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Post by ramishjaan on May 22, 2007 16:22:34 GMT 5
AOA azeez shahkar bhai ap ka tafseeli tabsra apni adna kawish par dekh kar ek khushi ka ehsas howa ke mere qari mujhe sirf ankh se nahi dil o damagh se bhi mehsos karte hain ......................
ap ne likha ke ap is ghazal par kuch apni socho se qemti alfaz likhe ge me bohat mamnon hoN ga agar meri kisi tehrer ko yeh izat bakhshi gai to ........................................................
shakar bhai jese ap ne kaha ke jo shaer ap ko bohat pasand aya ghazal ka wo darmeyan me hota ja maqta banta to yaqenan ap ki soch me wo khobsorat lagta me itefaq karo ga ap se magar mere sath masala yeh he shakar bhai ke me ghazal ko jese us ki amad hoti he wese hi rehne deta hon bohat kam kabhi me ne koi alfaz ki tandili ja ishaar ki jaghe tabdeel ki ho ja us waqt jab koi ouzan ja behr ki ghalti reh jaye warna meri koshish yehi hoti he ke jsi tarha amad hoi he ghazal usi husn me qayem rahe umeed he ap meri is ghustakho ko maaf farma de ge ap ki mohabato ka mamnon ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 22, 2007 16:14:24 GMT 5
bohat Khoobsoorat ghazal Ramish ji daad qabool farmaiay
lout aao ge tum chalo man liya
dil par qabuo magar rahe ga keya
in do misrooN par zra daubara ghaur farma lejiay ga[/quote]
AOA mohtran dr sahib bohat bohat shukriya hazoor ke aj ap ki tarf se mujhe islah ke liye bhi nishandahi ki gai bohat mamnon hon hazoor ap ka jawab dene me takheer is liye hoi ke kuch masrofiyat hain aj kal jin ki wajha se teim kam kam milta he nett ka ..........
dr sahib me is waqt bhi bohat jaldi me hon magar ap ne jin do misro ki taraf ishara kiya me INSHALLA un ko dkeho ga jaha tak meri naqus aqal kal karti he maqte ke jo dosra misra he wo ese tha
magar tapyping me pa ki jagha par likha geya .. DIl pa qabu magar rahe ga keya
dosre misre ko me mazeed dekho ga INSHALLA our jo behtar sorat hoi jaldi kar ke ap ki khidmat me pesh karo ga ap ki mohabato ka bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 19, 2007 1:07:45 GMT 5
AOA bazm ke ache sathion aj phir ek taza gahzal le kar ap ki khidmat me hazar hon ap ki qeemti ara ka muntazir ramishjaanDil ke zeer e asar rahe ga keya tu mera umr bhar rahe ga keya ghar ke hote howe bhi jan e jahaN Admi dar badar rahe ga keya bhol to jaoN main tujhe aye dost pass mere magar rahe ga keya ghar sa mahol hi nahi ghar me esi sourat me ghar rahe ga keya lout aao ge tum chalo man liya mosam e gul magar rahe ga keya keya tayaun na ho ga manzil ka you hi jari safar rahe ga keya apne hontoN ko sii to loN ramish dil par qabuo magar rahe ga keya
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Post by ramishjaan on May 19, 2007 1:43:15 GMT 5
AOA khalid bhai wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lutf ageya our dili jazbat par jese kisi massihya ne marham rakh diya ho yeh kam ap ke qate ne kar diya karoro pakistanion ke dil ki awaz beyan ki hain ap ne meri janib se khlos bhari dad qabol ki jiye waslam ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:29:35 GMT 5
AOA zaamin jee khobsorat our hasas jazbat par mabni tehreer ke liye dad qabol kijiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:20:51 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee MSHALLA bohat ache bohat umda dili dad qabol ki jiye abhi taswarti pholl pesh hain asal phool kisi our din behjo do ga ( lol) waslam ap ka mukhlsi ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:31:13 GMT 5
AOA zaamin ji meri janib se bhi dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan [/color]
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 14, 2008 2:12:53 GMT 5
AOA muhtrama kanwal jee bazm ki rahon par ek bar phir ap ki khidmat me hazir hon meri janib se is khobsorat ghazal ke liye dad ke bohat sare phool ap ki nazr ALLHA kare ap ke qalm me mazeed husn our nikhar peeda ho ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:26:45 GMT 5
AOA maya jee aik bar phir bazm ki raho me hazir hon ap ki khidmat me .... mukhtasir si nazm parhi magar wasee tareen maanioN ke daftar hi khulte chale ge shayd maya jee esi shandar alfaz ke bare me hi kaha jata he darya ko koze me band karna .........
bohat hi khobsorat nazm kahi he be shumar dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 19, 2007 15:42:10 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee khobsorat ghazal ke liye dad qabol ki jiye waslam ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on May 19, 2007 15:47:58 GMT 5
AOA sunita didi jee kesi hain ap dekh li jiye me apna khas mote mote shesho wala chashma laga kar aya hon ke kahin didi ki koi ghazal reh na jaye lol didi umda ghazal ke liye bohat sari sad qabol ki jiye waslam ap ka bhai ramishjaan ( ho sake to mujhe pm me us bewafa ka name bhi bata di jiye ga ;D ;D)
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