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Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 26, 2008 11:20:00 GMT 5
ghazal ka wo mizaj jo shakaib kay ki shairi kay zareay asr e hazir tak pohncha us mizaj say nikalna bara mushkil hay aur ye koe aib nahi magar wo log jo shakiab ki ghazal ka mizaj lay kar kisi naeay jahan ki justu mein nikalty he tu aik nia usloob agar hath ata hay tu us ka rang ham saeed sahab ki ghazal mein aik shagoofay kay manind dekh sakty hein jo yaqeenan agay chal kar aik pur kashish phol banay ga hamara sab say ahm masla he usloob aur khialaat ka khoj hay magar is ko samjhnay kay aik arsa darkar hota hay aur ye mizaj saeed sahab ki ghazal mein barai sahoolat kay sath dar aya hay....jahan tak is ghazal ka majmooe mizaj ahy us ko isi paraey mein dekhnay say kae aik lateef jahaan khulty dikhae daytay hein
Tum sulagtey ho gham-e-ishq mein chup-chaap Saeed Warna is rah mein patthar bhi lahoo ro ke rahey
ham tamam ahbaab kay leay ye qareena bais e taqleed ban sakta hay ke is mein itni gunjaish beher hal aik satah par maujood hay.
aqeel
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Post by khalid on Mar 26, 2008 16:38:09 GMT 5
bohot khoob saeed sb! daad qubool keejey!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 27, 2008 0:11:25 GMT 5
Eik taza kavish doston ki nazr...... Ishq hasil ho to ek roz kashish kho ke rahey Kiya zroori hai meri jaan tu meri ho ke rahey
Hum se be-samt musafir ka bhrosa kiya hai Rah kho-e to kabhi shauq-e-safar kho ke rahey
Jab hamein dasht-e-judae ka safar karna hai Dil tujhey dard ke do-raahey pe kiyun roke rahey
Khaak milti hamein wehshat ki dawa doori mein Faasley dil mein nei fasl-e-junoon bo ke rahey
Ko-e tujhsa na ko-e chahaney wala tujhsa Dil terey baad kisi aur ka kiya ho ke rahey
Tum sulagtey ho gham-e-ishq mein chup-chaap Saeed Warna is rah mein patthar bhi lahoo ro ke raheyBohat Khoob Saeed sahiob
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Post by saeed on Mar 27, 2008 7:58:01 GMT 5
ghazal ka wo mizaj jo shakaib kay ki shairi kay zareay asr e hazir tak pohncha us mizaj say nikalna bara mushkil hay aur ye koe aib nahi magar wo log jo shakiab ki ghazal ka mizaj lay kar kisi naeay jahan ki justu mein nikalty he tu aik nia usloob agar hath ata hay tu us ka rang ham saeed sahab ki ghazal mein aik shagoofay kay manind dekh sakty hein jo yaqeenan agay chal kar aik pur kashish phol banay ga hamara sab say ahm masla he usloob aur khialaat ka khoj hay magar is ko samjhnay kay aik arsa darkar hota hay aur ye mizaj saeed sahab ki ghazal mein barai sahoolat kay sath dar aya hay....jahan tak is ghazal ka majmooe mizaj ahy us ko isi paraey mein dekhnay say kae aik lateef jahaan khulty dikhae daytay hein Tum sulagtey ho gham-e-ishq mein chup-chaap Saeed Warna is rah mein patthar bhi lahoo ro ke rahey ham tamam ahbaab kay leay ye qareena bais e taqleed ban sakta hay ke is mein itni gunjaish beher hal aik satah par maujood hay. aqeel Malik ssab, aapne ghazal parhi, pasand ki aur itney khubsoorat alfaz mein itni mohabbat se apne khiyalat ka izhar kiya....meri buhut hosla afzai hooe. nawazish. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 27, 2008 7:58:38 GMT 5
bohot khoob saeed sb! daad qubool keejey! Khalid saab, buhut shukriya aapka. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 27, 2008 7:59:48 GMT 5
waah saeed sahab bahut pyaari si ghazal kahi hai aap ne.sabhi ashaar achhe lage khaas taur par yeh vaale
Jab hamein dasht-e-judae ka safar karna hai Dil tujhey dard ke do-raahey pe kiyun roke rahey
daad qubuul karen.
Sunita jee, buhhut nawazish aapki! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 27, 2008 8:00:21 GMT 5
Eik taza kavish doston ki nazr...... Ishq hasil ho to ek roz kashish kho ke rahey Kiya zroori hai meri jaan tu meri ho ke rahey
Hum se be-samt musafir ka bhrosa kiya hai Rah kho-e to kabhi shauq-e-safar kho ke rahey
Jab hamein dasht-e-judae ka safar karna hai Dil tujhey dard ke do-raahey pe kiyun roke rahey
Khaak milti hamein wehshat ki dawa doori mein Faasley dil mein nei fasl-e-junoon bo ke rahey
Ko-e tujhsa na ko-e chahaney wala tujhsa Dil terey baad kisi aur ka kiya ho ke rahey
Tum sulagtey ho gham-e-ishq mein chup-chaap Saeed Warna is rah mein patthar bhi lahoo ro ke raheyBohat Khoob Saeed sahiob shukriya Rafi saheb.
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Post by waqaar on Mar 27, 2008 14:38:04 GMT 5
"warnah is raah maiN patth~ar bh~ii lahoo ro keh rahay"
vaah vaah! bahut khoob Sa'eed SaaHeb. kYa Zaberdast ghazal kahi hay aapnay.
mat^le' maiN aapkay khaYaal say bilkul ma'mooli sa ei'taraaz hay. woh Yeh keh 'iShq maiN haaSil Ya laa-haaSil ki to baat hii nahiiN hota, maHabbat maiN hoti hay. magar Yeh meri raaye hay, harf-e-aakhir nah jaaniYay gaa.
Shukriah!
Dh~airoN daad qubooliYay!
waQaar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 28, 2008 1:20:17 GMT 5
saeed sahib hamaysha ki tara yeh aik murassa ghazal hy khaas taur par dill ko choo lia aap k matlay nay thanx razi
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 11:29:40 GMT 5
Muhtram Saeed Sahib Salam aap ki ghazal parhi ye sher acha laga
Ko-e tujhsa na ko-e chahaney wala tujhsa Dil terey baad kisi aur ka kiya ho ke rahey
aur baqi jahan tak aqeel sahib naen baat ki hai shakaib jalali ki to janab ho kay rahay maen mehz ya illat karnay say shakaib jalali ka lehja nahen banta
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Post by saeed on Mar 29, 2008 13:37:11 GMT 5
"warnah is raah maiN patth~ar bh~ii lahoo ro keh rahay"
vaah vaah! bahut khoob Sa'eed SaaHeb. kYa Zaberdast ghazal kahi hay aapnay.
mat^le' maiN aapkay khaYaal say bilkul ma'mooli sa ei'taraaz hay. woh Yeh keh 'iShq maiN haaSil Ya laa-haaSil ki to baat hii nahiiN hota, maHabbat maiN hoti hay. magar Yeh meri raaye hay, harf-e-aakhir nah jaaniYay gaa.
Shukriah!
Dh~airoN daad qubooliYay!
waQaar Waqar saheb, Buhut nawazish aapki. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 29, 2008 13:38:35 GMT 5
saeed sahib hamaysha ki tara yeh aik murassa ghazal hy khaas taur par dill ko choo lia aap k matlay nay thanx razi Razi bhai, buhut shukriya aapka!!! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 29, 2008 14:04:27 GMT 5
Muhtram Saeed Sahib Salam aap ki ghazal parhi ye sher acha laga Ko-e tujhsa na ko-e chahaney wala tujhsa Dil terey baad kisi aur ka kiya ho ke rahey aur baqi jahan tak aqeel sahib naen baat ki hai shakaib jalali ki to janab ho kay rahay maen mehz ya illat karnay say shakaib jalali ka lehja nahen banta Nadeem saheb, sher pasan aaya, nawazish! Rahi baat Shukeb Jalali saheb aur unke lehje ki to....meri badqismati yeh hai ke na sirf wo meri pedayesh ke saal he wafat pa gaye the...balkeh mein aaj tak unka koi majmooa nahen parh saka. sirf do teen ghazloon ki shanasai hai..... Malik saab ki mohabbat hai ke unhen mujh talib-e-ilm ki shaeri pasad aayi. warna her khan ka apna lehja hota hai...
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Post by sunita on Mar 30, 2008 23:09:33 GMT 5
Saeed sahab, aap to hamesha hi bahut achha likhte hain, ghazal ho ya nazm.iss ghazal ke yuN to sabhi ashaar achhe hain, mujhe yeh bahut pasand aaye. Jab hamein dasht-e-judae ka safar karna hai Dil tujhey dard ke do-raahey pe kiyun roke rahey Khaak milti hamein wehshat ki dawa doori mein Faasley dil mein nei fasl-e-junoon bo ke rahey daad qubuul kareN.
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Post by saeed on Mar 31, 2008 8:19:06 GMT 5
Saeed sahab, aap to hamesha hi bahut achha likhte hain, ghazal ho ya nazm.iss ghazal ke yuN to sabhi ashaar achhe hain, mujhe yeh bahut pasand aaye. Jab hamein dasht-e-judae ka safar karna hai Dil tujhey dard ke do-raahey pe kiyun roke rahey Khaak milti hamein wehshat ki dawa doori mein Faasley dil mein nei fasl-e-junoon bo ke rahey daad qubuul kareN. Sunita saheba behad nawazish aapki. saeed
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