zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 9, 2008 21:56:26 GMT 5
ishq ka shiiriiN samar ai dosta daagh-e-dil,daag-e-jigar ai dosta
ghum-shudah ham shahr ke akhbaar ke haashiye par yooN khabar ai dosta
raakh ab chashm-e-haziiN jis kii liye waqt vo bhii,thaa sharar ai dosta
hijr men mushkil na thaa marna koyii laazimi jeena magar ai dosta
aadamii na aadmaii ki zaat yaaN sooraton ka yeh nagar ai dosta
andhiyon se juujhata TooTa mera baap bhii masl-e-shajar ai dosta
ek din manzil talak le jaa’egi TeRii meRii yeh dagar ai dosta
aasmaaN par khaab ke, kab ke mere bujh gaye shams-o-qamar ai dosta
go kinaara bhii nahiin waajib ise zindagi lekin bhanwar ai dosta
hai ziya bhii ,to zarar bhii, aankh ko husn ka tere hunar ai dosta
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 14, 2008 15:04:56 GMT 5
wah zamin sahib bohat umda mazameen hain is ghazal k tahnx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 14, 2008 22:58:59 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 22, 2008 2:36:22 GMT 5
wah zamin sahib bohat umda mazameen hain is ghazal k tahnx razi mamnoon hoon,razi saahib zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 22, 2008 2:36:47 GMT 5
shukriya,tabassum saahib zaamin
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:31:13 GMT 5
AOA zaamin ji meri janib se bhi dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan [/color]
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:13:34 GMT 5
waah waah bout zaberdast Thanks Uzair
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 30, 2008 0:19:28 GMT 5
zaamin ji aap ki yeh ghazal doosari site par bhi padi thi, aur daad bhi di thi.ek baar phir se is khoobsoorat ghazal par dheron daad qubuul hoN.khush rahen. shukriya,sunita di khush rahen zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 30, 2008 0:19:54 GMT 5
AOA zaamin ji meri janib se bhi dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan [/color] bahut bahut shukriya,ramish ji zaamin
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 30, 2008 0:20:49 GMT 5
waah waah bout zaberdast Thanks Uzair shukriya ,uzir ji zaamin
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Post by kanwal on Feb 13, 2008 3:38:58 GMT 5
ishq ka shiiriiN samar ai dosta daagh-e-dil,daag-e-jigar ai dosta
ghum-shudah ham shahr ke akhbaar ke haashiye par yooN khabar ai dosta
raakh ab chashm-e-haziiN jis kii liye waqt vo bhii,thaa sharar ai dosta
hijr men mushkil na thaa marna koyii laazimi jeena magar ai dosta
aadamii na aadmaii ki zaat yaaN sooraton ka yeh nagar ai dosta
andhiyon se juujhata TooTa mera baap bhii masl-e-shajar ai dosta
ek din manzil talak le jaa’egi TeRii meRii yeh dagar ai dosta
aasmaaN par khaab ke, kab ke mere bujh gaye shams-o-qamar ai dosta
go kinaara bhii nahiin waajib ise zindagi lekin bhanwar ai dosta
hai ziya bhii ,to zarar bhii, aankh ko husn ka tere hunar ai dosta Zamin jee bohat khubsoorat khayaal par dheroN daad ke phooL aap ki nazR ,...
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 17:34:57 GMT 5
Wah kia ghazal hai.
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