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Post by nadeem on Apr 5, 2008 3:14:37 GMT 5
muhtram Ramish jaan Adaab aap ki taraf say bhejay gaey phoolon ki mahek mujhay mehsoos ho rahi hai aap ki muhabbat ki nazr mera aik sher
wo mujh ko phool to taza hi bhejta hai nadeem magar kitaab hamesha purani deta hai
bana to li hai muhabbat ki saltanat maen naen na janay kis ko Khuda hukmarani deta hai
khush rahaen Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 5, 2008 3:11:36 GMT 5
Muhtarma Devi Sahiba Adaab insaan ko khushnaseebi par fakhr hona chahiey lekin aisa fakhr jis maen shukr bhi maujood ho aur aap ki jholi jesi bhi ho yahan kamal denay walay ka hota hai kay wo chaid say bhi ziyada ata kar day jis naen mujhay diya us ki zaat bahut baRi hai Khush raha karaen dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 5, 2008 3:07:40 GMT 5
muhtram Atif hamesha muskuratay rahaen ghazal ko pasand karnay ka shukriya aur aap bulaen ham na aaen aisay to haalaat nahen inshaAllah ab mulaqaat bhi ho gi aur baat bhi hoti rahay gi Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 5, 2008 3:04:38 GMT 5
muhtram Saeed Sahib maen soch bhi nahen sakta tha kay yahan is qadar muhabbat karnay walay loog jama hotay haen aap naen ghazal ko pasand kiya ye darasl aap ki muhabbat hai warna maen is qabil nahen Allah aap ko khush rakhay Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:40:31 GMT 5
Saeed sahib maen is baat kay intahai khilaaf hoon kay ham bilamaqsad kisi ki nafi kar daen aap ka apna lehja hai aur bahut suthra aur shaffaaf hai Allah karay zoor e qalam aur ziyada dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:23:30 GMT 5
janab T Masood Adaab bas koshish ki thi jo aap ko achi lagi dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:21:56 GMT 5
muhtarma rooh Adaab guman hai keh aap ka taluq us sinf say ho ga jis ki tareef maen shair ghazlaen likha kartay haen agar aisa nahen to muhtram rooh aap naen ghazal ko pasand kiya meray liey aizaaz ki baat hai Allah Saeen aap ko khush rakhay dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:19:01 GMT 5
Muhtarma Sunita Adaab aik mast insaan hoon jab dil karta hai duniya say kat jata hoon aur jab dil karta hai is jaal (net) maen phir phans jata hoon ab aap naen shart bandhi hai keh meray ghaib honay say aap pakistan tashreef laen gi to mujhay dubara ghaib hona paray ga............ ghazal ko pasand karnay ka bahut shukriya aur by the way mera ghaib hona to aik gila hai lekin ghaib honay maen pehl aap naen ki thi aap ki post daikh kar ji bahut khush howa Dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Mar 29, 2008 0:19:50 GMT 5
piyaray Rafi Tabassum Salam ghazal pasand karnay ka shukriya ab to inshaAllah mulaqataen hoti rahaen gi
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 11:29:40 GMT 5
Muhtram Saeed Sahib Salam aap ki ghazal parhi ye sher acha laga
Ko-e tujhsa na ko-e chahaney wala tujhsa Dil terey baad kisi aur ka kiya ho ke rahey
aur baqi jahan tak aqeel sahib naen baat ki hai shakaib jalali ki to janab ho kay rahay maen mehz ya illat karnay say shakaib jalali ka lehja nahen banta
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 1:30:10 GMT 5
razi bhai ye ziyadati hai aap naen mujhay bhai bana diya kher bahut hausla howa aap ki daad daikh kar maen abhi aap ki nazm ki tareef kar hi hata tha kay aap ka message yahan aa gaya inshaAllah mulaqat hoti rahay gi yahan bhi aur mushairon maen ya kabhi multan aana howa to salamat rahaen Allah Saeen hafiz
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 1:22:37 GMT 5
muhtram bradram razi ud din razi sahib itna taweel naam likhnay ki waja aap ko ye batana hai kay aap yahan razi bhai kay taur par mashoor haen jo kay sarasar ziyadati hai is maen koi shaq nahen kay aap hamaray baray bhai haen lekin itnay baray bhi nahen kay aap say jeenay ka haq cheen liya jaey bay takalluf guftago is liey kay aap say sachi muhabbat hai aur aap ki ye nazm parh kay muhabbat maen mazeed izafa howa kiya achi bunnat kiya umda band bandhay aap naen shayad aisi hi takhleeqat ata hoti haen (Razi bhai kiya aap ata par yaqeen rakhtay haen ?) han aik baat nazm abhi taweel bhi ho sakti hai kiyon kay is ka andaz abhi do band aur mangta hai us ki waja shayad ye hai kay is ka perhan ghazal jesa hai aur ho bhi kiyon na jis shair ki ghazal ka sher ye ho Ham aisay lashkari is jang maen hathiyar kiyon dalaen kay aisa kaam to apna sipa salaar kartay haen us ki nazm par ghazal ki chaoon kiyon na ho meray nazdeek to wohi nazm suhagan ho gi jis par ghazal ka hath ho ga aur aap ko bahut bahut mubarak ho aap aik sada suhagan nazm kay khaliq hamesha ki tarha ban gaey Allah Saeen jis naen aap ko takhleeq kiya hai sab tareefaen usi ki ijazat chahoon ga hamesha khush rahaen Allah Saeen Hafiz Muhammad Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 0:56:39 GMT 5
muhtram Dosto Adaab apni site www.nadeembhabha.com par kaam kar raha tha kay gogle par nadeembhabha likh kay enter kiya to yahan tak puhncha yahan aa kar dekha kay bahut say dost maujood haen jin maen awal ul zikr Razi ud Din Razi aur Rafi Tabassum jin say meri mulaqaataen bhi haen aur sath kai mushairay bhi parhay phir yahan Uzair ko dekha ji khush howa rafta rafta Sunita tak puhncha aur aaj Atif mirza ko bhi pa liya aur bhi bahut say dost hoon gay jo is jaldi maen kay pehlay membership lay loon phir dhondoon ga abhi tak nahen milay agar wo mujhay daikh laen to mujhay zaroor bataen so aap tamam loogon ki nazr bilkul taza ghazal hai meray wastay dua mera ishq mujh ko zarkhez kar gaya mera ishq is liey mutmain sa rehta hoon hai meray sath ab sada mera ishq tujh ko hi mangna nahen aaya mayri jholi to bhar chuka mera ishq mayray kamray ki kaainaat maen aa nazar aaey ga ja ba ja mera ishq sab naen apni salamti mangi maen pukara keh aey Khuda mera ishq is qadar baywafai jaiz hai mayri khatir nahen mara mera ishq aap kay mashwaray baja lekin kiya karon sab say hai juda mera ishq mujh ko manzil nahen mili na sahi tayri khatir hai raasta mera ishq ijazat chahoon ga Allah Saeen Hafiz
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