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Post by kanwal on Jan 14, 2008 4:39:46 GMT 5
Aik ghazL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,... Bujhi aag ko phir hawa de gaya woH Mujhe ishQ ki intiha de gaya woH
Yeh dil chahta tha use bhool jaaoN Magar dil garifta sadaa de gaya woH
Khushi bhi milli, gham ke darya bhi mujh ko Ajab do rukhi ik adaa de gaya woH
Jisse bhool sakta nahiN dil kabhi bhi Kari tar kari sazaa de gaya woH
K khushiyaN raheiN ab muqadar tumhara Yeh jaate hue bas DUA de gaya woH
KaNwal aaj meri gali se guzar kar Kahaani ko phir ibtidaa de gaya woH
Yeh kaisa tha saaya tumhara kaNwal kaRre din meiN tum ko daghaa de gaya woH
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 14, 2008 14:39:52 GMT 5
tamaam ashaar khoobsoorat hain aur khushi ho rahi hy k tum kitni rawan dawan pooetry kar rahi ho aakhri shair k pehlay misray main koi aik aadh lafz reh gia hy usay daykh lo bohat see daad thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 14, 2008 23:01:12 GMT 5
wahhhhh Bohat Khoob Kanwal ji
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 15, 2008 20:46:34 GMT 5
Masha Allah! Kanwal jee app nay kamal ki ghazal likhi hai! Bahut pasand aayee, kia rawani hai. Bus yeh durust kar lijeay:-
Kari say kari tar sazaa de gaya woH
Yeh kaisa tha saaya tumhara kaNwal jee!
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Post by manu1979 on Jan 19, 2008 19:48:07 GMT 5
Aik ghazL aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,... Bujhi aag ko phir hawa de gaya woH Mujhe ishQ ki intiha de gaya woH
Yeh dil chahta tha use bhool jaaoN Magar dil garifta sadaa de gaya woH
Khushi bhi milli, gham ke darya bhi mujh ko Ajab do rukhi ik adaa de gaya woH
Jisse bhool sakta nahiN dil kabhi bhi Kari tar kari sazaa de gaya woH
K khushiyaN raheiN ab muqadar tumhara Yeh jaate hue bas DUA de gaya woH
KaNwal aaj meri gali se guzar kar Kahaani ko phir ibtidaa de gaya woH
Yeh kaisa tha saaya tumhara kaNwal kaRre din meiN tum ko daghaa de gaya woHkanwal jee aaj aap ki doosari ghazal padhi waah waaha mashaallah kyaa tarakki kar li hai aap ne khuda kare aap yunhe likhate rahe aur allah aap ko aur hunarmand kare,bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aap ne dil khush ho gaya,dil se mubarakbaad qubool kare aap ko aur sunididi ko dhoondhane ke mehnat kaamiyaab ho gayi yahi lagta hai aap dono ko padhane ke baad. yunhee likhatee rahe regards manu
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 25, 2008 11:20:51 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee MSHALLA bohat ache bohat umda dili dad qabol ki jiye abhi taswarti pholl pesh hain asal phool kisi our din behjo do ga ( lol) waslam ap ka mukhlsi ramishjaan
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Post by uzair143 on Jan 26, 2008 12:41:50 GMT 5
very nice kanwal baji bout zabersast Uzair
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 18:10:03 GMT 5
Acchi kavish agar aap durust kar leteeN tau achcha tha.....
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:41:23 GMT 5
tamaam ashaar khoobsoorat hain aur khushi ho rahi hy k tum kitni rawan dawan pooetry kar rahi ho aakhri shair k pehlay misray main koi aik aadh lafz reh gia hy usay daykh lo bohat see daad thanx razi Thank you razi jee ,... Sorry main pehley hi kar leti par hoti to karti na ,.... Ab aayee hooN to Inshallah jald karti hooN aakhri misre ko sahi ,...
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:41:44 GMT 5
wahhhhh Bohat Khoob Kanwal ji Thank you jee ,...
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:42:45 GMT 5
Masha Allah! Kanwal jee app nay kamal ki ghazal likhi hai! Bahut pasand aayee, kia rawani hai. Bus yeh durust kar lijeay:- Kari say kari tar sazaa de gaya woH
Yeh kaisa tha saaya tumhara kaNwal jee!Jaan kar khushi hui ke aapne taseeH farmaayee, Aap ki tah e dil se shukr guzaar rahoongi aur taseeH kar looNgi ,... Sabr ,...
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 22, 2008 1:54:16 GMT 5
kanwal jee....sab say pahly to itani khoobsurat poetry per daad qabool kijiay ,,,,, ap nay mere poetry ko sraaha aor mujhy wellcome kaha ,, phool bhaijay ,,kaisay shukria adda karun...,, dair sey jawab kailiay muazratkhawh hun,,,keh ALLAH nay apnay ghar kay deedaar ki saadat kailiay bulaawa bhaija tha.. aor baad main kuch professional masrufiat aarray ain..ap ki yeh hosla afzai jari rahi to insha-allah main tecknique khamiun per qaboo pa lungi
again thanks
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