aapka khiraaj-e-aqeedat dil ko chHoo gaya, bohat omdah khiyalaat ki tarjumani. itni azeem shakhsiyat par likhnay par daad k alfaaz chohtay hain.... Tanweer tanweer bhai yeh dukh to itna barrra hy k hum koshish k bawajood mukamal izhaar nahin kar paatay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:26:13 GMT 5
ye ghazal na sirf mazkora muqa ki tafheem karti hay balkeh is kay mana ki tafheem us say kahi agay ki hay aur kisi fanparay ki meraaj he yehi hay ke us kay mawni afaqiyat qaim hojaeay baray napay tulay alfaz mein asr e hasir ka sher r ashoob likha hay dad qaboll kejeay aqeel drust kaha aap nay main nay apnay ehd ka noha hi to likha hy razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:28:19 GMT 5
shaheed benazir bhutto ki barsi k moqay per chund ashaar .. aap ki raaay ka muntazir rahoon ga thanx razi ud din razi hawain qayd kar k roshni ko maar datay hain yeh kaysay log hain jo zindagi ko maar daytay hain hamaray wastay jeenay ka jo paygham lata hy hamara zarf to daykho usi ko maar daytay hain yahan khushboo ka laasha hy, isay gulshan nahin kehna yeh maqtal hy yahan to her kisi ko maar dytay hain yeh dunya un craaghon k dhuain sy aaj roshan hy jo bujhtay hain magar her teergi ko maar daytay hain woh pehlay dars daytay hain her ik ko aadmiat ka aur us k baad her ik aadmi ko maar daytay hain kaha tum bay_gunaahon ko bhala kion qatl kartay ho jawab aaya k lo hum ab tumhi ko maar daytay hain razi haakim ki khushion ka bharam rakhna zaroori hy so hum apni khushi say her khushi ko maar daytay hain Mashallah bohat a'alaa bohat khoobshukria tahira sahiba razi
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