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Post by saeed on Jan 16, 2009 9:04:39 GMT 5
Ek taza kavish……gher haaziri keliye maazarat ke saath.
Eik januN ki khatir saari duniya chhoR ke aaye haiN Tu kiya janey terey liye ham kiya kiya chhoR ke aaye haiN
Saarey khwab saraab karey ya ab ham ko seyraab karey Ham terey sehraa kelye so darya chhoR ke aaye haiN
Ham se ziadeh jaan-e-ghazalaaN qadr hai kisko wehshat ki Terey liye ham khud ko aksar tanha chhoR ke aaye haiN
Kon lakeeroN ki basti mein umr gaNwaye yar Saeed Dilki raah pe aaney waley rasta chhoR ke aaye haiN
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 16, 2009 16:28:58 GMT 5
hamaysha ki tara boht khoobsoorat kalaam
Eik januN ki khatir saari duniya chhoR ke aaye haiN Tu kiya janey terey liye ham kiya kiya chhoR ke aaye haiN
wzh wzh boht acha matlaa hay aur yeh misra to boht lutf day gia
Ham terey sehraa kelye so darya chhoR ke aaye haiN
boht umda saeed bhai kehtay rahain isi shiddat k saath thanx razi
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noshi
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by noshi on Jan 16, 2009 22:35:08 GMT 5
[glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300]Khan Ji,
Aapki khush.jamal ghazal taza mosam e takhleeq ki naveed deti hai..... Aik lateef sa nash e eitraf hai is main.....
"Ham se ziadeh kisko ghazalaaN qadr hai terei wehshat ki"
Ajab hai ke aapki ghazal pe bat kartey ye misra yad aata raha....
"Bat karni mujhey mushkil kabhi aisi tuo na thi"
Noshi [/size][/glow][/glow][/glow][/color]
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 16, 2009 23:42:29 GMT 5
waaah...buhat khoob.
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Jan 17, 2009 11:49:49 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Tanveer Sahab.... Sada khush raheay..
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Post by tmasood on Jan 17, 2009 18:34:45 GMT 5
bohat khoob janaab
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Jan 18, 2009 0:10:03 GMT 5
Boht khoobsoorat klam hai.
DaaD Qubool kijiye SaeeD Sahib.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 22, 2009 19:42:58 GMT 5
Ham terey sehraa kelye so darya chhoR ke aaye haiN
darj bala misra tu kia kamaal ka hay ghazal ka majmooe ahang appealing hay dad qaboolkejeay
aqeel
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2009 18:51:17 GMT 5
Aray Wah Saeed Bhai! Kia khoob tarang hai! Kia Aahang hai! Khoob ghazal hai aur khoob behr hai.
Aur haaN janaab yahaN tau ghar ki baataiN bhi shuroo ho gayee haiN, Issi bahanay Noshi Sahiba bhi tashreef laieeN, Saeed Bhai daad qabool kijiay!
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Post by naheedv on Jan 29, 2009 21:40:48 GMT 5
Waah Saeed, aap ki ye ghazal aap ke junooN/muhabbat ko kyaa khul kar bayaan kar rahi hai ki Noshi be laa.jawaab ho gai hain mabrook!
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Post by Tanweer on Jan 30, 2009 16:19:35 GMT 5
Bohat omdaah $aeed saheb, khoobsurat kalam par daad hazir hay
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Post by saeed on Feb 15, 2009 6:53:25 GMT 5
hamaysha ki tara boht khoobsoorat kalaam Eik januN ki khatir saari duniya chhoR ke aaye haiN Tu kiya janey terey liye ham kiya kiya chhoR ke aaye haiN wzh wzh boht acha matlaa hay aur yeh misra to boht lutf day gia Ham terey sehraa kelye so darya chhoR ke aaye haiN boht umda saeed bhai kehtay rahain isi shiddat k saath thanx razi Buhut Nawazish Razi Bhai...... saeed
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Post by saeed on Feb 15, 2009 6:57:35 GMT 5
[glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300]Khan Ji,
Aapki khush.jamal ghazal taza mosam e takhleeq ki naveed deti hai..... Aik lateef sa nash e eitraf hai is main.....
"Ham se ziadeh kisko ghazalaaN qadr hai terei wehshat ki"
Ajab hai ke aapki ghazal pe bat kartey ye misra yad aata raha....
"Bat karni mujhey mushkil kabhi aisi tuo na thi"
Noshi [/size][/glow][/glow][/glow][/color][/quote] Noshi- Pasandeedgi ka buhut shukriya... saeed
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Post by saeed on Feb 15, 2009 6:58:14 GMT 5
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Post by saeed on Feb 15, 2009 6:58:49 GMT 5
Bahut khoob Tanveer Sahab.... Sada khush raheay.. Nawazish!
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