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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 1, 2009 17:00:49 GMT 5
AOA ehle sukhanwar aik taweel mudat ke bad bazm me hazir howa ho,n apni aik kawish ke sath ap ki qeemti ara ka munatzir ramishjaanYou bhi tujh se nibah karna he Khud ko pora tabah karna he Teri zulfo me umr katni he Bakht apna seeaah karna he Khulaa lena he zindgai se hume Our ajal se beeah karna he Khon de kar diye jalane he Ye amal gah gah karna he Dil jalana he bam par ramish Jism ko farsh e rah karma he[/center]
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 1, 2009 20:29:11 GMT 5
khoon day kar deay jalany hein Ye amal gah gah karna he
kia khoobsorat aur umda sher kaha hay ap nay bahut dair tak is sher kay sehr mein giraftar raha tab kahin kuch keh paya dad qabool kejeay
aqeel malik
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Post by zaki on Jan 2, 2009 13:50:13 GMT 5
Bahut he umdah Ramish bhai.... tamam ashar be'had passand aye hain... Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay... Sada khush raheay....
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 3, 2009 21:51:13 GMT 5
khoon day kar deay jalany hein Ye amal gah gah karna he kia khoobsorat aur umda sher kaha hay ap nay bahut dair tak is sher kay sehr mein giraftar raha tab kahin kuch keh paya dad qabool kejeay aqeel malik AOA Aqeel Malik bhai ap ke is shandar jumle ne mere hoslo ko bohat bulnad kar diya jazak umm ullha ahsan ull jaza ap ki itni khobsorat dad mere liye ezaaz he nawazish waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 3, 2009 21:52:17 GMT 5
AOA zaki bhai ap ki bohat sari dad dil ki gehraio,n me basa li bohat mamno,n ho,n waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Jan 5, 2009 0:14:23 GMT 5
Boht Umdah, Boht Khoob.
Dhair Sari DaaD hazir hai Ramish Bhai.
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 5, 2009 10:23:03 GMT 5
"Khon de kar diye jalane he Ye amal gah gah karna he"
agar qayadat behisi ki lapait me aajaye aur sirf zabaani waday aur be-amali ka raaj ho to phir is shair k mutabiq hi halaat hojainge..
aapke is shair se soch k kayi dar khulay hain , buhat khoob.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 8, 2009 17:49:18 GMT 5
AOA jooni bhai ap ki Dhair sari DAD Dhair sare shukriya ke sath qabol ki bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki is mohabat ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 8, 2009 17:51:34 GMT 5
AOA hamza987 jee ap ne ghazal ko itni gehraei se parha aur pasand kiya is ke liye bohat shurkiya ap ki pur khlos dad dil me sama li hum ne nawazish waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/size]
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2009 19:53:40 GMT 5
Daad tau Ramish bhai aap ka huq hai!
Ba khudaa bahut umda ghazal hai.
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 15, 2009 22:19:05 GMT 5
AOA atif bro bohat mohabat he ap kijo ap mujhe apni pur khlos dad ke liye haqdar samjhe hazrat meri khushnaseebi he ap ke yeh alfaz bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki mohabat ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by neha on Feb 22, 2009 14:29:56 GMT 5
Khulaa lena he zindgai se hume Our ajal se beeah karna he
Wah bohut khoob Ramish sahab...khubsurat khayalat se muzayyan ghazal k liye dhairon daad qubool kijye.
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 22, 2009 15:54:27 GMT 5
AOA neha jee bohat shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad ke liye sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 6, 2009 23:41:14 GMT 5
bhaai itni achi ghazal aur itni khoobsoorat desighning hum ny miss kar dee kamaal hy yeh ghazal hum ab tak parh hi na paay lutf aa gia aap k klaam ka magar ajal sy byaah wali baat humain pasand nahi aai ... salaamat rahain aap thanx razi
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Post by nasirmalik on Mar 7, 2009 9:10:25 GMT 5
Ramish jee! bhot umda kalam dia aap ne. mashkoor heiN. Nasir Malik
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